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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#311

Originally posted by: meeshi.
hiiiiiiiiiiii
awesome update
loved prem's song
and preet's song also
arohi and arjun's part was amazingg
do update soon

thanks for loving meeshi love u sweetheart and ya will update in a day or less than a day

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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#312

hey pooji and yaz thanks for ur comments dear

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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#313

Originally posted by: premeeristry
hey aishwarya zabardast update
this was my first ff to read on this forum and i found it d most intrstng,suspenseful,funny............................
on the whole the best ff in the whole forum.the twist n turns u take in it are mindblowing 👏.after much depression putting the three idiots onnn entertainment was coool esply preet n arjun😆 and i think prem is imagining this tu hi rey.. song(not happening b/w them) in next update heer shud put down lbooyd rishab in their deal... hope so.if u liked my comments u can add me in ur pm list. anxiously waiting for update.......

saba

thanks dear

oh so u new in this corner hmm interesting and u liked my ff thank u so much sweety ur comments were really heart touching hahaha
oh m so glad u calle dmy ff the best hahahah thanks sweety
haha ya i like making moments lighter jyada depressison ho gaya to hum depress ho jayenge
haah well u l kno win next part that it was a n imagination or not but ur suspect is true
ya weell in a part or two this rishabh will be crushed
ya i l update soon
and added u to my pm list
do commenting sweety ur coment is rreally sweet

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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#314

Originally posted by: luv_kdmhmd
Hi aishu
🤗
First and foremost congratulations for such fantastic marks. Bechari ko uncle aunty ne data,awww😆, you know even I was on top of the world when I scored 100% in maths, I know what you would be feeling. Tune mera aur prem ka naam roshan kar diya sweety. Tujhe typhoid ho gaya tha😲, ab toh theek hai na??????? tabhi main kahu na tu reply kar rahi hai, na update kar rahi hai. No problem sweety you can reply whenever you want to. What matters the most that you read the update and liked it😛 I know vo line tune meher ke dialogue se chorayi thi naa bhootni😉😆, now to update:
God heer is so desperate to win from rishabh, why wouldn't she? Go ahead preet I am with heer in this. do whatever you can that rishab has to be destroyed.😡 and aishu you make that happens, varno tu gayi mere haaton se😆
Preet si very smart, ya bro no hard drinks in the sangeet, you na phir kya hota premeer ke beech😉, mera matlab hia aishu ko aur mauka mil jayega premeer ke beech misundersatanding create karne ka😆 toh ajun lallu, wow arohi what a name😉 god knows ahaadi ke baad aur kya-2 naam honge arjun ke🤣
Preet arjun ka toh pata nahi, par tumhari shaadi mujhe zaroor khatre mein lag rahi hai😆pehle uski harkaton ki vajah se tumne kashish ne sab ladko par comment kiya, and now phir jo arohi ne kiya, tab bhi dekho achchi kashi ladki ko bigad diya, I guess she is finding arjun more hot than you, you better do something bro, varna arjun baazi marr jayega🤣
Perfect name for them aishu'3 idiots🤣 and the biggest of all is our prem, aur I am dead sure you know why😉 aishu songs were just perfect for each and every situation I loved all of them. sab theek atlast premeer ke beech, thank god now I wait for their romantic moments
Loved this update aishu, I was really laughing a lot. great work. Aur ek aur baat tera prem tha ya nahi mujhe nahi pata, par prem mera that, hai aur rahega😆, you remember shimla na😉, just kidding yaar prem ko humse koi dor nahi kar sakta.
And I would for our OS, and one more good news even I am writing one, where I would feature in it with prem, ab khush naa meri sweetypie. Par pehle tu likh phir main likhongi😉
Love you sweety
Sia

Hi sia bhootni thank u sia ha mere dad mom mujhe abhi bhi daatte aur peette hai bechari main oh really so u too brilliant like me haahahah good acchi jodi hai apni hahahah prem ka naam aise hi ashlesha ne bahot roshan kar liya hai meri jarrorat nah ahi abe kitni baar batau jaundice jaundice jaundice ha thik hun main ya that's whay I cant update pr reply haah tu likhti hi itna accha hai ki main chorni ban gayi hun ya ab rishabh ki dekh main band bajaungi aur marwaungi usse haahha no hard drinks good preet ye mera preet hai na usiliye haha abhi to lallu bol ahai ab bewkoof bloody doogy ye sab bolegi haah bechare preet hahaha sach mein arjun bazzi marega to preet rota reh jayega aise hi rota rehta hai

Ya they r 3 idiots and prem is the biggest one haah romantic moments ???? dekh aage romance ko main horror mein kaise badalti hun ohhhh prem tumhara hai aur rahega hahaah to mujhe saali bana lena yaar kam se kam aadhi ghrawali to baungi main yayayyaya thanks for featuring me woohpieeee
Hahha thik hai thik hai blckmail mat kar likhti hun na os os ka tu bole to ff likh dungi main aur main aur tu milke padhenge

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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#315

Authors note : m back sorry for being late here it comes the part sixteen my god my ff is going well I thought it would end in more that 10 parts and no comments
Thanks to u all

PART – 16

prem was holding heer by her waist and one hand around her blouse
and everything seemed to be still
both of them looking into each others eyes
and then

tu hi re { prem staightens heer and they still look into each others eyes }
tu hi re
tere bin amain kaise jiyun
aaja re aaja re { heer tries to leave but prem grab her hand and pulls her back to him }
tuhin tadpa na tu mujhko
jaan re jaan re
in saanson mein bas jaa tu { he makes hi hand through her waist and then touches her hair }
chand re chand re
aaja dil ki zameen bhi tu
chhata hai agar aake mujhse mil ja tu { heer turns making her back to prem and prem brings his hand to her bare stomach which is shown from her ghagra }
ya phir aisa kar dharti s emila de mujhko { then pre makes her faace him and sits down by taking his hand forward }
tu hi re tu hi re
tere bin amain kaise jiyun { now heer also gives her hand to prems hand }
aaja re aaja re
yuhin tadpa na tu mujhko

in saanson ka dekho tum pagalpan ke aaye nahi inhe chain { then prem makes her twirl and then swept her from the ground }
mujhse ye bolii main rahon mein teri apne bicha dun main nain { then heer rested her head on his shoulder }
in ucche paharon se jaan de dunga mian { then he brngs her back to the ground }
agar tum na aayi abhi
tum udhar jaar umeed meri jo todo idhar ye jahan chhod du main
maut aa zindagi tere haato mein de diya main { then heer keeps her fingers on his mouth to stop him from saying those words }

aayi re aayi re le main aayi hun tere liye { then she tooks his palm to herr cheak }
toda re toda re har bandhan ko pyaar ke liye { then she again turns her back to him }
jaan re jaan re
aaja tujhme sama jau main { prem holds her again by stomach and then picks her up and makes a round }
dil re dil re
in saanson mein bas jaun main
chhat hai agar aake mujhse mil ja tu
y aphir aisa kar dharti se mila de mujhko
tu hi re tu hi re
tere bina main kaise jiun
aaja re aaja re
yuhi tadpa na tu mujhko { then prem holds her hand and kisses her hand then her neckline , her ears }

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

sau baar bulayi main sau baar aaun { she then kisses his forehead }
ek baar jo dil diya
ek aankh royi to duji bolu soyegi kaise bhala { she then kisses his eyes }
in pyaar ki raho mein pathar hai kitne
in sab ko hai paar kiya
ek naadi hun main chhahat bhari aaj milne sagar ko aayi bhala
sajna sajna aaj aansu bhi meethe l;age { then a tear escaped from prems eyes and heer took her mouth towards it }
tu hi re tu hi re tere bina main kaise jiun
aaja re aaja re yuhin tadpa na tu mujhko jana re jaan re in saanson mein bas ja tu
chqand re chand re
aaja dil ki zameen bhi tu
pal pal pal pal waqt to bita jaye re zara gor zara gor waqt se ke who tham jaye re
aayi re aayire le main aayi hun tere liye
jaan re jaan re aaja tujhme sama jaun main { then they both hugged each other}

Then a slight jerk to prems body maded him realize that he was dreaming and heer was not hugging her inspite she was looking him with great anger

Heer : how dare u touch me ?

Prem : heer u were going to fal….

{ but heer didn't letted him finish his statement inspite she slapped him hard on his face }

heer: u r so shameful ne still u trying to explain
{ everyone started staring to them and preet came forward }

preet : its not his fault !

heer : u jst shut up m not talking to u ok I know u were trying to support him ,I know that from the time u didn't letted me go but still I thought ok for arohis sake I should stop
{ between all this prem was silent and didn't uttered a word }

how could u prreet ? how could u ? I mean u were my best friend can t u see what he did to me and still u supporting him

preet: I am supporting him bcz I know he is right

heer : right ? u meant to say that he did right in cheating me ? u meant to say I deserve that hun

preet : its not like that heer u r so blind in taking the revenge jst see he loves u

heer : this man this prem juneja loves me
ok mr . juneja so u love me hun
I know u love me that's why u took me to bed
I know u love me physically
I know

Preet : heer ! jst see what and where r u saying what ?

Heer: why preet m I saying something wrong ???

Preet : just calm down heer plz for gods sake we can sit and talk

Heer: talk with whom ? this animal

Preet : mind ur tongue damn it I know ur my friend but I cant let u do wrong

Heer: ha now this prem juneja has become so good for u that u telling me to stop par kuch din pehle to u were supporting me
Hun
Now don't tell me he paid u for this preet

Preet : prem why r u listening all this why don't u say her ?

Prem: I don't have anything to explain
Bcz she doesn't want to listen
I have tried enough now more
U want to go ms. Mann so jst go I damn don't care
M sick and tired of explaining myself now m fine with ur descision
Jst fine with ur descision now I wont follow u with my apologies if everything have to fine then the first move will be urs not mine then after ur move only I m going to do something
{" with that prem left from there to outside }

heer: bloddy slut
trying to prove himself so good

{ with that she too left for the balcony upstairs }

upstairs in the balcony

heer : was wiping her tears when suddenly she got pulled by some force and she was about to shout when someone putted a hand on her mouth to stop her from shouting

heer was stunned to look into those familiar pair of eyes which were red with anger
she tried to move but was again pinned ot the wall

her body frame was fitted in his frame and she was looking into his eyes
on the other hand he was holdong her one shoulder and other hand on her mouth he was so angry that he even didn't realized that he was poking her

heer tried to say but
prem : sshh no heer not now
now m going to speak and u l listen jst listen
you accused me of cheating u na right yes I did cheated u and I admit that but why don't u think about my feelings which I told u
that day on cliff u didn't even gave me a chance to prove myself and u blved whom that rishab
{ this time heer made herself free and turned her back towards him }

heer: I don't want to hear jst go

{ prem again pulled her and making her face him he holded her through her waist }

prem : u have to damn it u have to listen me
that night when u slept with me u don't remember anything but u slept with ur wish I didn't raped u damn it
and if u think so then why didn't u filed a police complaint ha
I l tell u the answer bcz u love me and u too know that but u cant admit that bcz ur so called ego is making u suffer '

Heer: prem u r hurting me let me go

Prem : m hurting u hun and u don't u remember how much u hurted me u tried to kill urself ha if I don't loved u why would have I gone to save u hun if I was only concerned with lust then why would I needed to save u after completing my desires ha bcz I love u

Heer: u don't u don't love me

Prem : yes I do 'and u too love me

Heer: r u deaf I hate u I don't love u

Prem : yes u do the tears in ur eyes says everything jst think jst think { with that he forced his lips to her and gave her a small kiss flavoured with butterscotch }
Heer: what the hell jst let me go

Prem : And ya m leaving tomorrow I wont be back to u to convince u bcz u r not the one I know and I don't convince strangers

{ with that prem left her }

That's all friends

Love
Aishwarya gayen