Meet ff: Jeene ke isharay Part 28 Sept 21,Pg 89 - Page 14

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Posted: 15 years ago
awsome update...its great that meher adjusted herself so well into preet family...waiting for the next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
it ws simply amazing yr!!.....plzzzzz updt sooooon....im in luv wid ur fic!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
gr8 update!
wonder wht shocked meher?
thnx for the pm!
plz. cont. soon....
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Posted: 15 years ago
PART 10


Bauji opened the door and meher went inside with preet behind her. As she entered the house she was shocked to see heer didi sitting on the sofa crying with her maa.chahat was sitting on the other sofa looking lost and scared. Meher rushed to them.

Meher(worried. sits beside heer didi): didi app yahan? didi kya hua? app roo kyun rahi hain? (heer kept crying) didi please batayay kya hua
heer(while crying): woh prem…(she started crying very hard)
meher(tears were coming to her eyes too to see her didi crying like this): didi kuch hua kya app ke aur prem jiju ke beech?
heer(sobbing): meher prem ne mujh par shaq kia! mujhe pata chala ke main maa bannay wali hun aur jab maine yeh baat sab ko batayi ghar main to sab ne mujh par ungli uthayi.maa ne kaha yeh bacha prem ka nahi.aur prem ne maa ki baat suni.is shaq aur ilzaam ke saath main us ghar main nahi reh sakti thi.main sab kuch bardaasht ker sakti hun magar koi mere bachon par ungli bhi uthayay main bardaasht nahi karungi.aur shayad ab prem ko mujh par bharosa nahi aur bharosay ke begair aik rishta khokla hota hai. (meher was shocked to hear this. how could prem jiju stoop so slow. how could he think that didi would betray him.his believed his mother who lied to him so many times to break his relation with heer didi.she didnt know what to say to her didi)
preet(he was standing seeing all this. he saw chahat who was scared and crying seeing her mama like that. preet moved closer to meher): meher tum heer didi ko andar room main le jao.main chahat ke saath hun


Meher understood what preet wanted and appreciated his concern. she could also see fear in chahat's eyes. fear that her parents were breaking apart and her mama was crying like this. like everyone, she could not believe that her papa could be so mean to her mama. meher took heer inside the room while preet tried to pacify chahat.

Preet(bending down in front of chahat): app chahat ho na?
chahat(looks at him with tears rolling down her cheeks): ji
preet(holds her hands and leads her towards the tv): chalo hum dono games khelte hai. app ko games khelna pasand hain?
chahat(walking with preet and they both settle on the floor): ji
preet: hmm to app bhi apni maasi ki tarah ho.bas ji ji kehti ho.app ko kaunsa game pasand hai?(he asked her while going through the dvds of games)
chahat: barbie wala
preet(looks at her nervously. since he was a guy, he was more interested in racing games or violent games but right he was playing with a girl who was not very happy so he agreed to play barbie): theek hai to hum dono barbie kheltay hai.app mujhe sikhaogi yeh wala game?
chahat: app itne baray ho gayay ho aur app ko game khelna bhi nahi ata?


Preet shook his head and they both laughed. they started playing games. preet was successful in making the little girl smile. On the other hand, heer didi was crying with meher inside the room

meher(hugging her didi): didi app please roona bund karo. app ko pata hai na mujhe app rootay hue bilkul achi nahi lagti.
heer: roon nahi to aur kya karun meher. prem aisa kaisay soch sakta hai?(she looks at meher with questioning eyes)
meher: didi app jaanti ho na jiju ko.woh apni maa ki baat kitni maantay hain. unki maa un ke liye bhagwan hai.laikin insaan insaan hota hai, bhagwan nahi. aur aik din jiju ko sab sachai pata chal jayegi aur woh app se bauhat pyar kerte hain.unhe ghalat fehmi hui hai.woh zaroor app ko samjhaingay(even though meher was very angry with her juji in her heart, she couldnt show that in front of heer. she wanted to console heer didi)
heer: pata nahi meher kya hoga.mujhe bauhat darr lag raha hai.pata nahi prem mujhse pyar kerta bhi hai ke nahi.
meher: kerte hai didi.bauhat pyar kerte hain. aur app se koi pyar na karay aisa ho hi nahi sakta (she smiled at heer and kissed her forehead.even though heer was older than meher, she always behaved like her older sister when needed. the bond between the sisters was very strong. they could share anything with each other) didi appne khana khaya?
heer: nahi
meher(angry at heer didi): didi! app khanay khayay.app ko ab apnay saath saath apnay bachay ka bhi dehaan rakhna hai.app apnay bachay ko bhooka rakhaingi kya?
heer: nahi! (heer could never ever think about hurting her children so she willingly agreed to eat)


Meher fed heer and then made her sleep in her lap. Heer really needed to rest and sleep. in this condition she didnt need all this stress.

After a while, preet entered the room with chahat in his arms. he looked at meher who was sitting with heer in her lap sleeping and she was stroking her hair. he came forward and laid down chahat beside heer. he took out his phone and typed something on the phone. he didnt want to speak as it would disturb the mother and the daughter. he gave the phone to meher to read.

meher(reading silently): heer didi kaisi hain? (she types back something)
preet(reading silently): abhi to soo rahi hain magar bauhat udaas hain.hum thori dair main ghar chaltay hain.ghar par sab parayshaan hongay warna.(preet types)
meher(reading): nahi.hum yahin ruktay hai.heer didi ko tumhari zaroorat hai abhi.(she types)
preet(reading): thanks preet:) (he smiles back at meher) laikin tum ghar chalay jao warna sab parayshaan hongay. main nahi chahti yeh sab abhi kisi ko pata chalay.(he looked at meher and nodded.he started to leave the room.he turned around and waved at meher and smiled.meher did the same and preet went away)


Meher was glad that preet understood her and allowed her to stay there. but she was really worried about her didi and her future. she also went to sleep.

Preet got back home and it was pretty late so everyone had gone to sleep. he went to his room. he was thinking about how to help heer didi. what prem did was not right.he knew heer didi could never do something like this. even though he didnt know heer didi very well, he was sure that she was good and pure just like meher.

Next day, preet informed the family that meher stayed at her maayka as she was missing them and she would return soon. they were sad to hear this as they missed meher. but they understood that she must have been missing her family.

Preet went to the office that day. even though it was his second day after marriage, he decided to attend a particular meeting today. it was a meeting with prem's company about a new project. After the meeting was over, everyone started to leave.

Preet(stopping prem): Prem. main app se kuch baat kerna chahta hun.
Prem(stopped and turned around to look at preet): go ahead (he thought preet wanted to talk about the project)
preet: heer didi ke baray main
Prem(prem looked at him shockingly in anger. he knew preet was meher's husband. from the look on preet's face, he knew that he got to know about whatever happened between him and heer): main apni personal life parayon ke saath discuss kerna pasand nahi kerta.so stay out of this (saying this he started to leave)





Here is part 10. enjoy😊 so it was heer that meher was shocked to see. her parents are alive and it was not harman😆 so ur predictions were wrong. I didnt edit this so sorry for any mistakes. i know its not that long but i was done with this part so posting it. its better than waiting a few more days right? and as usual i ended it at an imporant point😆 sorry😳

I will reply later to your comments(sorry but i m in still at uni😳 yes this is what i do in my free time at uni😳)

and i know this prem is not nice sorry 😳 but this was needed for the story. when i started this story i was thinking about making someone else heer's husband(since he was going to be bad) but then i thought heer is only for prem so i couldnt separate them 😳 sorry to prem fans.i will stop writing about prem before i give any hint about the future track 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
i really likd it..........
gud it ws heer and nt harman..................
nd ya plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon grlllllllll
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: riyaasehgall

i really likd it..........<br>gud it ws heer and nt harman..................<br>nd ya plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon grlllllllll<br>


Thanks😊 yea it was heer.well harman might come in future:pu never know.i will update soon.u update too.i m waiting.....

Dis class is so boring.dats y i m on my fone😆 nothing better to do

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Posted: 15 years ago
awwwww.....lovinggg itt..!! heyy did u pm mee?! 😕 aaarghcan't waitt to read moreee....update soon...
😍 😳 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: alviraz

awwwww.....lovinggg itt..!! heyy did u pm mee?! 😕 aaarghcan't waitt to read moreee....update soon...
😍 😳 😛


Thanks.yes i didd!
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey awesome part bt too small :(( .. I wish it ws a lil longer, still its btr than nothing 😆 .. I don't like this Prem 😔 lkn as usually, I jst love Preet .. really liked his nd Chahat's dialogue, that ws vry cute .. nd how they talked through the phone ws cute too .. update the nxt part vry soon, can't wait anymore !

ps : m glad it ws Heer nd not Harman .. Harman btr not cm in front of her eyes until she realizes she's in love with Preet !
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: tasnime

hey awesome part bt too small :(( .. I wish it ws a lil longer, still its btr than nothing 😆 .. I don't like this Prem 😔 lkn as usually, I jst love Preet .. really liked his nd Chahat's dialogue, that ws vry cute .. nd how they talked through the phone ws cute too .. update the nxt part vry soon, can't wait anymore ! <br><br>ps : m glad it ws Heer nd not Harman .. Harman btr not cm in front of her eyes until she realizes she's in love with Preet !<br>



Thanks😊 yea i know it was small.i will make the next one long😊 i will update soon(i usually have the story in my mind and then i write it down so i know what will happen next.i just need to write it😳). i m not telling u when harman will come or if he come or not 😛 😆

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