'Main Prem Ki Diwani Hoon' FF(FULL UPDATE page-24)

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Prem4everRamsha

@Prem4everRamsha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#81

omgggggg i just read ur ff and it is the bombbb!!!!!!! plz pm me wen u update...............

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...Nikhita...

@...Nikhita...

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Posted: 16 years ago

#82

nice one........but sad........get premeer together as soon as possoble!

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cute_1790

@cute_1790

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Posted: 16 years ago

#83

i just read all the parts of ur ff.........
i must say u r a wonderful writer👏
i really liked ur ff a lot...
m desperately waiting for next part n want to know how will Prem stop Heer wedding...
plz post next part ASAP n plz if u can add me to ur PM list

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@hreeyaa

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Posted: 16 years ago

#84

thanks everyone 4 u comments am very happy tht u all lyk my ff.yaa i will pm u all....😉
sorry main aaj pm nehi kaar paoungi i am very very busy with my study sorry
part-11

heer:rishab nehi main tumhare sah nehi jaoungi

rishab car se uthra n heer ko nikala

rishab:chalo!

heer:nehi rishab choro mujhe choro!

rishab heer ko room mein lock kardiya

rishab:aab pari rahoon yahan.jaabtaak main sara intejaam nehi karleta tum yehin rahogi

heer:nehi!!😭😭😭

rishab chala geya

heer:mujhe kuchbhi karke yahan se nikalna hoga.haan main agar kalkata se bhaag sakhti hoon to yahanse kyun nehi

heer bohot mushkil se window se bhaagg gaie.heer douri douri prem k ghar pouchi

heer:yea kaya yahan to koi function k tayari ho rehi hain

servant:are aap yahan?

heer:haan yahan kaya ho raha hain?

servant:bo aaj sahab ki saggai hain na

heer:💔kaya!!!!!!!!!!!

heer boha se chali gei

heer:prem tum aysa keyse kar sakhte hoon.aab mein kaha jaou...😭

here..........

prem ready ho raha hain😭😭😭

gay3:beta tu taiaar bo geya?

prem:haan maa😭😭

gay3:tu ayse uddaas kyun hain aab mujhe lagraha hain k main tera khushi chin na cahrehi hoon.

prem:nehi maa😭😭

gay3:dekh yea saab to tere bauji k liyeahi karna parraha hain na tu samajhbeta..

lallu:kaya!!!!!!!!!

gay3:shocked n scared

prem:bauji!

lallu:prem tujhe mere liyea koi tarag karen ki jarirath nehi hain.tu jaa heer k paas waise mujhebhi bo larki bohot achi lagti hain

prem:😃kaya!!

lallu:haan beta ja

prem:thank u bauji thank u

prem doura doura geya

to be continued.................

Edited by hreeyaa - 16 years ago

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Riya

@PrincessPatel77

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Posted: 16 years ago

#85

awesome update
continue asap
yeah prem is going to heer!!!
please continue asap
pm me when u update

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topsyturvy23

@topsyturvy23

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+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#86

hey really nice update n thanks for pm plz update soon

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Whypadhu

@Whypadhu

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Posted: 16 years ago

#87

nice update
nut very short update
i cant waiting for next part
plzzzzzzzzzzz prem and heer ko ek karlo

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Komal

@Momana

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Posted: 16 years ago

#88

awesome update...😛
continue soon...
pm me when u update

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Prem4everRamsha

@Prem4everRamsha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#89

yessssssssss finally premmmm go go go.......... yaar update thoda chota tha......... anywayz i love it snd im a new reder sooo plz add me to ur pm listt....... u are a natural!!!........... plz update soon

~ Love Ramisha