'Main Prem Ki Diwani Hoon' FF(FULL UPDATE page-24)

hreeyaa thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 16 years ago
#1
hi frnds am ria.i am writing this ff 4 all harshad chopra fans.if u lyk it then its simple 2 explain just comment n press the like botton


heer: A naughty girl.shes very simple.live in kalkata with her mom and brother.she has 4 frnds in college.her hobbie is watching tv shows.her fav show is kaysa yea payar hain.in this show she loves angad(iqbal khan)alot.she use internet 2 search abt angad.she passed her tym with computer tht's y her parents always scold her.

heer



heer:(in dream)hi angad u r so handsome i love u angad i love u...

mom:heer kaya karrehi hain uuth uuth!!!

heer:uuf maa mera itna sundar sapna kharab kardiya.

mom:chal taiar hoon college jana hain.teri frnd baar baar call karrehi hain.

With her frnd.

heer:meher kaya bataou tujhe maine aaj sapne main kisko dekha!

meher:aur kisko angad ko!

heer:haan.oh kaya sapna tha!

meher:heer tujhe kitni baar bolu k yea payar nehi hain tu abhi taak payar kaya hota hain nehi samjhi.bo sirf ek actor hain jo tujhea achea lagte hain baas yea payar nehi hain.pata nehi kaab samjhea gi tu k yea payar kaya hain.tu pehlebhi to kutumm show k actor pratham(hiten tejwani) se payar karti thi na aab show khatam toh payar bhi khatam?

heer:are bo payar thodi tha yea payar hain.tu nehi samjheagi.

veera:hi heer.

heer:hi

veera:u know aaj maine sapne mein kaya dekha angad ko.oh hes so handsome.i love him alot.

heer:😡

veera:haam dono hatoon main haat rakhke beach mein betein thea.

meher:wow kaya dream tha yaar😆(heer ko chirahne k liyea)

veera:haan.oh kitna payar karraha tha mujhese bo

heer:😡chal meher class k liyea der ho rehi hain.

In classroom.no teacher.

heer:upset

geet:hi heer.itni der kyun kardi?

heer:patanehi😡

geet:bohot gussha hain kaya hua?

meher:kuch nehi uske angad ko koi chin raha hain na usse

heer:bo sirf mera koi chin nehi sakhta usse

geet:bo tera kayse hua bo to mera hain tu dekhna agar bo khabhi mile to bo sirf mujhse hi payar karega tujhse nehi.huh

meher:geet!!!

heer:😭(dil toot gaya issiliyea college se ghar chali gaie)

bed mein bohot rorehi hain.

mom:are kaya hua aab?

heer:maa bo mere frnds na bohot bure hain hamesha...

mom:oh samjhi chor yesaab chal aaj haam teri aunti k ghar jatehain

heer:nehi maa mera show miss ho jayega

mom:tu bhi na

night.show start hua hain.heer bohot ghor se dekhrehi hain.

brother:are tu door open kyun nehi karrehi hain koi aya hain.

heer:😡 saab kaam mujhea hi karna parhta hain.

teacher:chalo heer

heer:aaj to

teacher:haan aaj main anewala nehi tha paar socha aajaou

heer:(meri kismath hi footi hain aur koi time nehi mila aaneka😭)

teacher chala geya.

brother:😆

heer:ayse daat nikaal k kyun haash raha hain.milgeya na shanti.miss ho geya😭kaal to college hain kayse repeat dekhu.haan computer mein

brother:nehi main kaam karraha hoon computer mein

heer:thoda time lagega

brother:nehiiiii

heer:😭

TO BE CONTINUED............................


PM LIST:--
1)
prempadmasujal
2)
Momana
3)
Ayesha24
4)
noor arshad
5) Additi...
6)
curledup
7)
pRaTiBhA.1990
8)
v_nikhita18
9)
snowwhite30
10)
luv_kdmhmd
11)
meeshi.
12)
9rpat
13)sanju_veni
14)
zaibun
15)
sweta2005
16)
Prem4everRamsha
17)
cute_17deeks
18)
Kamal_23













Edited by hreeyaa - 16 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

162

Views

18k

Users

20

Likes

257

Frequent Posters

hreeyaa thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 16 years ago
#2


thnx but i think no one lyk it😕
Momana thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#3
lol... nice concept.
plz cont sooon
Edited by Momana - 16 years ago
Noor_PremHeer thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 16 years ago
#4
nice its like my story....i mean i m not in love wid prem but i m love in kis desh and premeer harshaditi..........do continue and pm me if u can
XSilentPrayersX thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 16 years ago
#5
arri yeh tu mere kahani hai
but instead of angad my hero is prem and instead of hiten tejwani
my herro was Rajeev khandelwal
curledup thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 16 years ago
#6
great
its compltly different

do continue soon!!
hreeyaa thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 16 years ago
#7
thanks for ur comments frnds.i hope part 2 bhi achaa lage.😊

part-2

meher:kaya hua heer itni upset kyun hain?

heer:meher meri kaysa yea payar hain khatam ho geya aab main angad ko kabhi nehi dekhsakhungi.😭

meher:yea bhi khatam ho geya

heer:haan.kaya karu aab?

meher:kuch nehi kisi aur ko pakhar 😆

heer:meher....😡

meher:acha tu aab kaya dekhti hain?

heer:bohi kasuti zindegiki .nihal(naman shaw) acha lagta hain paar angad to nehi hain

meher:aur yea showbhi to kaal khatam ho jayega

heer:kaya!!yeabhi?

meher:haan.koi new show aaraha hain "Kis Desh Mein Hain Mera Dil"

heer:kaya?

meher:haan yea show bohot achaa hoga tu dekha shahid yahan tujhe angad miljaye

heer:haan to fir main dekhungi.

After some days........

meher:bo new show dekhti hain na tu?

heer:kaya khakh dekhu 10 din ho geye actor ka ko pata nehi.

meher:aaj raat dekhna actor dekhayega

heer:thik hain

Night.....

heer ne tv on kiya but shes not watching the show.they r showing the actor but heer isn't watching.shes thinking abt angad

After some days.........

meher:tune bo show dekha kaya actor hain kitna handsome hain

heer:jobhi ho angad se jeyada nehi.

meher:tune nehi dekha?

heer:nehi.bo meher aaj na meri cousin aane wali hain london se mujhe ghar jana hain tu 8:30 pm aajana

meher:nehi us tym to bo show hota hain

heer:show mujhse jeyada imp hain?

meher:acha thik aajaoungi.

8:30 pm.............

meher heer k ghar aie.meher is watching the show n heer&her cousin r gossiping.

suddenly heer ki eye tv paar paargaie n usne us actor ko dekha

actor actress k haat pakar k usko hotel room k andar le geya actress logoki tane se bachane k liyea(bo hotel scene).heer uske akhon main kho gaie.

meher: heer!are kaya hua tujhe?

heer:😍

meher:kaya hua kho gaie na issmein?

heer:nehi bo to baas aysehi dekhrehi thi

meher:kitna handsome aur khubsuraath hain na

heer:
😍

heer boha se uthkar chali gaie.

heer:mujhea kaya ho raha hain main to angad se payar karti hoon to yea......

Heer always yea show dekhti hain aur us actor k akhon mein kho kaar dekhti hain.shahid yehi PAYAR hain.heer sari duniya ek kaardeti hain sirf us actor k liyea.bo us actor k DIWANI hain.

heer:pata nehi kaya naam hain isska..ek kaam karti hoon IF mein dekhti hoon isske barenmein saab pata chal jayega.nehi main meri IF frnds natasha se puchti hoon yea to uskabhi fav show hain.kaal puchoungi.

Meher heer ki ghar aie....

mom:meher tujhe pata hain yea heer ko kaya hua hain?

meher:nehi aunty.kyun kaya hua?

mom:pata nehi sara din baas bo show lekarhi pari rehti hain

meher:kuch nehi aunty show achaa lagta hain issiliyea.aap tension maat kijiyea.

mom:tu kehti hain to thik hain.

natasha:hello heer(on internet)

heer:hi.bo mujhe na tumse ek baat puchni hain(worried)

natasha:haan pucho.

heer:bo new show hain na star plus paar uska actor ka real name kaya hain?

natasha:kounsa show "Kis Desh"?

heer:haan bohi.(betaab hain bohot)

natasha:uska naam hain " PREM"

heer: "prem"






PREM: a successful actor.very hard working.live alone in mumbai.parents in delhi.his main lead actress in his show "kis desh" loves him alot.prem's parents wants prem 2 marry ash.her name is ash.

15 mins break...

ash:(holding prem)oh prem ...

prem:ash mera saar dard karraha hain main kuch der akele rehna cahta hoon.

ash:prem main jabbhi tumhare karib jana cahti hoon tum hamesha mujhe door kardete hoon.tum mujhse payar karte hoon na?

prem:pls ash sach mein mera saar bohot dard karraha hain

ash:dawai doon?

prem:nehi main le lunga tum baas jaou yahan se pls

ash:😕

TO BE CONTINUED..................



XSilentPrayersX thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 16 years ago
#8
NIce but i wanted to know that who plays the main lead in kis desh instead of heer
do continue
Noor_PremHeer thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 16 years ago
#9
awesmoe part
umm...all that last one was frm serial or real
hreeyaa thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 16 years ago
#10
part-3

heer always yea show dekhti hain.pagal hain bo prem k liyea.

college....

geet:heer kaya hua hain tujhe tu yea baar prem ki pic kyun dekhrehi hain?

heer:kyunki "main prem ki diwani hoon"

veera comes veera heer j hatoon se prem ka pic chin k le leti hain.

heer:yea kaya hain pic do mujhea

veera:nehi.

veera pic ko faar deti hain

heer:(slap veera)

veera:you!!!!!!!!😡

heer:😭kaya kiya tumne?

veera:isska saja tumhe jarur milega.just wait and watch!😡😡

veera heer ko college se nikalwa deti hain kuch juhuti iljaambhi lagati hain uspaar.

heer:meher aab main kaya karu maa ko pata chalega toh kaya hoga?

meher:chinta maat kaar.

heer&geet jaab ghar pouchi taab undonone veera ko heer k ghar se nikalte huea dekha

heer:meher yea yahan kyun aie thi?

meher:chal dekhte hain

maa:yea main kaya sunrehi hoon heer?tumhe college se nihal diya!!!!😡

heer:maa bo

meher:bo aunty

mom:meher tum kuch maat bolo tum aapni ghar jaou aur ainda isse kabhi bhi maat milna

heer:😭😭
😭
meher:thik hain aunty😕

heer:maa yea aape kyun kiya?😡

mom:(slap heer)😡😡jaa aapni kaamre mein jaa aab tera kaya karna hain bo main dekhungi.

heer:😭😭😭

night....

brother:maa kaya hua?

mom:tere behen ko college se nikal diya geya hain.

brother:kaya!!!!!!!!!😡😡

brother gusse mein prem k sari pics jala deta hain and heer ka tv dekhnabhi bandh kardeta hain.
heer ko bohot gussa ata hain

heer:jobhi karna hain karlo paar mujhse mere prem ko kabhi bhi juda nehi kar paoge.prem heer k dil mein samahta hain.heer ka dil sirf prem k liyea dharak ta hain.heer prem ki DIWANI hain.

mom:heer ka pagal paan toh barhtehi ja raha hain.kuch toh karna parega.

brother:SHADDI!!!

mom:shaddi???

brother:haan iss pagalpaan ko roukhne ka baas k hi tarika hain hain aur bo hain shaddi.jashmeet aunty k beta hain na rishab usse heer ki shaddi jaldh se jaldh karwa dena hi thik hoga.

mom:haan tu thik kehraha hain.main kaal hi unse baat karne jaoungi.

heer saab sunleti hain.

heer:nehi!!!aysa nehi ho sakhta heer sirf aur sirf prem ki hain aur kisi ki nehi agar main prem ki nehi ho sakhti toh aur kisi ki bhi nehi ho sakhti.bo meri zindegi hain.prem k bina main ji nehi sakhti!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

2morrow morning.....

mom:heer..heer..(checking all rooms)

brother:kaya hua maa?

mom:heer kahi nehi mil rehi hain kaya hain?

brother:kaya?hmm yea kaya hain?

mom:yea toh letter hain.dekhto kaya hain issmain.

LETTER: maa,tumne aur bhaiane mujhe mere prem se alag karne ka sara intejaam soch liya tha main saab sunliya hain aur main jete jete kabhi kisi aur ki nehi ho sakhti.main aaplogo ko kayse samjhaou k prem meri aaj hain aur premhi meri kaal hain bo meri zindegi hain.ek issnsan kayse bhala aapni zingedi se door rehsakhta hai.aapdono mujhe kabhi bhi samajh nehi paye aur shahid kabhi samajhbhi nehi payenge issi liyea mujhse itna bara kadam uthana paarraha hain.main jarehi hoon hamesha hamesha k liyea aap saabko chor kaar meri zindegi k paas mere PREM K PAASS......ALVIDAH.
aapki HEER.


pouch gei heer uski saapnoki nagariya MUMBAI mein.
aab suru hogi aasli kahani..PREM AUR HEER ki KAHANI.......

TO BE CONTINUED..........



Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".