The Secret Garden- part 16b on page 30 (6/9 - Page 12

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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome


thnx 4 the pm


update soon



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Posted: 15 years ago
Part 12
While Meher and Heer were discussing children, Prem was flying home so he could talk to heer and meher, and preet was with Ashlesha.

Preet quickly texted ajay asking him if the recorder was ready. Ash sauntered over to Preet. "Preet, I am so glad we can finally be together!"

Preet moved away from ash, "Ash, actually I am not sure if we can be together after what you did with Prem bhaiyya. I am just not comfortable being with you after your relation with bhaiyaa."

"Preet! Don't worry about that- It was al just an act. I had never slept with prem. I just drugged him and then made him think that we slept together so I ould get back at your family for separating us. You can ask the hotel manager- I had stayed in a separate room that night. I only love you preet and I can go to any extent for you'." Ash said tying to hug preet.

Preet had suspected the story all along but did not realize how angry it would have made him. He slapped her hard across the face. "You are disgusting ashlesha! I can not believe I ever had any feelings for you. People like you deserve the worst from life. I have proof now of your misdeeds! You and your parents should rot in hell!"

Preet thundered away. Now he could explain to prem bhaiyya what he had done, tell meher the truth, and bring heer bhabhi home. Now all izz well, he thought!

Preet Grabbed the morning flight back to Ludhiana.

Heer heard the doorbell ring, and she decided to let meher sleep. Who could be here so early in the morning she thought.

As she opened the door she felt her heart skip a beat. "prem'" She whispered.

"Heer I am afraid I have some bad news. I don't know how to tell you this but our suspicion of preet was correct. He and ashlesha are''." Prem looked down, he was to ashamed to look heer in the eye.

"I don't know how we are going to tell meher this. I feel disgusted in myself and preet for doing this to you two." Prem said almost sobbing.

"Doing what to us, jiju?" Meher stood in the hall confused.

Prem and heer looked at each other. Heer walked over to meher and said "I think you should sit down for this."

"Meher, woh, preet and ashlesha...." prem stuttered
"Preet and ashlesha? what are you talking about jiju?" meher said still confused/
"Meher, the other day a lady in preet's ofice saw preet rather intimate with ash and to confirm it prem followed him to goa and there preet told prem that he wanted to be with ashlesha."
Meher got up and started walking backwards with tears in her eyes. " that can't be true. preet and i have talkked almost everyday. He and I have been spent lots of time together before he left."
"meher I am sorry... I wish this was a lie too. but i saw it with my eyes and preet told me..."
meher ran into her room crying.
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Preet's flight landed, and he hurriedly switched on his cell phone so he could call meher. He wanted to see her before he went home to tell her the good news. Meher didn't pick up any of Preet's 6 phone calls. Preet was worried, but he decided he would go see her after he went home and talked to the family.
When Preet came home, looks of anger and dissappointment awaited him.
Edited by tadashi - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Yes preet got the proof!! but they are all going to misunderstand him and be angry with him.i wana see angry meher😆loving it.continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
WAITING 4 UR NEW MEET SHOT,PLZ LET ME KNOW WHENEVER U POST IT.FIGHTING MEET SCENE IN PART 12 THATS INTERESTING BUT PLZ PART 13 SHOULD BE A LONG ROMANTIC MEET SCENE,THANKA A LOT.
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeeeee update.....
so ash trusts preet now......
i'm so not looking forward to meet's confrontation.....
plz make preet tell meher everything in the enxt part......
i'm sad this ff is ending...
continue soon!!!!
and thnx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyya gud job....luved it.....lekin yr thode lambe updts post kara karo.....peez haan n dnt make her preggy abhi
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Posted: 15 years ago
tht ws short....but sweet............oh pooor preet he's in trouble....ya meher shud get pregnant...r dts wat i think....update soon dear.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
WAITING 4 UR NEW MEET SHOT,PLZ LET ME KNOW WHENEVER U POST IT.
PART 12 IS VERY NICE I FEEL SAD 4 MEHAR 😭 .REMOVE THE CONFUSION BETWEEN MEET AS SOON AS POSSIBLE & PLZ UPDATE A LONG ROMANTIC SCENE OF MEET AS SOON AS POSSIBLE ,THANKS A LOT.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Heyyyyy !!! ....havent came hereee in a l0ng timeee (buzy wid skool)
but glad u kept me updatedd😃
just read the recent 2 partss......nd ii havee so0 manyy mixed emoti0ns LOL 😆
kk ....srslyyyy wht the helL is up wid Ash ...glad she got slapped by Preet jaanu <3 hehe
...nd acha hua uska sach nikla..wayy to0 g0 PREET !! 👍🏼
0MG yeh Prem ne kya kardia ...ii had a feelin that he was gonna get there b4 Preet -______- but ii srslyy h0pee this misunderstanding gets cleared awayyy asap
o0hh nd bout Meher's pregnancy ...hayye kya kahoon mein??...loll ...ii mean ii love kids..but i think its a lil too early for MEET to havee one
ii want to see them just be MEET for nowww😳 ...onlii the two of 'em hehee ...o0hmuhhgosh ii sound so mean 😛
but u get the point na 😉
nywayzzz updatee so0n ...u did a great j0b 👏
uv ya always R U M S H A <3
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey awesome ff
plz add me to ur pm list

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