ff: ''a many splendoured thing', update pg. 102 - Page 18

Originally posted by: estee

@curledup: oooh, you are an artist! eeps! do tell me if something reads awfully wrong to you -- 'cause i am not one! 😃

hi, i read ur updates now.poor heer! i love how they fall with eachother everytime!!!!!!!!! cont.soon

E, 🤗

Awesome......... Love it.

Can you please make Prem laugh? One geniune, heartfelt laugh? I want Heer to be entrapped in that laugh like for ages. Love the direction the story is taking. Just don't let our Mr. Prem Juneja's imagination go wild abt Preet and Heer. Why do I get the feeling that you are going to keep Meher alive in Heer? I think unlike Prem, Preet will be faster to distinguish the difference between the two sisters and he might be the one to sense the growing attraction between Prem and Heer.

Update soon please.

Love,
Ash

Estee i do have faith when it comes you writing on Ph 😊
It's great that both Heer and Preet found out about the truth..and hope he will not try to
find his meher in Heer
why ph always fall on each other? they can't do much about it...Estee is writing it then they have to fall and create all the Phhandooh, pheyeooh, phoooh, phlips and losts ph 😳
Great writing Estee! Estee are you an artist?

My last exam is Jan.29th. 😆 But I got a break in about a month, I should get stretches of time then. 😆

hi Estee,

loved ur ff.its amazing and as i read on again n again i find some strange feeling!!ie ur story getting more shades of brightness as love begin to cast its beauy on Prem N Heer .keep the good job up .actually i dont mind waiting fr a good update or more than one in succession😉.THANK U 👏

Esther.

I just read the whole thing in one sitting -- well, upto chapter 19, where your Prem and Heer are fiercely concentrating on NOT eating each other up right then and there. Now I'm exhausted and will catch up with the rest later.

OMG, Stu, magnolias? And that too in her hair?? You Rat. Now I'm never going to be able to sleep. And that description of her dress -- you copied the idea?? Don't deny it! 😆 So. Does this mean that you'll get yourself one too? 😆

I don't know which was my favourite part -- one I remember was how she was watching him hiding behind the curtains, and he felt her. And DID YOU HAVE HEER STANDING without her clothes on in his Bathroom??! Poor Prem -- NO WONDER he couldn't get to sleep that night! You meanie! 😆

I also actually LOVED that moment in her apartment. Sweet, Stu, that was really sweet. He wipes her tears off. He whispers against her cheekbone. But he leaves without kissing her. Was he just returning favour for favour? Because I can't imagine how SHE went to sleep that night. 😆

I'm really tired, S'rat. If I don't talk to you later today, I have just one message for you -- Your last update (by your OWN hand on the first page) was for 14th?

Do you realise that it's 17th?

You owe another 3 updates already.

No excuses, Stu.

Just do it.

😆

And BTW, Radz is being too sweet to you: you should edit. Especially ... those ones when Prem kissed Heer and both became dizzy and drenched (BTW, seriously needed more clarity on how that happened. 😆) all the way upto when Heer got back to her apartment the next morning. LOTS of editing. Quite sloppy. Not disastrous, of course. But sloppy.

And PLEASE write the Shopian One, please, please, pretty please?? 😃

oye estee 🤗 its 18th nov, 😊 r u planning for 4 updates together 😃, waitingggggggggggggggggggggg. take care, god bless.

hi ........waiting patiently.........its been too long......will u update soon😕😕