'Main Prem Ki Diwani Hoon' FF(FULL UPDATE page-24)

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 16 years ago

#71

omg wounder wt will happen next great update

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@PrincessPatel77

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Posted: 16 years ago

#72

awesoem update

i hate rishaab wanna kill him lol

anyways continue asap

thanks for the pm

pm me!!!!!!!

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Whypadhu

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Posted: 16 years ago

#73

fantastic frnd
update next part asap
plzzzzzzzzzzzz

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@luv_kdmhmd

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Posted: 16 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: hreeyaa
sia love story problem bina majahi nehi ata n yea problem itni jaldhi nehi khatam hogi aur abhi taak to ash n gay3 ka part bakihi hain

matlab you plan to keep it full on naa. no problems i am with you because I totally agree with you ki problem ke begar love story mein mazaa hi nahi aata hai😉. so here is the commment for eighth part

prem loves heer so much👏. He is angry becos he thinks heer doesn't love him but its not true. I hope he stops before she gets into some problem. Well heer's decision to leave the house is right. If prem feels that she is a burden on him than better stay away from him then living with rishab. It is gud that she believes in taking in own decisions and stands by them. Nice update.😊

ninth part:It was a sad update though you wrote it nicely. First I was happy ki prem heer ko ghar le aaya. Par last mein heer usse chod kar chali gayi. I want prem to stop heer. I hope he understands she loves him and only him and rishab is such a big lier. I just wished that you would have elaborated more on the moments between heer and prem. Rest was good. Thanx for pm.😊

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Edited by luv_kdmhmd - 16 years ago

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@hreeyaa

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Posted: 16 years ago

#75

thanks every one 4 ur comments n sorry 4 late update

part-10

heer:chalo rishab!

rishab:haan

some one knock the door

prem:(opened the door) maa!!!

gay3:prem kaysa hain tu?

prem:pairipona maa,bauji pairipona

heer:pairipona...pairipona

gay3:prem yea koun hain?

prem:maa aap chaloye mere sath main bata hoon

prem&gay3 room mein geye

lallu:beti tumhara naam keya hain

heer:heer

lallu:(mind)heer...premheer kitna achaa milta hain na.yea larki mere prem k liyea ekdaam thik hain us ash je jeyada.pata nehi kyun mujhe iss larkiki akhen mein ek kasish dikhta hain lagta hain k yea prem se payar karti hain kuch na kuch rishta to hainhi iska prem k sath...achaa beti tum kahan rehti hoon?

heer:ji kalkata.

here....

gay3:koun hain yea larki?

prem:bo maa iska yahan koi nehi hain (saabkuch bola)

gay3:oh.(mind)aysa kyun lagta hain prem isse...nehi nehi..prem tujhe to pata hi hain k tere bauji ne ash k baujiko wada kiya tha k ash ki shaddi tere sath hi hogi ash k bauji to gujaar geye paar tere bauji iss wade mein aatal hain.agar tune ash se shaddi nehi ki to tere bauji..

prem:maa!aysa maat boliye main karunga ash shaddi(mind)issliye hi o cahkaar bhi heer ko...achaa maa main abhi aata hoon

gay3:haan

lallu:prem main jara fresh ho kaar aata hoon

prem:jo bauji

heer:chalo rishab

prem:heer

heer ruki

prem:kuch din rukh jaou..

heer:

prem:maa bauji aye hain kaamse kaam unke liyehi 2 din k liyea to rukh jaou

heer bag n rishab ka haat chor diya n andaar chali gei

rishab:oho aab yea kaya drama hain itni mushkil se razi hui thi aur tumne😡

prem:sirf 2 din ki hito baat hain😕

rishab:haan heer to mera hi hain sirf 2 din k liye tumhare paas chorraha hoon😈

prem:😭

prem kitchen geya

prem:hee thanks rukhne k liyea

heer:main sirf maa aur bauji k liyea ruki hoon sirf unke liyea

prem:😕

gay3:tum abh taak gaie nehi?

prem:haan maa aapdono k liyehi rukhne ko kaha aapdono kitne din baad aye hain

gay3:oh😡

prem&heer chale geye

ash:(called gay3)hello maa?

gay3:haan beti

ash:dekha aapne maine bola tha na us larki k liyea prem mujhe ignore karraha hain dekha us larkiko aapne?

gay3:haan dekha bohot chalak larki hain issko yahan se nikalne hi to main yahan aie hoon tu chinta maat kaar prem sirf terahi hain.acha main aab rakhti hoon

ash:achaa thik hain.

gay3:prem k dimaag mein to maine uske bauji ka wada daal diya paar yea larki agar yahan jedadin taak rehi to yea firse prem ko aapni chungaal mein bandh legi.mujhe jaldh se jaldh kuch karna parehga.😈

MORNING...........

heer:maaji chai

gay3:haan or suno mujhe auntiji kaho samjhi

heer:ji😭

gay3:suno!

heer:ji auntiji😭

gay3:haan..tum yahan aur kitne din rehne wali hoon?

heer:😭😭

gay3:mera maatlaab hain prem ka saggai or kuchhi dino baad hone wala hain isslie tum agar yaha rehi to...samajh rehi hoon na tum main kaya bool na cahrehi hoon?

heer:ji auntiji main chali jaoungi...

gay3:haan jaldhse jaldh haan bo keya hain na kitni din ek larki ko bardaas karega prem bohi ek mamuli si...

heer rote rote boha se chali gei room mein bag pack karrehi hain

prem:heer kaya hua?

heer kuch nehi bool rehi hain rorehi hain n packing karrehi hain

prem:(heer ko aapne taraf khich k)heer kaya hua tum ro kyun rehi hoon.?

heer:mujhe jana hain abhi

heer jarehi hain

prem:(holding heer's hand)heer kaya hua tum ro 2 din rukhne wali thi kisi ne kuch kaha kaya

heer:nehi mera haat choro rishab mera intezaar karraha hain(prem ka haat hata diya n chaloi gei)

prem dour k heer piche geya heer ghar se bahar nikal gaie.

prem:heer..heer

gay3:prem rukh!!kaha ja raha hain tu iss larki k piche

prem:maa bo heer ja rehi hain heer

gay3:haan usse to ek na ekdin janahi tha aur bo aapne MANGITAAR k sath jarehi hain😈

prem:(rukhgeya)😭

gay3:thik kahana maine😈

prem:haan😭(chala geya wahan se)

gay3:huh yea do couri k larki ko hata mere bai haat ka kail ta..

here.......

heer and rishab car mein beithea.

heer:rishab yea kahan jaarehe hoon tum haam to kalkata jane wale thea na maa k paas?????????

rishab:nehi tm mere sath mere ghar jaougi mere saath saddi karwake hi main tumhe kalkata legaounga nehi to tum firse bhaag jaougi

heer:rishab!!!!mujhe nehi jana tumhare sath gari roko rishab gari roko....😭

rishab:jana to tumhe mere sath parehoga aur yahan tumhara prem nehi hain jo tumhe bachayega.....😈

aab kaya hoga heer k sath keyse mill payenge aab prem aur heer.................................

TO BE CONTINUED..........................