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meeshti jain

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Posted: 15 years ago

#291

Originally posted by: aishwaryagayen
THANKS M NOT WRITING MORE AS I HAVE TO HURRY TO UPDATE SO I HOPE U UNDERSTAND I LIKE UR CRTICISM HOPE U DO IT NEXT TIME TTOO

i hadnt criticise u yaar

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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#292

Originally posted by: yasu09
awesomeeeeeeee................⭐️

thanks yaz and ur new ff mafia rox

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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#293

Originally posted by: meeshi.

i hadnt criticise u yaar

hey no offense dear i thnk i didtn hurted u well can say compliments too r a kind of good criticism

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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#294

Originally posted by: -Pooji-
Hey
Nice update
thankz for pm

hey pooji its ok tc

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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#295

Originally posted by: meeshi.

i hadnt criticise u yaar

hey no offense dear i ddint ment to hurt u compliments too r a kind of good criticismm

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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#296

Originally posted by: PremHeer_Chahat
awesomeee
beautiful chapter!!!!
PREET finally understands Prem's feeling!!
continue asap
pm me

thanks ya i l contniue soon and added u 2 my pm list

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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#297

Hi aishu

Ok sabse pehle main tujhe bahut naraaz ho. Tujhe paat hai na main tere reply ka kitna intzaar kati hoon aur tune ujhe last mein reply kiya, main tujhse baat nahi karti bhootni.ARRE ISILIYE TO LAST MEIN KIYA TAKI TUJHE JYADA KHOJNA NA PARE AUR JAISE HI TU PADHNE AAYE TUJHE MIL JAYE
Par tune itna pyaara reply diya, aur mujhe dedicate bhi kiya, ish liye chal I forgive you, tumhe pata hai ki mujhe kaise manaa hai naa. Thanks aishu, for dedicating this part to me. I loved it sweety HAHA THE PLEASURE WAS ALL MINE I KNOW TUJH JAISI BHOTTNI KI KO KYA PASAND HAI AUR AB MAIN APNE POORE FORM MEIN AAGAI HUN AUR AGLI BAAR TERE FF KA REPLY BHI BADA HOGA ACCHA ISS BAAR JAB TU REPLY KARNA TO APNE NAYE FF KA LINK DE DENA TO THIK HAI BHOOLNA NAHI PAGAL
Coming to update now, Atlast preet maan gaya, he didnt require mush convincing talks, did he? Par agar kashish bol rhai hai toh kyun nahi manega but thanks arohi and arjun to make preet see sense. SAHI ARJUHI ROX
As usual the song that selected to describe prem's feelings was just perfect. preet ke bachche prem ko nbalme kar raha hai, par agar tujhe yaad na ho toh main bata doon ki prem ko tumne kabhi chance hi nahi diya
HAHAHA SAHI KAHA ULTA CHOR KOTWAL KO DAATE I STOLE IT FROM UR FF AHAHHA ALINES
Arjun how could you leave your wife alone with heer, tumhe nahi pata yeh kitna risky hai, I liked the way you portrayed arjun's character aishu. Good bro at least you solved the mystery and I am dead sure you will also get our ram and sita united. Though aishu my heart aches to say this ki hamara prem ki aur ka ho jaye, par I guess this is the demand of the hour, so go ahead and unite themHAHAH SAHI KAHA HAMARA PREM WAIS ESIA MUJHE YAAD NAHI AA RHA PREM HAMARA KABHI THA KYA ????//
Waah preet at last tumne heer ko mana hi liya ki vapis na jaye. I hope now prem makes best use of this opportunity and convince heer soon of his love thank god preet acted firat not like arjun who took so long to get back love birds, ok aishu don't kill me for this plz sweety.
HAHAH I WONT PROMISE
So next update will be comedy, I am looking forward to it. heyy I always notice the pics and quotation you post and also like the way you present it, but last one really touched my heart. Aur thanks kehne ki zarorat nahi hai agar main tujhe dedicate karti hoon, arre tera haq banta hai jaise mera banta hai soooooo sorry ki tujhe include nahi kiya mene apne Os mein par vo prem par nahi tha, isliye mene tere bare mein nahi likha. Aww meri sweetypie rona mat, varna main bhi ro padogi, I will include you next time pucca. Heyy tum bhi OS likho na, hum dono ko include kar usme prem ke saath, interesting hoga, bechara prem hum dono ki beech pish jayega. He would be soooooo confused that whom should he select between us. And madam I am dead sure that you will pass with flying colors. All the best, do well in your exams.
HAHA THANKS I NOT ONLY PASSED I GOT 96 % AND FIRST RANKING IN 8 SECTION OOH I ROCKED STILL I GOT SOME BITTER WORDS FROM PARENTS AS I LOST 2 MARKS IN MATHS OH GOSH YE PARENTS BHI NA
Love you 2
Sia AISH

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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#298

Originally posted by: sanju_veni
hey great update as usual thanks for pm

thanks for liking dear

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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#299

AUTHORS NOTE : HEY M BACK TO EAT UR HEADS WITH LOTS OF COMEDY
WEL CANT SAY LOT BUT I PROMISE THIS TIME I WILL GIVE U GOOD SONGS WITH FUNNY SCENES I HAVE DECIDED WHAT TO DO AHEAD WITH THE STORY AND I AM CONTINUING WITH FULL STRENGTH

IMP NOTE: ya one instruction read the lyrics of the song so that u can grab the situation

EVEN MY EXAMS WENT AWESUM SO M SO HAPPY

OK THIS TIME MY FULL PART IS DEDICATED TO MY READER AND FRIEND MISHI WHO LAST TIME COMMENTED FIRST AN DI L REALLY LOVED HER COMMENTS

AND YA SIA M WRITING AN OS OK WITH U AND ME INCLUDED IS JANAM MEIN AGAR POORA HO GAYA TO DIKHA DUNGI

AND SUHANA RISHABH KI KILLING PAKKI I HAVE DECIDED OKKK

SO GOOD NEWS HAHAHAHA
Well in this part I have tried to keep the scenes lighter with extras included so I hope u l forgive me for not only moving the cam around preemer

----- PART – 15 -------------

IN HEERS' HOUSE OR CAN SAY AROHIS HOUSE HEER STARTED PACKING AND AROHI WAS STANDING THERE JUST WATCHING LIKE INSANE
AND THEN PREET AND GROUP ENTERED

PREET :heer u cant go
Heer: I thnk u heard me outside

Preet : arr emian hi chhate hun tum uss prem se door raho { hearing this arjun chuckled form back }par thers a business deal u know and I gt an information that rishabh rampal has also applied for the deal and this failure can destroy his company

Heer: u r here handle It

Preet : plz heer sirf 3 din and then ek aur din for arjun and aorhis marriage plz

Heer: plz yaar don't make me emotional I just want to go away from here

Preet : heer tumne hi kahah tha ki prem ko tum apne jindagi mein wapas nahi laogi so why r u letting him influence so much jst concentrate on ur work yahi to shayad who chhata hai tumhara dhyan business se bhatkana

Heer: preet !

Preet : heer plz

Heer: ok

Arohi : ok guys let heer rest hum baad mien aayenge and aaj ke sangeet ceremony ke liye ready rehna we l pick u up and plz come out of the troma

Heer: bye

THEY ALL LEFT

Heer: itna asaaan nahi hai mere liye arohi itna asaan nahi hai sayad aaj bhi main usse pyaar karti hun par
I never dreamt of our relation ending like this, never dreamt of trying to kill myself ,never dreamt of sleeping with prem when I am not in my senses

This love bites on my body makes me feel like hating him more but I cant understand why I love him so much why ???? why I cant see him bitten up ? why I cant see him crying ? why I cant think of killing him instead of myself why ????……………………………………….

HERE HEER IS GETTING READY FOR SANGEET
And then arohi calls her

Arohi : hey heer tu tayyar ho gayi !
Heer : ya almost
Arohi : preet will pick u up ok
Heer yups

( and then the calling bell of the house buzzed )

heer : ;lagta hai preet aa gaya I l talk later

(she went to the door and opened it )

heer: hi

preet : ready ?

heer : ya come in I have to discuss something

preet : ok

heer: mujhe kal ke tender k ebaar emin baat karni hai what s the situation

preet : all set rishabh wont win and if he doesn't wins this tender will lead to destruction of his company

heer: u sure na do whatever u can use spies , give the members of board a handsome amount of money but I need to win

preet : heer u know we shhould stick to our morals

heer: I don't care just what matters to me is win

preet : as u say but still m sure we l win without using unfare means
ok so lets go now arohi and arjun and pre hm hm (he coughs a little bcz he was nervous due to his tongue slip )
and kahsish is waiting

heer: ya jst a minute

(after that they left for the ceremony )

IN THE SANGET CEREMONY

Heer is sitting in a corner as usual with a cup of black coffee as preet has not allowed drinks in the ceremony
Arohi and arjun fighting as ever

Preet and kashish welcoming the guests

Prem watcing heer from behind the curtains

Arjun : tum ladkiyan kitani boring ho yaar kya ye dhol harmonium leke baith gaye ho

Arohi : ahah hum to bahot boring hai aur tum kya ho ha lallu ladkiyon ke beech phase pade ho

Arjun : haha jao hum jaise hot ladke aur tumhare beech hum marr nahi rahe hai

Arohi : accha really tum aur hot oh my god ! koi a.c on karo kitani garmi ho rahi hai

Arjun : hahah agar dam hai to mahol jama kar dikhao

Arohi : tujhe sahi mein shadi karni hai mujhse ya nahi ???
Arjun : nahi main mazak mein shadi karunga

Arjun : chalo yaaroein inn ladkiyon se kuch nahi hoga hum khai aur chalte hai aur hume kuch na kuch karte hai
(and with that arjun gets up to move )

and starts singing

om mangalam mangalam ( going closer to arohi and singing near her ear )
om mangalam
mangalam
om mangalam mangalam

om mangalam mangalam
om mangalam
mangalam
om mangalam mangalam
don't want love no need to love { he goes close to AROHI and sings by circling around her }
main to jantar se hi darta hun
bas pyaar ka mantar karta hun
in chakkar mein na parta hun
haye rabba ye kya ho gaya
ja pyaar kambakht ishq
main to haar gaya kambhakt ishq { he touches his forehead by his palm and starts singing loudly holding arohis waist }
mujhe marr gaya kambhakh tishq haye rabba ye kya ho gaya

don't wana love no need to love
don't wanna love don't need to love

mangalam bhagwan vishnu { AROHI went ahead to ARJUN and folding her hands in the pose of prayer started singing the mantars }
mangalam garudar dhwajam
mangalamn pundri kaksham
manga;aya tanohari

u my baby but u driving me crazy crazy boy {now she goes ahead and slams arjuns leg }

u my baby but u driving driving driving { now ARJUN MOVES TOWARDS A GROUP of girl and tries to flirt and arohi watching this is red with anger }

ye arsho ki pariyon ka mela hai { now he started dancing with the girl by twirling one , then moving with the rhythm holding anothers waist , then he goes onnn……….
And here kashish is also angry
Kashish: tum ladko ki ye aadat hoti hai na ladkiyon ko pareshaan karna

Preet : arre hum saar eladko ne kya kiya ??? ye arjun na khud to shaadi karna se raha arohi iss varmala ki jagah jooto se susobhit karegi lekin kamina apni shaadi ke saath saath meri bhi tudwayega }
aur maine bhi har khel khela hai
tu kya jane main deewana hu kacchi kaliyon ka
kyun na mane main awara ashiq hun galiyon ka { now arjun starts teasing arohi by bouncing on her then pokinh her with his shoulder and all…..}
kya pyaar kiya kambhakht ishq main to haar gaya kambhakht ishq
mujhe marr gaya kambhakht ishq haye rabba ye kya ho gaya

don't wanna love don't need to love

meri fasne ki nahi chahhat thi
lekin kismat ne mujhe rahaht di
tu kya jane main deewana jo tera ho gaya { now he watches that arohi is really angry and kashish comes and pulled his ear so he now tries to calm arohi }
kyun na mane main tere pyaar mein hi kho gaya

will umarry me { now he sits down and gave his hand to grab arohis hand but }
no I don't thnk so { arohi said no }

jaa pyaar kiya kambhakht ishq main to haar gayi kambhakht ishq mujhe mar gayi kambhakht ishq haye rabba ye kya ho gaya
om mangallam om mangalam mangalamn

arjun: hey arohi I was kidding yaar
arohi : ho gaya now watch

hey u { she points out her finger to arjun }
meri saans saans tere paas paas yuhi baar baar koi aag aag kyun banta {she moves closer to arjun andarjun is shocked and watches arohi with his mouth opened }
hey u
tere sath saath poori raat raat karu pyaar pyaar wohi baat baat tauba { she holds on the collar of arjun and makes him move towards her }
bebo main bebo dil mera lelo { even kashish and preet are shocked
preet : mat dekho saha nahi jayega ghor kalyug uss kal mein to draupadi ka chilharan hua tha par iss kal mein to khud sakshat arjun ka hi chilharan hone ki naubat a pari hai hey krishna bhagwan iski raksha karo

kashish: shut up preet oops kya scene hai let me watch
pret : ye dekho ab ye balika bhi bigad gayi hai ghor kalyug ghor kalyug }
dil dene aayi lelo ji lelo

sehmi sehmi si main
roko toko na ji
jaan tumse bandhi hai
door jao na ji { now arjun tries to escape but arohi holds him by his sherwanis dupatta and makes him follow her like a cattle following his master when it is caught in a rope }
koi karke bahana
hole hole se jana
humko bhi kya khabar thi
ishq hai apni tutu main mina

bebo main bebo dil merqa lelo
dil denen ayi lelo ji lelo

chupke hcupke mujhe
mudke dekhe kyun ji
sari sari hi main teri teri hun ji
doredale jamana
mera dil nahi manan
teri ek hi nazar mein dil ko hua hai yeye who who

hey u
meri saans saans tere paas paas yuhi baar baar koi aag aag kyun banta { now arohi hholds arjun by his hand and hugs him}
hey u
tere sath saath poori raat raat karu pyaar pyaar wohi baat baat tauba

bebo main bebo dil mera lelo dil denen aayi lelo ji lello { now arjun kisses her on her forehead and everyone claps there }

bebo main bebo dil mera lello dil denen aayi elelo ji ello

heer: oh god tum logo ka drama ho gaya ho to ceremony continue kare

arjun: drama main ram leela wala hun kya

heer : arjun

kashish : rehne do heer in logo ke dimag pe koi baat nahi aane wali sab ke sab bewkoof hai

pret : oh ho ab pati se man ug gaya to humari badnami karo

kashish : ha ug gaya mann

preet : oh ho to apne naye extra marital bf ke baare mein bhi bata do

kashish : bahot hosiyaar ho na khud hi pata kar lo

heer: lolz u guys don't start

kashish : ab start to isne kiya hai to end bhi ye hi karega

main chali

heer : listen kashish !preet tum na! dekho shai kaha usne tum log kise kaam ke nahi ek apni patni se rootha hai ek hone wali patni se aur kuch besharam aise hote hai ki har jagah chale aate hai { she says this by pointing out prem }
and then she leaves too

preet : besharam to hum hai
kya yaar arjun solve karni thi preem ki prob aur ulajh gaye apne probs mein chalo iss ebhi nipta lete hai

kukoo kukooo { preet goes near kashish an starts buzzing aroung her ear }
sapno min aayi ke jaayi ke gori kudiyan humri chrayi le nindiya { he makes a puppy doggy face and tilts his head on the shoulder of kashish }
hum pe girayi ke haye re tu bijuria hum se churaile humka
baharon mein tu hai nazaron mein tu hai { he sees anotther girl and saus those lines like checking her out }
dekhu jidhar bhi wahi tu dikhayi de { then he sees another girl and then tries to flirt and then tooks his hand on his hair }
prem ki nayaa hai ram ke bharose apni bhi nayya ko paar tu lagai de { then he tries to show like he is a saint and makes the pose of doing bhajan by taking his hands up in the air }

lagai de
lagai de

kukoo kukoo

ha karte karte kat na jaye { now preet goes to heer ans says this lines pointing out prem }
bina hi pyaar ko paye
dkeho meri saari hi umar karu main kya { and when heer gives a glance to him he shows like hiis pointing out to kashish }
kahin to hoga koi upay ke tu meri tu ho jaye
chahe mujhko tu bhi umra bhar karu main kya
kya mantar padhu main kya tantar karu main { now its time for prem he sings these lines}
aankhon I chhat tujhe bhi dikhai de

prem ki nayya hai ram ke bharose apni hi nayya ko paar tu lagai de { now three idiots I mean arjun ,preet and prem dances by folding their hands in to prayer pose }

aah ha syyeyyeye sexy sexy { now preet and arjun watches other girls and tries to flirt with their clumsy attitude}

silly willy will willy u take it ur heart say yayayaya

silly wiilly why u gave me ur heart ??{ now kashish and arohi came and holded preet and arjun by their collar and prem was looking at heer }

dil ko dil ki prem kahani zaroori hui sunani
dil ki baat kaise main kahu karu main kya { now prem goes to preet and says this lines }
samjhe na who baat who pagli ke dil ki adla badli ab bin kiya na main rhau karu mian ky a
mai nreh bhi na pau main keh bhi na pau bole bina kaisie tujhko suani de { arohi came to heer and said
heer : tu pagli hahahahaa
and heer became more angry
heer : u too u ppl still want me to believe him }

prem ki nayya hai ram ke bharose apni bhi nayaa ko paar tu lagai de

sapno min aayi ke jaayi ke gori kudiyan humri chrayi le nindiya
hum pe girayi ke haye re tu bijuria hum se churaile humka
baharon mein tu hai nazaron mein tu hai
dekhu jidhar bhi wahi tu dikhayi de

prem ki nayaa hai ram ke bharose apni bhi nayya ko paar tu lagai de
prem ki nayaa hai ram ke bharose apni bhi nayya ko paar tu lagai de{ now all of them started dancing and preet twirled heer and heer lost her balance and then she got supported by prem
}

prem was holding heer by her waist and one hand around her blouse
and everything seemed to be still
both of them looking into each others eyes
and then

tu hi re { prem staightens heer and they still look into each others eyes }
tu hi re
tere bin amain kaise jiyun
aaja re aaja re { heer tries to leave but prem grab her hand and pulls her back to him }
tuhin tadpa na tu mujhko
jaan re jaan re
in saanson mein bas jaa tu { he makes hi hand through her waist and then touches her hair }
chand re chand re
aaja dil ki zameen bhi tu
chhata hai agar aake mujhse mil ja tu { heer turns making her back to prem and prem brings his hand to her bare stomach which is shown from her ghagra }
ya phir aisa kar dharti s emila de mujhko { then pre makes her faace him and sits down by taking his hand forward }
tu hi re tu hi re
tere bin amain kaise jiyun { now heer also gives her hand to prems hand }
aaja re aaja re
yuhin tadpa na tu mujhko

in saanson ka dekho tum pagalpan ke aaye nahi inhe chain { then prem makes her twirl and then swept her from the ground }
mujhse ye bolii main rahon mein teri apne bicha dun main nain { then heer rested her head on his shoulder }
in ucche paharon se jaan de dunga mian { then he brngs her back to the ground }
agar tum na aayi abhi
tum udhar jaar umeed meri jo todo idhar ye jahan chhod du main
maut aa zindagi tere haato mein de diya main { then heer keeps her fingers on his mouth to stop him from saying those words }

aayi re aayi re le main aayi hun tere liye { then she tooks his palm to herr cheak }
toda re toda re har bandhan ko pyaar ke liye { then she again turns her back to him }
jaan re jaan re
aaja tujhme sama jau main { prem holds her again by stomach and then picks her up and makes a round }
dil re dil re
in saanson mein bas jaun main
chhat hai agar aake mujhse mil ja tu
y aphir aisa kar dharti se mila de mujhko
tu hi re tu hi re
tere bina main kaise jiun
aaja re aaja re
yuhi tadpa na tu mujhko { then prem holds her hand and kisses her hand then her neckline , her ears }

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

sau baar bulayi main sau baar aaun { she then kisses his forehead }
ek baar jo dil diya
ek aankh royi to duji bolu soyegi kaise bhala { she then kisses his eyes }
in pyaar ki raho mein pathar hai kitne
in sab ko hai paar kiya
ek naadi hun main chhahat bhari aaj milne sagar ko aayi bhala
sajna sajna aaj aansu bhi meethe l;age { then a tear escaped from prems eyes and heer took her mouth towards it }
tu hi re tu hi re tere bina main kaise jiun
aaja re aaja re yuhin tadpa na tu mujhko jana re jaan re in saanson mein bas ja tu
chqand re chand re
aaja dil ki zameen bhi tu
pal pal pal pal waqt to bita jaye re zara gor zara gor waqt se ke who tham jaye re
aayi re aayire le main aayi hun tere liye
jaan re jaan re aaja tujhme sama jaun main { then they both hugged each other }

OK THAT'S IT FRIENDS BAS ISSE JYADA MIAN NAHI LIKH SAKTI

GIVE UR VALUABLE COMMENTS AS I REALLY WAIT EAGERLY FOR THEM AND YA ALSO CLICK ON LIKE BUTTONS TAKI MERI POSITION HALL OF FAME MEIN KABHI TO BANE

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AISHWARYA GAYEN
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