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Posted: 15 years ago
two updates thank uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu, but i must say ur demons r really doing a good job , this for them 👏, so Mr.Prem juneja is yet know his heer and also that prem heer r one. iam waiting for that moment, ur description of it. so this time she fell on his lap, but must say that was really a chindi scene, when did u become so ruthless 😲 iam not happy with u 😭 bc u did not full fill my wish.
stop praying right now, mz. bliss! i am not publishing this! if my mom ever discovers the amount of time that i spend on this phorum, i am ophphicially dead! 😆 plus, she already knows about my ... uh ... mild interest in a pair of characters called prem and heer... so stop praying.
mild interest, thats a big fat lie 😲. MKG follower.
iam sure ur mother will be proud of u, her little ⭐️. 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
ESteee!!!!! (aka preestess)
Your story has moved me to tears on several occasions! Sorry I havent commented earlier-I just wanted to justice to your writing with a decent comment. i have a question for you? Are you an artist? Because your recognition and description of color and shades representing the character's emotions is impeccable!!! And your writing style is fabulous- I feel like i am reading something i pulled from the book store. I absolutely love Heer in your story- she is so conflcted - and of course you convey it so beautifully. Until you wrote about meher's death, i thought Prem was the tortured soul but i am slowly moving that title to preet. I love how you showed the darkness that came across his otherwise light personality when he was talking about the garden/meher with heer. Then his shaking and ashen colored face- i can only imagine the anguish he felt. Anyways, you are amazing! But can you please bring back meher( maybe have her in a coma- you can add a little balaji logic to your story😆)? i am just so depressed that preet will be killed and i hate sushant's other character. And if you don't, then can you please write a little story on meet- so we can mourn preet's demise? please?
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Posted: 15 years ago
darn it! y'mean i have to continue this story??! even with bandages 'round my head?? 😆

@bee: ya, they should be stuck to each other with super-glue, no? 😆 can't wait for the day. 😆 btw, the writing's full of mistakes. soo desparately need a day off to edit the whole darned thing!

@anoosree: what? it didn't help that prem didn't have a shirt own when heer fell on his in the last part? 😆 and *sigh* i think you should make that a ''short, fat, liar''. i'm not well-endowed in the height dimension. *sigh*

@tadashi: huh??? preet is getting killed in the show?? wha...?!! but why??! why?? why??? can't they just keep him in the bathroom when they don't want him? they're doing just fine keeping kuldi's husband out of the show for years without explaining it, why not preet??!

and no, not an artist, amn't good enough. *sigh* but i did do a few courses on maths&arts. got interested in the stuff while doing it. 😊 love architecture. kinda got the whole stuff brewing together in this.. i love the idea of heer as an artist. fits with her ability to view life in an other-worldly way, no? and not to give two hoots for what people think? 😍
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: estee


@tadashi: huh??? preet is getting killed in the show?? wha...?!! but why??! why?? why??? can't they just keep him in the bathroom when they don't want him? they're doing just fine keeping kuldi's husband out of the show for years without explaining it, why not preet??!

and no, not an artist, amn't good enough. *sigh* but i did do a few courses on maths&arts. got interested in the stuff while doing it. 😊 love architecture. kinda got the whole stuff brewing together in this.. i love the idea of heer as an artist. fits with her ability to view life in an other-worldly way, no? and not to give two hoots for what people think? 😍

well it is just rumors for now - they have several artciles out.I am surpirsed you havent heard about it because it is all over the forum. I think they are tired of keeping his character on kis desh if can't shoot for it- plus his death will probably add interest to the show. I understand that sushant is probably super tired- he talks about it all the time on facebook but I really like his kis desh character over his pr character - and he does too. he said he likes preet better because it 99% him whereas manav is his total oposite but he likes the challenge. I just hope that the creatives give us some awesome scenes before he dies and they dont start a harman-meher track🤢.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Poor Heer! I really feel for her.

And I am glad Preet and Heer found out about their connection...I hope now Prem realizes there's nothing between those two.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Mine!

will be back to edit I have my art work to do!

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Hey E *waves* you most probably do not know me...but I am a very big fan of 'little things' and the 'phandooh' even though I never really reply I love them very very much and when I saw that you had an FF I simply had to read it! and I did btw if I you find Meera or Radz give them A big squishy hug on my behalf I love the idea that they forced you into writing this...

do I have to say I love you that many times for the amount of time you wrote an update! ok here goes I love love love love love love love love love love *fingers hurt* x million = I love you!
so I hope you get the picture that I love you!


wow has heer got legs or what she ran and ran and ran ....even I can't run that fast woow!..now that picture you painted in my head of the light made me literally take out my pencil and pad and use all the paints I have to create that light from my head to the page! It is harder than it sounds trust me!......bhag heer bhag she ha got legs....aww but when she came back saab kuch chopar!...the light went gosh!....lucky for me mine was still in my head

Gaytri is nice in this FF good good thank you!.....does she always forget her keys? She lost her family? oh bless her cotton socks

That was Prem wasn't it that was Prem yes I knew it was prem!..she ran away again!

-edit-again-

O-M-B-F-C oh-my-blasted-fire-crackers!......yaar everything went down the drain it all got deleted I just commented gosh!

But I promise at the end of the FF I will try and remember all I commented and comment.....to answer the question of the artist feeling

I was gonna ask you are you an artist? cause the way you describe it...it paints the picture in my head.....now everything works great I love it now update soon soon soon


Originally posted by: ESTEE

@curledup: oooh, you are an artist! eeps! do tell me if something reads awfully wrong to you -- 'cause i am not one! 😃



evrything worked greatly!

-Aashifa-

P.S: everything is wonderful I love this FF, definetly one of my faves

P.PS: I agree with Nitya the flawlessness that you write everything with....is mindblowing!




Edited by curledup - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
more ph-awesome, ph-abulous and ph-antastic updates estee...............eagerly waiting for the next ones.................😍
Posted: 15 years ago
*bookmarks to read after her semester ends*

imy! *hugs*
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: estee


stop praying right now, mz. bliss! i am not publishing this! if my mom ever discovers the amount of time that i spend on this phorum, i am ophphicially dead! 😆 plus, she already knows about my ... uh ... mild interest in a pair of characters called prem and heer... so stop praying. 😆

🤣 i just dropped by, and guess what i found!!..🤣🤣


Edited by mysticgoryfilms - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
@aditi. 😆 stop laughing at me!!! 😆

@fari: ya,preet-heer just found out the link from each other's past. and ... hmmm! what makes you think a small thing like that is gonna stop prem from his own super-big-brotherly-imagination? 😆 i have a feeling prem wouldn't be prem without those though...

@curledup: oooh, you are an artist! eeps! do tell me if something reads awfully wrong to you -- 'cause i am not one! 😃

@yaz: argh the pressure! 😆 thanks for thinking they make sense.

@shabz!!!!!
: shabz, shabz, shabz! *shrieking with delight!* oh, it's gorgeous to see you -- even for a little while. i hope your semester rocks! when does it get over?? i'm gonna wtf just now -- a small one! don't you wanna see me try to do a small wtf?? hi, shabz. miss you.


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