SS || The One With The Plot (part 5, page 9)

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Anisha Jayakumar

@anishajk99

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Posted: 15 years ago

#51

HEY I JUST FINISHED READING UR SS............REALLY LOVED IT........HOPE CHAHAT WILL REUNITE PREMEER........PLS ADD ME TO UR PM LIST........HOPE UL CONT ASAP........

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-Garima-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#52

Radz Di!!!!!! *Big Jadoo ki jhappi* 🤗

I knowwww! I missed you too soo much!!! But I'm glad you're back on the forum! 😊 Well actually the thing was, I did come on the forum, but I was a "silent member" cuz school has kept me SOOOO busy this year! :( It sucks, and on top of that I've joined after school sports, so i come home late too. *sigh* Kya karein? Life is life. haha 😛

Awww! Thats so sweet, you updated cuz of my comment! Teehee. I feel special now! 😳 😆 Can't wait to read the last part!! =]

And I shall defnitely PM you right after I post this comment! Byeeee!

Love you!

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Nitty

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Posted: 15 years ago

#53

interesting update.. plz continue sson.

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

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Posted: 15 years ago

#54

to those who have commented: thank you so much! shall reply individually soon!

to those of you who have yet to edit your spots: I will not update with the final part until the 'reserved' bits are 'unreserved' so get cracking! 😉

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Gargee

@Gargee

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Posted: 15 years ago

#55

gosh its good to be back!😃😃
😃hey i've become a big fan of yours!!!!!!!!!! superb SS!!!!👏👏👏
👏i just had to comment and cudnt stand waiting so here i am!!!!!
please please please update soon!!!!
love
Gargee😳

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

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Posted: 15 years ago

#56

@ Fatima: thank you! and I don't see an edit. :P haha.

@ v_nikhita18: thank you! and I don't show that, sorry. 😆

@ mandy60: thanks!

@ Aashi: ooh, hope your exams go great! I'm sure you'll do amazing. (: I'll be waiting for that comment then! thanks!

@ minaz296: thank you!

@ Aaliyah01: thanks!

@ nisha1984: thanks!

@ --pie-- : still waiting (:

@ sonia7: thanks! and you're most welcome.

@ anishajk99: thanks. you've been added. (:

@ Gari: ooh, that jhappi felt nice. XD life sucks. oh rather, school sucks. 😆 I got your PM! dude, PM ME BACK! I miss you, again. ): I'm glad you comment here, at least that way I know you're alive! take care k? love you! *huggles* and thanks for the comment. (:

@ Nitty2910: thank you!

@ Gargee: thanks so much!

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

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Posted: 15 years ago

#57

I felt horrible that I was withholding the final part from everyone. So, it's a bit anticlimatic, but whatev. It's done, over. Thanks for coming along this ride with me, and don't forget to tell me what you think!

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Everything is in place. Everything has been done. Today, the truth will be revealed.

For the past two weeks or so, the schemers have been manipulating Prem and Heer to remember the love they both fought for so many times. And Chahat has been helping them. Prem and Heer will do anything for their Chahat.

Still, the marriage has not been broken. Tonight, it will be. Geet is set to do her part. Maya has invited Ashlesha. Harman has left the lawyer Gayatri had hired in Rajveer's custody.

Everything is ready.

The party begins, and no one notices Meher slip away. The music stops suddenly. Geet grips Heer's hand as the lights go off. She places Chahat's hand into it. She knows Chahat has Prem's hand.

She makes her way carefully to the light switch. Meher is waiting there. At her signal, the lights come back on.

Rajveer is standing in the middle of the room with Gayatri's lawyer. Lalit sees the shock on his wife's face.

Gayatri's plans begin to unravel slowly. The truth about Veera and Nihaal comes out first. Gayatri's surprise is genuine. Geet almost feels sorry for her. Almost.

Then her truth comes out, slowly, bit by bit. The lawyer narrates the events precisely. Prem and Heer would shatter, Geet knows, if not for Chahat.

Maya then plays a video. Ashlesha watches herself spill everything on screen. She tries to run away but is stopped by a stern Preet.

Heer lets go of Chahat's hand. Geet's heart stops. Their plan cannot fail. Tears slip down her cheeks. This proves to be Prem's breaking point.

"Maine kaha na ke jab tum ro thi ho to mujhe acha nahi lagta," he wipes her tears.

They embrace, and Geet heaves a sigh of relief. Preet wolf-whistles.

Heer looks abashed. Geet grins. Heer tries to apologise but Geet just rolls her eyes.

"Heer, I had a hand in this too," she comments dryly.

Lalit announces that the wedding will still happen the next day. Geet catches the twinkle in his eyes and the slight wink he throws her. Everyone else panics.

"Tomorrow," he announces, "will be the wedding of Prem Juneja. Tomorrow will be the day when my bahu comes home. Tomorrow will be the day Prem and his Heer reunite forever."

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once again, thank you so much for bearing with me as I wrote this. it meant a lot.