Meet ff: Jeene ke isharay Part 28 Sept 21,Pg 89 - Page 12

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Kamal_23

great<br><br>thanx 4 the pm<br><br>update soon<br><br><br>Kamal<br>


Thanks😊i will update soon..

Originally posted by: Aaliyah01

Aww that part was so cute!


Glad Meher is feeling more comfortable around Preet now


Thanx for the PM


Thanks😊

Originally posted by: Pori

thanks for the pm

beautiful update, its getting interesting=)


Thanks😊it was not interesting before😔?

Originally posted by: jamune

HAHAHAHH preet fighiting with a blanket can just imagine it rite now excellent part please update soon and preet is sucha sweet heart not forcing him self on his wife <br>


Thanks😊 i will update soon. yes preet is the sweetest

Originally posted by: monaghosh

AWSOME, WONDERFUL,FANTASTIC UPDATE,PLZ UPDATE MORE MEET MEHER AND PREET
ROMANTIC SCENES AS SOON AS POSSIBLE.PLZ CONTINUE UR PREVIOUS MEET
WEDDING FF ALSO IF POSSIBLE,THANKS.


Thanks😊 first they have to fall in love😆 then romance😉



Originally posted by: tadashi

short and quick! that is how i like to update....i do parts of a part and then i pm everyone when the whole part is up but i am just lazy.lol. do whatever is conveniant for you!


i dont like the way you update😆 i am very impatient and i love your stories😃.

Originally posted by: foxi

awsome update...thx for the pm...i like long parts,but its better to get quicker updates😊...do as you like


Thanks😊



Originally posted by: Rhea_401

I prefer long ones coz u get 2 read a lot.................n esp. 4 dis fic i guess u shud go in 4 dat only.................Unless it take tooooooo long to complete lyk in my case dat is y i hv been postin shrt ones!!!..............My brain's workin very slowly des deys!!!😆😆


Thanks😊 it doesnt take that long.i write bits everyday.like right now i have some written down and i am confused if i should post it or add more and then post😕.my brain always works slowly😆

Originally posted by: tasnime

I prefer long updates but I also prefer to get updates quickly .. so as per ur wish ! but if you choose short updates, hope u'll update everyday 😆.. how mean naa ?!<br>


I wish i could update everyday.but thats not possible. some days my mom just surprises me with work to do😔

Originally posted by: yasu09

awwwww......dats was really cute.....<br>glad meher let him sleep on the bed.....lol.....<br>great update.....<br>


Thanks😊

Originally posted by: sweetanu2314

i like short and quick updates..........since i don't like to wait a lot..........do continue writing and update soon......


I will update soon. Thanks😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: unknown18

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i dont like the way you update😆 i am very impatient and i love your stories😃.

i am sorry! i promise to update faster and longer one my finals are over next thursday!😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
UPDATE AS U FEEL CONVINIENT WITH,BUT UPDATE MORE MEET RAMANTIC SCENES AS SOON AS POSSIBLE,THANKS A LOT.
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Posted: 15 years ago
very cuteee udpate!
thnx for the pm!
plz cont. soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: tadashi





i am sorry! i promise to update faster and longer one my finals are over next thursday!😳



Remember your promise or else... 😈 😆 all the best for your finals
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Posted: 15 years ago
PART 9


Meher woke up early in the morning. it was her old habit. She looked at preet sleeping on the other side of the bed peacefully. she remembered what happened last night. She laughed after such a long time. she was feeling sad but that laugh made her feel happy and relieved. it felt like a new beginning she thought but could she have a new beginning? isn't she betraying harman by accepting her new life? these were the questions lingering in meher's mind and heart.

She queitly went to take a shower and change. she wore a beautiful, yet simple, red sari with small earings and her wedding choora. she remembered her mom telling her how to dress up as a suhaagan. she had promised her mother that she will fulfill all her responsibilities and she was doing just that. this was the first time she was wearing a sari and she was struggling with it. although she learned it from her mom how to wear it, it was hard for her to handle it. but she had to she thought.

Since it was very early in the morning, she decided not to wake preet up. She went to explore the house herself and make breakfast after doing pooja.

As she was walking in the hallway, she felt someone was walking behind her. she got very scared and turned around slowly. she saw no one. when she lowered her eyes, she saw tannu's small figure. meher noticed that she was looking angry. so she smiled at her confusingly. she moved forward towards tannu to talk with her as she loved children.

Meher(smiling): app tannu ho na?
tannu(angry): ji. app meher maami?
meher(bent on the floor to tannu's level): haan.app itni subah subah akele kya ker rahi ho yahan par?
tannu(still angry): meri chorain. app batayay app kya ker rahi thin?
meher(scared of tannu's anger and questioning): main woh..main…main ghar dekh rahi thi.
tannu(suspiciously looks at meher): itni subah?
meher: haan.meri aadat hai jaldi uthnay ki.
tannu(not angry now.but had no emotions or expressions on her face): meri tarah.
meher(smiling that atleast tannu is not angry anymore): beta ghar main mandir kahan hai?
tannu: kyun?
meher: woh pooja kerni thi.
tannu: ok follow me.

Meher followed little tannu to the mandir. they both prayed and then went to the kitchen.

Back in the room, preet opened his eyes and didnt see meher beside him. he realized she must have gotten up before him. so he went to take a shower and change too.

In the kitchen, Meher looked through the cupboards and fridge to find all the ingredients she was looking for to make breakfast, still struggling with her sari. tannu was watching her every move like a hawk and that didnt go unnoticed by meher but she kept herself concentrated on the cooking. it was her first day in the house and she wanted to cook perfectly for everyone. meher made aloo ke parathay for everyone.

tannu: yeh parathay kis ke liye hai?
meher(smiling): sab ke liye
tannu: aur preet mamu ke liye?
meher(confused): un ke liye bhi hai.
tannu: itne se parathay! mamu to yeh akele kha jayenge.
meher(her eyes widened. there were quite a lot of parathas and this little girl was saying preet will eat all of them. she looked at her suspiciously thinking agar preet itne saray parathay khata to balloon ki tarah phool jata.she had noticed that he was a skinny guy)
tannu(noticing meher's confusion): yakeen nahi na mujhe par? kisi se bhi pooch lain.
preet(entering the kitchen. he heard noises from the kitchen so he got to know meher was there.): yeh sahi keh rahi hai!
meher(looking at preet in surprise): tum itne saray parathay khatay ho?
preet(embarrassed): haan. woh tumhe pata nahi hai breakfast is the most important meal of the day. isliye achay se breakfast kerta hun(smiling at himself for making such a good excuse)
meher(continued to make more parathas): ok
preet(realized that it was meher's first day in the house and she was already doing so much work): meher tum yeh sab kyun ker rahi ho? aj tumhara pehla din hai is ghar main. maa aur kuldi bana laingi nashta.
meher: nahi preet.meri aadat hai. ghar main pehla din hai to kya nashta nahi bana sakti? maa aur kuldi thakay hue hongay. main apne ghar par bhi…(stopped.she realized what she said.now this was her house. but she was missing her mother a lot. her eyes started to get teary and preet saw that) i mean maa ke ghar bhi main hi nashta banati thi subah
preet(smiling): meher yeh ghar bhi tumhara hai aur tumhari maa ka ghar bhi tumhara hai. pata nahi kaisay larki apna ghar apni har cheez apne maa baap sab kuch chor ker apne sasuraal aati hai. magar tumhe jab bhi maa ke ghar jana ho tum mujhe keh daina aur main tumhe le jaunga
meher(meher got happy listening to this and she was happy that preet called her maa maa too): thanks preet
preet(smiling): isme thanks ki kya baat hai! mera farz hai yeh.(looking at tannu.he puts his arm around tannus shoulder but tannu pushes it back and looks at him in anger) waise meher tannu ne tumhe daraya to nahi na?
meher(looks at tannu then at preet and says nervously): nahi
preet(the way meher said nahi it was clear to him that tannu did scare meher, just like she did to everyone else): woh actually tannu ko log ziada pasand nahi.yeh sab ko aise hi darati hai. hamesha akeli rehti hai aur ghussa to iski naak par hota.
tannu(she told meher to come near her. she whispered in her ear): mami, app preet mamu se durr rehna
meher(confused): matlab?
tannu(still whispering in her ear):preet mamu aur vikaas bhaiya app ke saath bhi waisa karaingay jaisa mere saath kerte hai
meher(confused and curious): kaisa?
tannu: yeh dono hamesha mera bakra banatay hai aur hamesha mujhe tung kerte hai
meher: ooo.dont worry tannu. i am on your side (meher gave a kiss to tannu on her cheek. preet was surprised to see the interaction between his wife and his bhanji. tannu never allowed anyone come close to her, letting someone kiss her was impossible. but two most important girls in his life were happy and smiling. he was glad that meher was friends with tannu.tannu was making meher smile)
preet(clearing his throat): ahem. kya baatain ho rahi hai?
meher(looking at preet); kuch nahi.hamara secret hai(looking at tannu and smiles)
preet(he smiled.): ok(he was happy that this little girl made meher smile and made meher talk.from the first day he met her, today was the first time he saw meher talking and talking with him.this was a new beginning indeed)

Meher finished her cooking and preet told the servants to set the table for breakfast. he knew if he had not told them to do it, meher would have done it herself and he didnt want her to work that much. he also noticed that she was struggling with her sari. meher was pleased with preet's care. all of them were sitting on the dining table having their breakfast.

Maa:aray wah meher tu ne to baray achay parathay banayay hai.
meher(smiling): thanks maa
kuldi(noticed that preet was quiet today and was shy maybe and she could not leave this chance to tease him): preet tujhe parathay achay nahi lagay kya?
preet(surprisingly looks up from his plate and glares at his sister): bauhat achay hai di!
kuldi: dekhaa maaa! kabhi app ke parathon ki aise tareef nahi ki aur biwi atay hi uski tareef shuru (preet and meher felt embarrassed)
preet(regaining his voice): aisi baat nahi di.maa ko pata hai mujhe unke parathay kitne pasand hai isliye mujhe unko batanay ki zaroorat nahi(smiling at his maa)
maa: chup ker badmaash
bauji(looking at meher): meher beta. aj dil khush kerdia tu ne. itne achay parathay maine zindagi main nahi khayay!(meher was very happy that she was able to please everyone but preet and kuldi looked at bauji then maa and then started laughing)
preet(laughing): bauji aj to app gayay! dekha maa bauji ko app ke parathon se ziada achay lagay yeh parathay!aj to lagta hai chand ke tukray tukray ho jayenge!(bauji looked at him and was getting up to slap him and preet was ready to run away)
maa: aray rehne dijiye na.bacha hai.
bauji(angry): bacha hai?? nawab sahab ki shaadi ho gayi hai!
maa: haan to uski biwi ke samnay usay maraingay kya?(bauji settled in his seat and preet kept launghing)
meher(she was enjoying the interaction between this small loving family. it reminded her of her family. her maa bauji and heer didi. they always had fun like this too. just like preet, meher was always the one to tease everyone. she noticed how similar they are. she then looked at bauji who was telling her to give him one more paratha): yeh lijiye bauji (placing it on his plate) maa app bhi lijiye(she gave one more to maa)
kuldi(extending her plate): meher mujhe bhi aik aur!(meher gladly placed one more on her plate)
preet(looking around.he wanted one more paratha but he was hesitating in asking meher): woh meher (meher looked at him.he smiled) mujhe bhi aik de do(she gave him too.this was his 5th paratha she counted)
tannu(looking at her mamu then her mami): maine kaha tha na mami.mamu itne saray parathay khatay hai!

The whole family laughed at the adorable child. Everyone had a nice breakfast. they were very impressed with meher. firstly, she made breakfast for everyone. secondly, her parathay were wonderful and they all loved them, specially preet. it was her first day in the family but she was able to settle in really well.

Later in the afternoon, preet decided to take meher to her maa's house to meet her parents. meher freshened up and left with him. she was really happy about meeting her parents. however, this happiness didnt last long. As she entered the house with preet behind her, she was shocked to see something.


Here is part 9😊 its not short😊. i decided to show meher's interaction with the whole family. and i love kids so i added tannu and now she is meher's friend😃. i hope you like this part. and sorry for the ending 😳 i shouldnt have ended it there.but its fun to do that 😆 next update will be next week(this week is almost over).Enjoy😊 and comment pleaseeee


*** one more question:
if you asked me to pm you and you didnt get my pm then let me know so that next time i do pm you😊 and sorry if i didnt 😳
Edited by unknown18 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
reserved .. btw a big thks to ur mom !! 😆

edit add ..

😆 Preet is shooo cute !! 😳 .. it reminded me of my family as well 😳 .. Mehr, the usual bahu, was really sweet .. nd Tannu, she deserves a big 🤗 .. I loved the interaction between them nd this part was funny as well .. glad, Mehr is back to herself slowly .. hope Preet will see the real Mehr, nd that too in love with him as well, soon !!

but you ended the FF at a crucial part !! What did she see ? Harman ? her mom/dad dead body ?
update as soon as possible !! there's still 3 days left fr the end of this week !
Edited by tasnime - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: tasnime

reserved .. but I big thks to ur mom !! 😆<br>



i m still waiting i think i shud take the bus but its too cold😔
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: unknown18



i m still waiting i think i shud take the bus but its too cold😔



Oops .. did u call her ? maybe she's stuck in the traffic jam 😕
but that gives chance fr you to continue this FF !!!!! 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: tasnime

<br><br>Oops .. did u call her ? maybe she's stuck in the traffic jam 😕<br>but that gives chance fr you to continue this FF !!!!! 😆<br>



she called some minutes ago.she was gone outside for some work and didnt have her cell phone. she will be coming in 10-20 mins.more wait.and my laptop is almost dead so cant write more😛

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