Journey Of Undefined Relation *Discontinued PG-28*

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JOURNEY OF UNDEFINED RELATION

Hey guys its me again back with a short story but this gonna be a merged invention😆. Had lot of requests for FF or SS but seriously I am not a person to handle a ff regular updates so I am happy as shot writer only but then thought of SS as concept propped in the mind so here it is.
Ashlesha
hi guys i am here again with a ss but it is going to be a merger invention.i don't know whether you all will like it or not but in my opinion it will be a different story.so we are hoping and waiting for your good comments.
Ayesha (Maha)
TEASER

She was barefooted walking on an isolated, lonely road, actually was dragging her legs as she lost her ability to walk, to think, to speak, everything she lost everything, in matter of few hours her life turned upside down, and she helplessly begged for mercy but there was no one to listen to her, to hear her plea. People closed their doors and windows to prevent outside storm and thunder to come inside and messes up their life even she was one of them but don't know which window pane or door was left open through which that storm entered, scattered her life shattered her and then went. Tired not from sauntering but with process of realizing the calamity that had befallen her, she crashed onto the ground, minute particles and sharp stones piercing into her knees, making a fresh flow of blood from her knees but she did not care. Suddenly then it started to rain heavily, thunder was about to begin and lighting already making great sounds and that too such fearful sounds which can make anyone to jump out of their skins but still in all these voices she could only recall her pleadings for her dear life, to spare her.
ASHLESHA
SO guys here it was, do tell us what you feel about it. And if you like then don't forget to press "LIKE" tab and a comment. If get good chunk of response will try to post first update soon as possible

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1. Teaser Pg-1
2.Character sketch Pg-1
1st Shot Pg-7
2nd SHOT Pg-12
3rd SHOT Pg-20
Edited by Ashlesha09 - 15 years ago
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CHARACTER SKETCH


Heer Maan- A young bubbly girl live with her parents and is a only child belongs to middle class.she is apple of her parents eyes. Very good in studies, her carrer-her parents dream is passion for her


Prem juneja- Crowned as MR. Perfect of the college.Tall, handsome and very well aware of his personality. 19 year old and elder son of his parents.Dream of every girl and he changes his girls in matter of seconds. A spolit brat by his dad but knows his limits. Very passionate about his career.

Preet juneja- Charming and handsome boy. Younger brother of prem juneja studying with him in the same college. Equally stud for the girls, a big flirt but is very possesive about his girlfriend

Ashlesha Khanna- Cute, Sexy, jovial kinda personality. Every guy is crazy for her but she belongs to preet juneja and knows how to control him, like a baby sister to Prem.

Gayatri juneja- Mother of Prem and Preet juneja.she is caring loving mother for both of them but still very strict in some matters and a very supportive wife but still always argue in maater of her children with her husband.

Lalit juneja-A well known businessman and father of Prem and Preet Juneja.A Busy person but caring father.Always try to fulfill his children demand and needs and played a major role in spoling of his sons.

Edited by maha_k - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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sounds totally diffo
wud appreciate if u continued soon and fast
love you
saba
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Sounds Gr8!!mere bhai bhen ek saath...wow..ab maza ayega..😉

Aqsa tune apni limits ke age sochne wala dhund liya..i think..😆 😆 😉
luv
amreen
Edited by mireen19 - 15 years ago
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Great waiting for the first chapter......

Plzzz PM me when you update
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Heyy Greattttttttt interesting storyyyy
plz when ever u update pm me
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hey nice concept ash... looking forward to read more😊
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awesome


plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon



thanx 4 the pm


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awesome

the concept is great
and i cant wait to read the first chapter so please update soon
thanks for the pm

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