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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 11

Part 11

Prem decided that preet should know that prem was in goa and why he had come. So prem followed preet, because he assumed he was going to the project site. However, to his shock preet stopped at a coffee shop with none other than Ashlesha.

Prem's jaw dropped when he saw Preet's hand touch Ashlesha's hand. His preet could never do this! Preet had loved him so much, and he had seen what his mistake with ashlesha had done to his life. Infact, Preet had been so upset with Prem. Prem thought Preet was upset because he had ruined his relationship with Heer...but now he thought it was becasue preet loved ash.

What He had done with Ash was a drunken mistake but what preet was doing was a crime. Mrs. Mehta had seen them together too. How was Prem going to tell Heer and meher? How was he going to tell his father that both of his sons had ruined the lives of his best friend's daughters? Prem turned around to see Preet holding Ash;s hand again. Prem decided he would fugure the answers to thouse questions later, right now he was going to set preet straight.

"Preet!" prem yelled loud enough for the entire coffee shop to turn and look at him. Preet's face grew pale as a he stood up. "Prem bhaiya..." he said in disbelief.

Prem stormed over to Preet and slapped him hard. "What are you doing with her? "

Preet assessed the situation… he knew what he had to do.

"Prem Bhaiyya, Ash and I love each other. I tried making things work out with meher, but she and I were not meant for each other. "

Prem fumed, "Do you think marriage is a joke preet? Meher has been so good to you and this is how you treat her? And you know what ashlesha did with me and despite that you want to be with her? What is wrong with you preet?"

Preet had no response to this," Bhaiyaa try to understand….

Preet was cut off by Prem, "Don't ever call me bhaiyya! You know when mrs. Mehta said that she saw you with a girl whose name started with an A, I told her she must be mistaken because my brothet would never do something like that. You aren't my brother!" Prem left the shop leaving a confused preet and a happy ashlesha.

Preet was confused…when did Mrs. Mehta see him with Ash? His thoughts were disrupted by Ash running into his arms.

He had finally gained her trust, now he would be able to get what he wanted from her.

Back in ludhiana, Meher took Heer to her first check up.

"Didi, this is so exciting! Your first sonogram! But don't you think you should tell jiju?"

Heer glared at Meher, "We already discussed this meher and I told you He doesn't deserve to know."

"Fine Didi, as you wish, but I don't support this." Meher said. "Actually didi, I want to see the doctor too, I have been feeling nauseated and dizzy lately too."

Heer gasped, "Meher are you……" Meher's eyes grew wide as she understood what Heer was insinuating. "Oh my gosh didi, I can't possibly be pregnant, or can I?"

After Heer's Sonogram, meher asked the gynecologist to take her pregnancy test. The doctor told her her report would be mailed to her in tomorrow. Heer and meher thanked the doctor and left. Meher and Heer left for home excited at the prospect that both sisters could possibly be pregnant! They made plans for their kids as they giggled while watching a movie. "I can't wait till I tell Preet, he will be so excited di….." meher stopped as she realized what she said. "I am sorry didi…..I didn't mean…."

Heer hugged meher tightly. Both girls slept together that night while thinking of their parents and childhood.

Enjoy! Part 12 will be meet's confrontation! I am not sure if I will make meher pregnant yet. what do you guys think?
Edited by tadashi - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
NICE ONE,PLZ UPDATE A LONG MEET ROMANTIC SCENE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE,THANKS.PLZ WRITE MORE MEET FF BCAUSE THEY R NOT 2GETHER IN THE SHOW ANYMORE.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: monaghosh

NICE ONE,PLZ UPDATE A LONG MEET ROMANTIC SCENE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE,THANKS.PLZ WRITE MORE MEET FF BCAUSE THEY R NOT 2GETHER IN THE SHOW ANYMORE.

i am not done with part 11, I will be Adding some more tonight, but unfortunately i don't think there will be any good meet scenes in this part. they will be fighting. Sorry! but i promise to make part 12 better. Also I want to write another one shot for meet and i think you will like it! so hang in there!
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi
how r u?
meet fighting?? nooooo 😭 well it will b nice to see preet trying to make meher happy after she gets angry with him(i hope thats what happens). post it quick pleaseeee😊 🤗 one shot!! yayyyy [:D/] 😍 please dont make it a tragic one.i like happy endings😃 all the best.will be waiting eagerly to read!!
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Originally posted by: unknown18

hi
how r u?
meet fighting?? nooooo 😭 well it will b nice to see preet trying to make meher happy after she gets angry with him(i hope thats what happens). post it quick pleaseeee😊 🤗 one shot!! yayyyy [:D/] 😍 please dont make it a tragic one.i like happy endings😃 all the best.will be waiting eagerly to read!!

they have to fight for the story to mive unfortunately.
And i think the storyline is kind of going to be like my os distance from now own. 😕😆
But don't worry there will be a happy ending to this and my new os. I hate tragic endings too, but i think i may write another os after that is tragic. meher's acting in the show has really inspired me- she is fantastic.
So here is my plan:
I want to finish secret garden- it should finish in the next two-three pparts.
I want to finish hamare raastey after that- but this ff might take a while to finish.
then i want to write two one shots.
then i want to take a break😆
hopefully i will do all this.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: tadashi




they have to fight for the story to mive unfortunately.


And i think the storyline is kind of going to be like my os distance from now own. 😕😆


But don't worry there will be a happy ending to this and my new os. I hate tragic endings too, but i think i may write another os after that is tragic. meher's acting in the show has really inspired me- she is fantastic.


So here is my plan:


I want to finish secret garden- it should finish in the next two-three pparts.

I want to finish hamare raastey after that- but this ff might take a while to finish.

then i want to write two one shots.

then i want to take a break😆


hopefully i will do all this.


Dats a lot to do!r u going to do it in dis order? U can do 1 thing at a time but please post sumthing.missing meet!!
All da best!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
WAITING 4 UR NEW MEET SHOT,PLZ LET ME KNOW WHENEVER U POST IT.FIGHTING MEET SCENE IN PART 12 THATS INTERESTING BUT PLZ PART 13 SHOULD BE A LONG ROMANTIC MEET SCENE,THANKA A LOT.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice update
Thanx to Prem, Ash finally trusts Preet
Not looking forward to Meet confrontation
Please make Preet tell Meher what he is planning! Pretty Please!
Thanx for the PM
Cant wait for the next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow~ awesome part, i reckon you should make meher pregnant....... but thats simply my choice!~~!!
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Thanks for the pm. very nice part.loved it. so everything is going according to preet's plan. prem slapped preet and ash hugged preet 😡 meher might be pregnant 😃 it was nice to see(read) the sister's together. meher is trying to bring prem and heer closer but heer is not understanding. i m ok with meet confrontation as long as they r together later and they will be so i forgive u for making preet hide this from meher 😛 😆 i think it will be nice to see meher pregnant😊 i love kids 😃

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