SS || The One With The Plot (part 5, page 9) - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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LOL, i love the title of this ff..lawls friends..
anyways, hm so geet is conspiring with someone..
cool..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ooh! such a sweet twist! chalo atleast FF main hi hamari manokamna puri hogi!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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interesting SS... waiting to read wat gonna happen next.
please add me to the PM list.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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great ss......
the first part was really good.....
waiting for the next parts!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Radzie, add me to ur pm list.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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*facepalm* I forgot I had posted this. Whoops? So I shall reply to comments and post the update later today? As for those of you asking about MHT, I think I'll be going on hiatus for a bit because I don't want to lose the essence of the story, and I have no inspiration. I don't want to force anything. 😃 Enjoy this in the meantime!

@ Meera: Yay, you didn't reserve! And thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I was iffy about the present tense thing, but you people seem to like it so yay! 😆 Love you!

@ ash08: Eh, MHT *hides* I'm stuck a little. Trying to get back the inspiration, but it will take awhile. Sorry. I'm glad you're enjoying this though! I was definitely hoping for a proper wrap up to Rajveer's storyline in the show, and with Geet's entrance I thought that was it. sigh. Another wasted opportunity by Ekta. And no, Geet doesn't know how Raj feels about her. They are not a couple here. I'm so glad you like the present tense! I wasn't sure about it. *hides* Thank you Ashie!

@ Aashifa: HI! *waves back* I'm alright. :) I'm glad you're enjoying this! And I always did think Geet was a smart character, so glad she never went negative. :) Will definitely PM you!

@ sonia7: Thank you! Will PM you. :)

@ nisha1984: Thank you!

@ Aaliyah01: Thanks, and sure. :)

@ Yaz: Thanks, glad you liked it. Shall PM you. :)

@ Fatima: Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it! and you've been added! :)

@ Tadashi: HI! haha, I couldn't think of anything else at the moment. So that stuck. :) I love Friends, so it worked. haha. Your questions shall be answered, soon. And the shot is only four parts long, don't expect too much! 😆 you're on the list, no worries. :)

@ lovely_lady: Thank you! Friends is AWESOME! yup, she's conspiring. :)

@ amu142: Thank you, glad you're enjoying it.

@ Nitty2910: Thank you! added. :)

@ v_nikhita18: Thank you!

The update shall come in about an hour. I'm actually in class now. *hides*

Love,
Radz

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Woo Anu awsomeee Job loved it so much. Great job. Do PM me.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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yaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrr......pls updates soon........do pm me when u update..................
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thank you! Added, and updating now. :)

Love,
Radz

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Posted: 15 years ago
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I was supposed to update this yesterday, I know, but my laptop battery died on me. :( And I couldn't find a plug point til I actually got home, and then I barely got time to use the laptop because I had to study. Which I still do, but I thought I'd update first. Hopefully, I remember to update this sooner, because it's actually complete. 😆

Enjoy part 2!


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"Arre Geet, tu yahaan?" Gayatri looks so happy to see her. If she were anyone else, she would feel guilty for deceiving the woman but considering that Gayatri had a hand in her best friend's misery she is hard pressed to keep her disgust from showing on her face.

Geet plasters a smile on her face. "Namastey," she folds her hand. "Is Meher home?"

The smile on Gayatri's face drops. Geet wonders how no one else sees the hatred this sham of a woman has for the Maans. "Meher?" she repeats, voice hard, but just barely. "Meher kyun?"

"Woh -" Geet falters before remembering what she had heard about the younger woman. "Woh maine sunna tha ke Meher ko catering ke bare mein kafi kuch pata hai toh main socha ke main uski madad lu."

"Acha," Gayatri nods, though there is a wary look in her eyes. She calls for Meher. Geet's heart goes out for the girl, whose eyes hold pain at the thinly veiled anger directed at her.

"Meher," she grins at her best friend's younger sister. "Will you come with me to help, please?"

Under the hawk-eyed gaze of her mother-in-law, Meher can only nod. Geet enthusiastically pulls her out of the house. Once they're in her car, she drops the hyper act. Meher embraces the quiet, not asking any questions until they pass the dhabba she mentioned to Gayatri.

"Wasn't that it?" Meher asks, baffled.

"Yup," Geet casts a glance at her passenger. "But we're not going there."

"Kya?" Meher is utterly flummoxed. "Toh phir hum kaha jaa rahey hain?"

"Preet's office," Geet answers. "I need to talk to the two of you." She turns into a back lane, having figured out this short cut long ago. "It's about Prem."

Meher opens her mouth to ask more, but Geet stops her. She informs Meher that she only wants to tell this story once. Meher settles back into her seat, trying to keep a handle on her curiousity.

Geet's lips curl upwards when she hears Meher's muttered 'Finally!" when they pull into the carpark. She debates taking her time to park the car but casts away that thought just as easily. It is imperative that she disclose the full story to Meher as Preet as soon as possible, because she needs their help.

They can stop her marriage to Prem Juneja. They can stop her becoming the new Juneja bahu. They can stop her taking Heer's place.

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Do let me know what you think! I won't be updating till whoever reserves unreserves, so don't reserve! 😆

Love,
Radz

Edited by Anhdara13 - 15 years ago

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