'Main Prem Ki Diwani Hoon' FF(FULL UPDATE page-24)

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@hreeyaa

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Posted: 16 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: pRaTiBhA.1990
haww..wats dis..rishabh is heer's fiancee...aww...poor prem..hope he realises his love 4 heer asap...............

rishab isn't heer's fiance bo prem ko heer se door karne k liyea jhoot bool raha hain

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pratibha singh

@pratsy

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Posted: 16 years ago

#52

i hate rishabh..he is a devil....................hawwwwww............heer ko 2 thappad maarne chahye use

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@PrincessPatel77

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Posted: 16 years ago

#53

awesome update
continue asap
wanna kill Rishab!!!!!
anyways continue asap
pm me when u update!!!!!!!!

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NOOR

@Noor_PremHeer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#54

ohh nice update but that rishab......arrggg

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sia

@luv_kdmhmd

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Posted: 16 years ago

#55

till now i have read till sixth chapter and i am commenting for that.

it was awesome ria at last she said it. But how could prem do that. He loves her and still he is giving her so much pain. Now I understand why he always avoided her. This explains why he left early and came back late. I hope this problem is sorted out soon and I hope heer gets what she deserves---prem's love. He should give them a chance. Thanx for pm. This is really a cute love story.😊

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@hreeyaa

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Posted: 16 years ago

#56

thanks everyone 😛

part-8

prem ghar poucha heer ko dekhtehi usse aur bhi gussa ageya.

heer:tm aageye main kaab se intezaar karrehi thi tumhara

prem koi ans na karke gusse mein heer k room geya n almaari se heer ka kaapra nikal k uske bag mein rakhraha hain

heer:are yea kaya karrehe hoon tum.kaya hua prem?

prem bag pack karke room mein rakh diya aur fresh hone geya

heer:are kaya hua aaj prem ko itne din to sirf mujhe ignore karraha tha paar aajto bohot gussa laagraha hain.kaya hua..

heer prem paas gaie

heer:kaya hua prem tum mujhe batate kyun neh akhir hua kaya(prem laptop pai kaam karraha hain gusse mein)

heer prem k coffee banane gaie

heer:mere haat ka coffee pite hi thik ho gayega uska gussa😳.prem yea lo coffee

prem nehi leraha hain.

heer:prem lona..

prem heer ko dhakka dekaar coffee uske haat se gira deta hain.

heer:prem!!!

prem:(heer ko joor se pakarh ke)kaya sunna cahti hoon tum mujhse haan kaya.(heer daar gaie)aur tum hoti koun ho meri itni fikaar karne wali koun hoon tum???😡😡ARE MERA FIKAAR KYUN KARTI HOON JISKA FIKAAR KARNA HAIN USKA KARONA MUJHE AAB CHORO!!!😡

prem heer chor deta hain n sojata hain.heer dour kaar aapne room main jakar door bandh karke rorehi hain.

prem:mujhe kaya ho raha hain achai hain k heer rishab se payar karti hain uske sath chali jayegi fir mujhe itna gussa kyun aaaraha hain main uske sath aysa behave kyun kiya!

heer:prem ko akhir hua kaya hain bo mere sath aysa behave kyun karraha hain aaj taak usne to kabhibhi aysa nehi kiya tha mere sath.😭.

MORNING........

prem shooting k liyea geya.

rishab:prem!

prem:tum yahan?

rishab:haan tu to mere baat bhul hi geye heer ko bhejhne ka

prem:nehi bo tum kaal ajana usse lene😕

rishab:haaan haan thik hain.😈

prem ghar aya.

heer:ajj kuch nehi puchungi isse

prem:aaj agar kuch puch liya to..

prem fresh ho kaar nikla n dekha heer kitchen mein upaar se kuch saman nikal rehi hain n suddenly bo gir nehi wali thi paar premne aakar usko pakarh liya.heer prem k bahoon mein😳
prem heer niche utara

prem:kyun baar na cahte huea bhi main heer k taraf khicha jaraha hoon.

MORNONG......

heer utthi..

heer:are 10 baaj rehe hain prem abhi taak nehi geya!!

prem laptop mein kaam karraha tha.

heer:prem aaj tum nehi geye?

prem:haan bo aaj..

rishab door knock karraha hain

heer:koun hain iss waqt?

door open kiya.

heer:(surprise)RISHAB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

rshab:haan main.

heer:tum yahan kaya karrehe hoon?😡😡

prem:mainehi bulaya hain isse😭

heer:(shocked)prem tumne!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

rishab:haan tumhe yahan se lejane k liyea..

heer:kaya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

prem k paas gaie.

heer:kaya yea sach bool raha hain?

prem:haan!😭😭

heer:(dil toot geya)

prem se door gaie.

heer:(dhire dhire piche jarehi hain)main nehi jaoungi...nehi jaoungi main..sunah tum ne nehi jaoungi main isske sath.(prem collar pakarhke)kyun kiya tumne aysa kyun kitna payar karti hoon main tumse.aur tumne mere payar ka yesilah diya.are tumne to payar se hi mera wishwah utha diya.(dour k aapne room mein gaie n door bandh kardiya)

rishab:heer dekho tumhe mere sath jana toh paregahi heer bahar niklo heer

prem:rishab dekho tum yahan se aab jaou main heer ko samjhata hoon.

rishab:paar

prem:pls tum jaou

rishab geya.

prem:heer bahar aou heer rishab chala geya hain

heer bahar aie

heer:kyun preem kyun kiya aysa tumne?😭😭

premkaya kiya jo kiya thik hi kiya aur kitni din pari rahogi tum yahan mere shaddi hone wala hain mere family agar tumhe yahan dekhliya to kaya kahenge k kyun rakha maine ek anjaan larkiko itne dino taak aapne ghar mein.😡😭

heer bina kuch bole aapna bag lekaar jarehi hain

prem:(heer ka haat pakarh k)aab kaha jarehi hoon?

heer:bojh hoon na tumpaar to jarehi hoon paar rishab k sath to hjargis nehi rehlungi kahibhi paar rishab k sath nehi jaoungi😡

heer chali gaie.

prem:heer..heer....rukho..heer...shit!!!😡

yea aya kaysa moor indono k payar mein kaya abhi mill payenge yea do dil..................

TO BE CONTINUED...............