Journey Of Undefined Relation *Discontinued PG-28* - Page 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: crystall

nice start !

loved it !
waiting for next !
update soon !

thanks dear glad u like it😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: harshaitixoxo

Woww, that was good!
Can't wait to read what happens next!
Can u plz pm when u update?
Thanks! 😃

thanks dear😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Happy_pretty

Hay that's awesome and can u plzz pm when u update
update soon thanks

thanks for liking dear will pm u😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#74
thanks dear😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: premeerrock

hey ash and maha! 🤗 Hey hiba🤗 such a small update??I know but blame maha😆😆 i want a bigger one next time okay! you are getting😊😛 this one was really nice..Thankss the way u decribed her pain was too good... 👍🏼glad u liked it it is always like dis only no? the one thing u want to cum true never does so and wen the opposite of it happens a person always wishes for to be a dream and not reality.... coz reality is always harsh..sumthing we hate to face...😊wonder wat happened between prem and heer and y did they seperate! do continue soon but wid a long part!😉 thnx for the pm! well you have to wait to knw if they separated or not or sumthng else happened😆😆, and yeahh who know better than you experiences from 2 FF

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hiba Ashlesha

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Posted: 15 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: nehara

hey....
thanks 4 the pm...
awesome update...
cnt wait 4 the next 1...
pls update soon...

Thankss
updating now only
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: -fsn-

hello girls
it was really nice but tooo short.
yaar mujhe toh story bhi samajh nahi aarahi.*confused face*
ab agar jaldi aur long update na ki toh mujhse bura koi nahi hoga 😈.
luv
fatima

i knw fatty , ho kyun naa I wrote it🤣
i knw but bkame maha, naa samajh tujhe kyun nahi samjh aa rahi hain😡
yess baby posting now n tum toh padh chuki ho😉 so why so curiousity
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: v_nikhita18

great start.....wonder why heer is so sad......

waiting for ph flashback.....
and yes it was tooooo small!
continue soon!!!!
and thanks for the pm

Thankss
well you have to wait fr tht
its on way
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Posted: 15 years ago
#79
2nd SHOT
FLASHBACK

O God help me, a girl pleaded while looking towards the heaven.

She was looking so nervous, but still continously trying her best to calm herself Come-on Heer u are not a child now. She tried to get some confidence by saying this to herself and look around. There were many students around her. they were all chatting ,laughing and flirting. Be brave Heer they won't eat you and tu pehli bar nahi ayi hain collage. she composed herself and started searching for her classroom.But that college was far too big compare to her last one. Ab kya kroon, she muttered as she was failed to find her class and was standing alone.

Should i ask someone,she thought but then change her mind as they may can make fool of her.She thought for another moment and then asked a girl who was standing close to her.

New comer the girl asked in reply and her eyes travelled from head to toe.

Yupz, Heer replied nervously

Ohkkk a smirk appear on that girl's face.Hiii welcome here.I am Naina.I am Heer Maan.After introduction Naina asked some other question regarding her class and course.

Ohh Heer u made a mistake, you have no class today, naina said with a sad look.

What? but it is impossible, heer replied.

No dear actually one of our professor got a heart attack last night,so many classes got cancelled.

But how can,heer tried to say something but she cut her in between ,beleive me Heer,I am serious.

Tohh ab main kya karon she muttured under her breath.

Cummon dear I am here , your new friend.Let me introduce to you my friends.You are new here so give us a chance to welcome you, she said with the most plesant smile on face and then she grabbed her hand and started walking

Listen naina where we are going,she asked her face was expressing her worries and nervousness.

She was going towards college cafe??.

Soon Heer found herself in a lavish room with 90% of college population.
Hey guys meet Miss. Heer, Heer Maan, New in our college, she told everyone.
They all turned around to see her except one person who was relaxing with a cap on his face.

So all lets welcome her in our own style as we do with new commers.she said and in reply a boy jumps on table and start clapping and calling others. hey all come here if you wanna meet our new fellow.

After listening this the other guys also move his hand toward face and remove cap from there.New commer mean Junior. Smirk on his face, arrogance clearly visible but truly a Roman God so girls basically were behing a right guy.Looking stunning in blue jeans , white tee and blue jacket, very innocent and cute by face with velvety hair, caramel coloured eyes and little rugged maintaining his perfect Greek God look

Heer's face expression started changing after watching people getting around,she scold herself mentally for trusting naina blindly.

PB u will only decide naa, someone asked to that guy

He stands up and moves toward her in response first she tried to move behind but failed because of some students behind her and then soon she looked down because of nervousness which was now a fear.

Hey Miss don't worry we are not gonna eat you,he said with smile.He look more hotter when he smiles but at that time she was just hating his smile.

Please let me go,I am getting late,she pleaded in low voice

Getting late for what? he laughed.You cannot leave now dear,he grinned.

So what should I do she asked.

U are going to do a simple task.and and after that you can go anywhere you want babe.

Task what? She was fighting with her tears

Hmm what do you think who is most Handsome guy around you except me.

But, she try to speak but he stopped her

But what but.Hey guys do we have someone with "but" name. he asked and everyone start laughing??.


AYESHA N ASHLESHA

Hi guys.next part is here we hope u all will like it.feel free to criticize it.and plz dont forget to press like tab.waitinggg for ur comments

Edited by maha_k - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#80
reserved just to be the 1st to comment 😆
hey maha & aqsa
already read this so its easy to give comment.
i told u before i really liked it
heer was nervous on the first day of collage never mind me still nervous after 2 years 😳
aww they all start their ragging with her
poor heer but its ok its a start of something good 😛
prem is a bad boy & did i told u i love bad boys like prem 😆.
ok now plz i dont want u all to get heart attack means i m unreaserving my post this soon
i want next part sooooooooooon
update asap
luv
Fatima

Edited by -fsn- - 15 years ago

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