ff:a false commitment{I}part 1-34 - Page 30

Originally posted by: aishwaryagayen

THANKS M NOT WRITING MORE AS I HAVE TO HURRY TO UPDATE SO I HOPE U UNDERSTAND I LIKE UR CRTICISM HOPE U DO IT NEXT TIME TTOO

Originally posted by: meeshi.

i hadnt criticise u yaar

hey no offense dear i thnk i didtn hurted u well can say compliments too r a kind of good criticism

Originally posted by: -Pooji-

Hey

Nice update

thankz for pm

hey pooji its ok tc

Originally posted by: meeshi.

i hadnt criticise u yaar

hey no offense dear i ddint ment to hurt u compliments too r a kind of good criticismm

Originally posted by: PremHeer_Chahat

awesomeee
beautiful chapter!!!!
PREET finally understands Prem's feeling!!
continue asap
pm me

thanks ya i l contniue soon and added u 2 my pm list

Hi aishu

Ok sabse pehle main tujhe bahut naraaz ho. Tujhe paat hai na main tere reply ka kitna intzaar kati hoon aur tune ujhe last mein reply kiya, main tujhse baat nahi karti bhootni.ARRE ISILIYE TO LAST MEIN KIYA TAKI TUJHE JYADA KHOJNA NA PARE AUR JAISE HI TU PADHNE AAYE TUJHE MIL JAYE
Par tune itna pyaara reply diya, aur mujhe dedicate bhi kiya, ish liye chal I forgive you, tumhe pata hai ki mujhe kaise manaa hai naa. Thanks aishu, for dedicating this part to me. I loved it sweety HAHA THE PLEASURE WAS ALL MINE I KNOW TUJH JAISI BHOTTNI KI KO KYA PASAND HAI AUR AB MAIN APNE POORE FORM MEIN AAGAI HUN AUR AGLI BAAR TERE FF KA REPLY BHI BADA HOGA ACCHA ISS BAAR JAB TU REPLY KARNA TO APNE NAYE FF KA LINK DE DENA TO THIK HAI BHOOLNA NAHI PAGAL
Coming to update now, Atlast preet maan gaya, he didnt require mush convincing talks, did he? Par agar kashish bol rhai hai toh kyun nahi manega but thanks arohi and arjun to make preet see sense. SAHI ARJUHI ROX
As usual the song that selected to describe prem's feelings was just perfect. preet ke bachche prem ko nbalme kar raha hai, par agar tujhe yaad na ho toh main bata doon ki prem ko tumne kabhi chance hi nahi diya
HAHAHA SAHI KAHA ULTA CHOR KOTWAL KO DAATE I STOLE IT FROM UR FF AHAHHA ALINES
Arjun how could you leave your wife alone with heer, tumhe nahi pata yeh kitna risky hai, I liked the way you portrayed arjun's character aishu. Good bro at least you solved the mystery and I am dead sure you will also get our ram and sita united. Though aishu my heart aches to say this ki hamara prem ki aur ka ho jaye, par I guess this is the demand of the hour, so go ahead and unite themHAHAH SAHI KAHA HAMARA PREM WAIS ESIA MUJHE YAAD NAHI AA RHA PREM HAMARA KABHI THA KYA ????//
Waah preet at last tumne heer ko mana hi liya ki vapis na jaye. I hope now prem makes best use of this opportunity and convince heer soon of his love thank god preet acted firat not like arjun who took so long to get back love birds, ok aishu don't kill me for this plz sweety.
HAHAH I WONT PROMISE
So next update will be comedy, I am looking forward to it. heyy I always notice the pics and quotation you post and also like the way you present it, but last one really touched my heart. Aur thanks kehne ki zarorat nahi hai agar main tujhe dedicate karti hoon, arre tera haq banta hai jaise mera banta hai soooooo sorry ki tujhe include nahi kiya mene apne Os mein par vo prem par nahi tha, isliye mene tere bare mein nahi likha. Aww meri sweetypie rona mat, varna main bhi ro padogi, I will include you next time pucca. Heyy tum bhi OS likho na, hum dono ko include kar usme prem ke saath, interesting hoga, bechara prem hum dono ki beech pish jayega. He would be soooooo confused that whom should he select between us. And madam I am dead sure that you will pass with flying colors. All the best, do well in your exams.
HAHA THANKS I NOT ONLY PASSED I GOT 96 % AND FIRST RANKING IN 8 SECTION OOH I ROCKED STILL I GOT SOME BITTER WORDS FROM PARENTS AS I LOST 2 MARKS IN MATHS OH GOSH YE PARENTS BHI NA
Love you 2
Sia AISH

Originally posted by: sanju_veni

hey great update as usual thanks for pm

thanks for liking dear

AUTHORS NOTE : HEY M BACK TO EAT UR HEADS WITH LOTS OF COMEDY
WEL CANT SAY LOT BUT I PROMISE THIS TIME I WILL GIVE U GOOD SONGS WITH FUNNY SCENES I HAVE DECIDED WHAT TO DO AHEAD WITH THE STORY AND I AM CONTINUING WITH FULL STRENGTH

IMP NOTE: ya one instruction read the lyrics of the song so that u can grab the situation

EVEN MY EXAMS WENT AWESUM SO M SO HAPPY

OK THIS TIME MY FULL PART IS DEDICATED TO MY READER AND FRIEND MISHI WHO LAST TIME COMMENTED FIRST AN DI L REALLY LOVED HER COMMENTS

AND YA SIA M WRITING AN OS OK WITH U AND ME INCLUDED IS JANAM MEIN AGAR POORA HO GAYA TO DIKHA DUNGI

AND SUHANA RISHABH KI KILLING PAKKI I HAVE DECIDED OKKK

SO GOOD NEWS HAHAHAHA
Well in this part I have tried to keep the scenes lighter with extras included so I hope u l forgive me for not only moving the cam around preemer

----- PART – 15 -------------





IN HEERS' HOUSE OR CAN SAY AROHIS HOUSE HEER STARTED PACKING AND AROHI WAS STANDING THERE JUST WATCHING LIKE INSANE
AND THEN PREET AND GROUP ENTERED

PREET :heer u cant go
Heer: I thnk u heard me outside

Preet : arr emian hi chhate hun tum uss prem se door raho { hearing this arjun chuckled form back }par thers a business deal u know and I gt an information that rishabh rampal has also applied for the deal and this failure can destroy his company

Heer: u r here handle It

Preet : plz heer sirf 3 din and then ek aur din for arjun and aorhis marriage plz

Heer: plz yaar don't make me emotional I just want to go away from here

Preet : heer tumne hi kahah tha ki prem ko tum apne jindagi mein wapas nahi laogi so why r u letting him influence so much jst concentrate on ur work yahi to shayad who chhata hai tumhara dhyan business se bhatkana

Heer: preet !

Preet : heer plz

Heer: ok

Arohi : ok guys let heer rest hum baad mien aayenge and aaj ke sangeet ceremony ke liye ready rehna we l pick u up and plz come out of the troma

Heer: bye




THEY ALL LEFT


Heer: itna asaaan nahi hai mere liye arohi itna asaan nahi hai sayad aaj bhi main usse pyaar karti hun par
I never dreamt of our relation ending like this, never dreamt of trying to kill myself ,never dreamt of sleeping with prem when I am not in my senses

This love bites on my body makes me feel like hating him more but I cant understand why I love him so much why ???? why I cant see him bitten up ? why I cant see him crying ? why I cant think of killing him instead of myself why ????……………………………………….




HERE HEER IS GETTING READY FOR SANGEET
And then arohi calls her

Arohi : hey heer tu tayyar ho gayi !
Heer : ya almost
Arohi : preet will pick u up ok
Heer yups

( and then the calling bell of the house buzzed )

heer : ;lagta hai preet aa gaya I l talk later

(she went to the door and opened it )

heer: hi

preet : ready ?

heer : ya come in I have to discuss something

preet : ok

heer: mujhe kal ke tender k ebaar emin baat karni hai what s the situation

preet : all set rishabh wont win and if he doesn't wins this tender will lead to destruction of his company

heer: u sure na do whatever u can use spies , give the members of board a handsome amount of money but I need to win

preet : heer u know we shhould stick to our morals

heer: I don't care just what matters to me is win

preet : as u say but still m sure we l win without using unfare means
ok so lets go now arohi and arjun and pre hm hm (he coughs a little bcz he was nervous due to his tongue slip )
and kahsish is waiting

heer: ya jst a minute

(after that they left for the ceremony )




IN THE SANGET CEREMONY



Heer is sitting in a corner as usual with a cup of black coffee as preet has not allowed drinks in the ceremony
Arohi and arjun fighting as ever

Preet and kashish welcoming the guests

Prem watcing heer from behind the curtains


Arjun : tum ladkiyan kitani boring ho yaar kya ye dhol harmonium leke baith gaye ho

Arohi : ahah hum to bahot boring hai aur tum kya ho ha lallu ladkiyon ke beech phase pade ho

Arjun : haha jao hum jaise hot ladke aur tumhare beech hum marr nahi rahe hai

Arohi : accha really tum aur hot oh my god ! koi a.c on karo kitani garmi ho rahi hai

Arjun : hahah agar dam hai to mahol jama kar dikhao

Arohi : tujhe sahi mein shadi karni hai mujhse ya nahi ???
Arjun : nahi main mazak mein shadi karunga

Arjun : chalo yaaroein inn ladkiyon se kuch nahi hoga hum khai aur chalte hai aur hume kuch na kuch karte hai
(and with that arjun gets up to move )

really nice update dear continue soon plz and thanks for pm.plz pm me