Journey Of Undefined Relation *Discontinued PG-28* - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: nehara

hey guys....
it sounds really interesting....
cnt wait 4 the update...
pls update soon...
and pls add me to ur pm list.... :D

thankss
will surely do
glad u liked it
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: nuptalie

nice😊
wanna see how the story unfolds.

thanks mani😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: meeshti.

hiiiii

sounds intresting and different
do continue
pls update soon

thanks dear😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: crystall

nice concept !

I liked it !
continue soon !
add me to your pm list !

thanks and sure😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45

1st SHOT

She was sitting in the middle of her room trying to figure out what actually happened, was that true or a nightmare which would be over as soon as she will open her eyes. Her eyes were tightly closed as if trying her best to make it a nightmare and not a reality an ugly reality of her life, soon she opened her eyes hoping all the scenario to be faded off as soon as she see this world again but no nothing has changed everything was same, it was not a nightmare it was now the authencity of her life. Hugging her knees she cried, she cried for hours as if her tears would imbue the ugly traces of palpability, in between her hiccups she just asked God again & again Why you do this to me? What I did for which I repent like this? What was my mistake? Why you took it from me, why you made anyone to take it from me? Why.......why ....why.......why, were her only questions which were unanswered even by god.
In between she remembered one of her beautiful day the first day of her college when she met him.
Ashlesha
I know guys it was damn small but was actually wrote in a hurry and was no mood to post today but then thought off why to let you guys wait for long, so here it but promise next one to be pretty good n long😆😆
If u like then do press LIKE tab & comment and free to criticize if you feel like
Edited by Ashlesha09 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
Hey Thnx for the pm
Awesomee updateee she met prem in the collage
cant wait to read more

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Posted: 15 years ago
#47

awesome starting

cant wait for the next part update soon
Edited by sonia7 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
gr8 start...
Can't wait to read the next update!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thanks 4 the pm



update soon



KAmal
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
hey
amazing start...love it...👏 cant wait to read more...continue soon...and add me to the PM list...😊



love
Afreen

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