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Posted: 15 years ago

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Hi aishu hi sia
First and foremost all the best for your exams, ja aur mera aur prem ka naam roshan karke aa. Ok seriously do well. But I will miss your updates.ya il do well aur prem ke liye aur tere liye kuch bhi and i l update dont worry
Wow aishu, aaj toh tu ne chmatkar kar diya, haamare prem se tune heer ko thapad lagva diya, prem tumhe kay problem hai agar vo knofe ko use kar leti toh, achcha aishu tume usse chod diya, varna prem bahut gussa hota humse
hahah isiliye chhod diya nahi to prem bechara tut jata aur thapad mujhe lagane ka mann tha par usne laga diya
Preet ke bachche tune prem ko maara, tu dekh aishu ab kya karegi tera, I promise tu prem se maafi zaroor maagege. Preet itni galiyan nahi dete.haha main pret ka kuch nahi karungi kynki sahi kiya usne gadha prem mujhe bhao hi nahi dtea sahi hua
Toh aishu jo mene socha tha last update mein hoga, vo tune prem ke sath ab kar diya, lagya di naa usse chot, cha lab pohoch uske paas first aid box leke. I am dead sure heer toh kuch nahi karne vaaliaha main hi jaaun first aid box leke maine hi to pitwaya usse main agar gayi to woh mujh mar dalega
Aishu liked this update, especially that quotation, which is so true. That's why we love prem soooooo much, isn't it? he is just like this, a perfect guy for any gal. try and update soon. And give your best in your exams.thanks for liking the wuotation main har baar kuch pics aur puotations deti hun koi dhyan hi nahi deta


and il do my best in exams



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Posted: 15 years ago
Author's note::: oh my god it was so stressful week for me
On one hand periodicals ,then practicals oh god! Well I am also becoming lazy on the matter of updating my ffs like suhana kya kare sangati ka asar

Ok now as its much of pain and tragedies out form my silly mind now its time for some action ,comedy and truth I promise in my next three or four updates I l bring back the track in favour of premeer


And I think this will make u ppl happy

This time I dedicate my part to two of ma friends suhana and sia

And ya thanks sia for dedicqating ur lovely ff to me I was so thqankful and ya suhana update mass soon nahi to mujhse bura koi nahi hoga wais 4ebhi aur koi nahi hai bhi

And ya welcome to my new readers

If anyone wanna like to be added in ma pm list inform me ok

Ok enough see suhana m competing u in my laming habits
M too talking too much

Aur sia ji aap aajka bahot badmash ho gayi hai mujhe os mein include nahi kiya main choti bacchi roungi ab SONG SEQUENCES I USE R LIKED BY U ALL NA
IF U ALL THINK THAT I USE TOO MUCH SONG SEQUENCE THEN TELL ME OK I NEED TO KNOW
ACCHA I HAVE TWO THINGS TO KOW THAT

AND PPL I KNOW SOME PPL DON'T LIKE MY REPAETING A PARA FROM PREVIOUS CHAPTER HABIT BUT I ONLY DO IT SO THT U CAN KEEP A LINK FORM THE BACK CHAPTER
ACTUALLY IT'S A WAY OF WRITING LESS AND SHOWING I WROTE TOO MUCH HAHA{ I CHUCKLE TO MYSELF }


PART 14

Heer: u just get out of my sight what a shameful perjurer u are I mean tumhe jo chahiye tha tumhe mill gaya now what ??? ha u betrayed me , used me , slept with me when I was not in my senses now what more ha

THE WORDS ECHOED IN THE ROOM AND PREET ,ARJUN , AROHI AND KASHISH WERE ALL IN SHOCK HEARING THOSE WORDS

Arjun: heer ye kya keh rahi ho

Arohi : heer u know what u r saying ????

Preet : heer ( he saw heers face which was teling everything)
Prem whats heer saying ha ???/

Prem : ( he was silent as he doesn't have anything to say the person he loved most is now acting like insane )

Preet : u bloody ********

( and with that preet clutched prems collar and gave him a punch which resulted into prems corner of mouth bleed )

arjun : preet plz let him go its not right time to fight

preet: u just stay away arjun
tu hamesha iski side leta hai and see what he did ??? I m going to kill this ****

arohi : heer plz unhe roko plz

preet : ( he moves ahead and gave him another punch which made prem fall on the floor but still he remained quite )

arohi : heer please unhe roko


heer : ( seemed quite and remained silent with half sobbing )

kashish : preet usse chhodo plz preet

preet : I forgave u evrytime prem juneja but not this time what do u think of urself ha
now u watch main tumhe jail tak le jaunga

( and this time when preet was again going to punch him heer stopped them by her words )

heer : preet !

( everyoone stares at her even prem too )

heer : book my tickets for the next flight to canada I am leaving ''.

{with that she stomped out of the room by banging the door everyone was silent and the fight too stopped preet let prem go and sat on the sofa } and prem left with the pain in his heart without saying a word }


preet : she is leaving , going back to her life of hell all bcz of this bloody man

arjun: relax isme prem ki koi galti nahi hai

preet : u still saying isme iski koi galti nahi hai

kashish : pret arjun sahi keh raha hai maine bhi prem ki aankhon mein jaroor koi na koi baat hai

arohi : preet tum bahot kuch nahi jante jo hum jante hai in sab mein main manti hun ki prem ne ek galti ki ki usne bet lagaya tha parr who uski pehli aur aakhri galti thi who heer se oyaar bhi karne laga tha parr uss rishabh ne halat aise show kiye ki we all got confused aur prem ko sabka zimmedaar banaya

arjun: ha preet prem loves her tumhi socho why he would wait for heer like that aur agar if he only needed to sleep with her then why would he save her ????

kashish : preet ! heer ko uski adhoori jindagi se hum aur prem hi bacha sakte hai plz understand

preet : I don't believe him I mean why should I ????

arjun : for ur friend ,for our friend heer
cant u see she still loves her
plz preet lets go and talk to prem plz only he and us altogether can stop her
tumhe heer ke liye ye karna hoga

{ they all watched his melting and changing his expression and that was a good sign and then he nodded in agreement }






AT PREMS' HOUSE WHERE HE WAS SITTING ON HIS TERRACE IN RAIN WITH HIS EYES NUMB

Kaise bataye ke tujhko chahe yara batna paye
Batein dilo ki dekho jo banki ake tujhe samjhaye { HE SEES HIS HAND BY WHICH HE SLAPPED HEER }
Tu jane na
Tu jane na
Tu jane na
Tu jane na { AND HE HITTED HIS HAND HARD ON THE FLOOR }
Mil ke bhi hum na mile
Tumse najane kyun
Milo ke hai fasle tumse na jane kyun
Anjane hai silsile
Tumse na jane kyun
Sapne hai palkon tale
Tums ena jane kyn { HE REMEMBERS THEIR BEAUTIFUL NIGHT WITH EACH OTHER AND HEER SAYING HIM I LOVE U }
Kaise bataye ke tujhko chhae
Yaraa batna paye
Baatein dilo ki dekho jo baki aake tujhe samjhaye
Tu jane na tu jane na tujane na
Tu jane n a

Nigahon mein dkeho meri
Jo hai bas gaya who hai milta tumse hubahu
Jane teri aankhen thi y abaatein thi wajah
Hue tum jo dil ki aarzoo

Tum paas hoke bhi tum aas hoke bhi
Ehsaas hoke bhi
Apne nahi aise hai
Humko gile
Tumse na jane kyun { HE REMEMBERS HEER ACCUSING HIM FOR MAKING LOVE WITH HER ND BRINGING THEIR RELATION INTO EXISTENCE }
Milo ke hai faasle tumse na jane kyun
Tu jane na tu jane na
Tu jane na
Tu jane na

Tu janenna jane na jane na
Tu jane na

Khayalo mein llakhon baat yu to keh gaya
Bola kuch na tere saamne
O o o
Huye na begane bhi tum hoke waarke
Dekho tum na mera hi bane
Afsoos hot hai dil bhi ye rota hai
Sapne sanjota hai badla huya soche ye
Hum the mile tumsena jane kyun milo ke hai faasle tumse na jaane kyun
Anjaane hai silsile tumse na jane kyun
Sapne hai [palko tale tumse na jane kyun { HE SHOUTS HEER SONT LEAVE PLZ HEER DON'T LEAVE }

Kaise bataye ke tujhko chahe yara batna paaye
Baatein dilo ki dekho jo baki aake tujhe samjhaye
Tu jane na
Tu jane na
Tujane na u jane na
Tu jane na
Tu jane na
Tu jna ena
Tu jane na
Tu jane n
Tu jane na




AND THEN PRET ,ARJUN AND KASHISH CAME WHILE AROHI STAYED WITH HEER

PREET :prem !

Prem[ he watches through his painful eyes ]

Preet : we have to stop heer together

Prem:[watched preet with a confused eexpression ]

Preet : hamari dosti itni asani se tod diya ekbaar mujhe bol ke to dekh hot ai know main itna angry tha ki teri baat nahi suni par tu chup chap sehta raha

Prem: he came closer and hugged preet

Prem: thank u thank u


Preet : ya maine tujhe heer ko rokne ka haq to de diya but if u ever dare to bring sorrow in eyes of ma frnd I l hit u much more harder

WHILE ARJUN AND KASHISH WERE SEEING THEM WITH SLIGHT SMILES

Arjun: chalo ab bharat milap ho gaya ho to kuch soche ki jhansi ki rani ko kaise roka jaye
Prem: thanks arjun for always being beside me

Preet : I think hamari ek buiness deal hai it's a tender and she never compromises to her deals so might we could stop her for a week

Arjun : patanahi meri bechari hone ali dulhan jhansi ki rani ke saath kya kar rahi hogi

Preet : tujhe iss situation mein bhi mazak sujh rahaq hai

Arjun: arre jab bharat milap ho gaya hai to ram aur sita bhi mil jayenge


And the screen fades with small laughters



IN HEERS' HOUSE OR CAN SAY AROHIS HOUSE HEER STARTED PACKING AND AROHI WAS STANDING THERE JUST WATCHING LIKE INSANE
AND THEN PREET AND GROUP ENTERED

PREET :heer u cant go
Heer: I thnk u heard me outside

Preet : arr emian hi chhate hun tum uss prem se door raho { hearing this arjun chuckled form back }par thers a business deal u know and I gt an information that rishabh rampal has also applied for the deal and this failure can destroy his company

Heer: u r here handle It

Preet : plz heer sirf 3 din and then ek aur din for arjun and aorhis marriage plz

Heer: plz yaar don't make me emotional I just want to go away from here

Preet : heer tumne hi kahah tha ki prem ko tum apne jindagi mein wapas nahi laogi so why r u letting him influence so much jst concentrate on ur work yahi to shayad who chhata hai tumhara dhyan business se bhatkana

Heer: preet !

Preet : heer plz

Heer: ok

Arohi : ok guys let heer rest hum baad mien aayenge and aaj ke sangeet ceremony ke liye ready rehna we l pick u up and plz come out of the troma

Heer: bye





THEY ALL LEFT


Heer: itna asaaan nahi hai mere liye arohi itna asaan nahi hai sayad aaj bhi main usse pyaar karti hun par
I never dreamt of our relation ending like this, never dreamt of trying to kill myself ,never dreamt of sleeping with prem when I am not in my senses

This love bites on my body makes me feel like hating him more but I cant understand why I love him so much why ???? why I cnat see him bitten up ? why I cant see him crying ? why I cnat think of killilng him instead of myself why ????'''''''''''''''.





Thqats it friends I hope u l like it nd will comment next part will be a comedy update so keep watching


Promo :::::

Preet : mat dekho saha nahi jayega kalyug ki mahabharat jisme arjun ka chilharan ho raha hai '''..


Love u all tc
Aishwarya gayen



Edited by aishwaryagayen - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

hiii aishwarya

awesome update
finally preet understand about prem's feeling
now bharat milap ke baad ram aur sita mil jayenge
loved this line
hope dat yahi hoo
intresting promo
lagta hai next update mein arjun ki bahut pitai hogii arhi k hatho se
lets wait and watch
plz update soon
Edited by meeshi. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Heyy i new readwr of ur FF its amzaing plz add me in ur PM lsit
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeeeeeeee................⭐️
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi aishu

Ok sabse pehle main tujhe bahut naraaz ho. Tujhe paat hai na main tere reply ka kitna intzaar kati hoon aur tune ujhe last mein reply kiya😡, main tujhse baat nahi karti bhootni.

Par tune itna pyaara reply diya, aur mujhe dedicate bhi kiya, ish liye chal I forgive you🤗, tumhe pata hai ki mujhe kaise manaa hai naa. Thanks aishu, for dedicating this part to me. I loved it sweety😃

Coming to update now, Atlast preet maan gaya, he didnt require mush convincing talks, did he? Par agar kashish bol rhai hai toh kyun nahi manega😉 but thanks arohi and arjun to make preet see sense.

As usual the song that selected to describe prem's feelings was just perfect. 👏 preet ke bachche prem ko nbalme kar raha hai, par agar tujhe yaad na ho toh main bata doon ki prem ko tumne kabhi chance hi nahi diya😡

Arjun how could you leave your wife alone with heer, tumhe nahi pata yeh kitna risky hai😆, I liked the way you portrayed arjun's character aishu. Good bro at least you solved the mystery and I am dead sure you will also get our ram and sita united. Though aishu my heart aches to say this ki hamara prem ki aur ka ho jaye,😭 par I guess this is the demand of the hour😆, so go ahead and unite them😊

Waah preet at last tumne heer ko mana hi liya ki vapis na jaye. I hope now prem makes best use of this opportunity and convince heer soon of his love😊 thank god preet acted firat not like arjun who took so long to get back love birds😆, ok aishu don't kill me for this plz sweety.😊

So next update will be comedy, I am looking forward to it. heyy I always notice the pics and quotation you post and also like the way you present it, but last one really touched my heart. Aur thanks kehne ki zarorat nahi hai agar main tujhe dedicate karti hoon, arre tera haq banta hai jaise mera banta hai😉 soooooo sorry ki tujhe include nahi kiya mene apne Os mein par vo prem par nahi tha, isliye mene tere bare mein nahi likha. Aww meri sweetypie rona mat, varna main bhi ro padogi😭, I will include you next time pucca. Heyy tum bhi OS likho na, hum dono ko include kar usme prem ke saath😉, interesting hoga😆, bechara prem hum dono ki beech pish jayega. He would be soooooo confused that whom should he select between us😆. And madam I am dead sure that you will pass with flying colors. All the best, do well in your exams.

Love you

Sia

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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeee
beautiful chapter!!!!
PREET finally understands Prem's feeling!!
continue asap
pm me
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey great update as usual thanks for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: meeshi.

hiii aishwarya

awesome update
finally preet understand about prem's feeling
now bharat milap ke baad ram aur sita mil jayenge
loved this line
hope dat yahi hoo
intresting promo
lagta hai next update mein arjun ki bahut pitai hogii arhi k hatho se
lets wait and watch
plz update soon

THANKS M NOT WRITING MORE AS I HAVE TO HURRY TO UPDATE SO I HOPE U UNDERSTAND I LIKE UR CRTICISM HOPE U DO IT NEXT TIME TTOO
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: additi10

Heyy i new readwr of ur FF its amzaing plz add me in ur PM lsit

ADDED U TO MY LIST THANKS FOR READUING TC

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