Journey Of Undefined Relation *Discontinued PG-28*

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366791

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Posted: 15 years ago

#51

Great start

Thanx for the PM

Cant wait to read more

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441240

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Posted: 15 years ago

#52

short but great.....👏👏👏....
can't wait 4 da next part.................

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Neha

@Pumpkinn

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Posted: 15 years ago

#53

nice start !

loved it !

waiting for next !
update soon !

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KaShxoxo

@KaShxoxo

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Posted: 15 years ago

#54

Woww, that was good!
Can't wait to read what happens next!
Can u plz pm when u update?
Thanks! 😃

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Harpreet Randhawa

@-BabyCupid-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#55

Hay that's awesome and can u plzz pm when u update
update soon thanks

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meeshti jain

@meeshti.

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#56

hiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

nice update

waiting for a long update

pls update soon

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saranya

@nehara

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#57

hey....
thanks 4 the pm...
awesome update...
cnt wait 4 the next 1...
pls update soon...

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SongsOf_Silence

@SongsOf_Silence

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#58

hey ash and maha! 🤗 such a small update?? i want a bigger one next time okay!😛 this one was really nice.. the way u decribed her pain was too good... 👍🏼 it is always like dis only no? the one thing u want to cum true never does so and wen the opposite of it happens a person always wishes for to be a dream and not reality.... coz reality is always harsh..sumthing we hate to face...😊wonder wat happened between prem and heer and y did they seperate! do continue soon but wid a long part!😉 thnx for the pm!

love

hiba

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...Nikhita...

@...Nikhita...

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Posted: 15 years ago

#59

great start.....wonder why heer is so sad......

waiting for ph flashback.....

and yes it was tooooo small!

continue soon!!!!

and thanks for the pm

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Fatima

@-Fatima-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#60

hello girls
it was really nice but tooo short.
yaar mujhe toh story bhi samajh nahi aarahi.*confused face*
ab agar jaldi aur long update na ki toh mujhse bura koi nahi hoga 😈.
luv
fatima