'Main Prem Ki Diwani Hoon' FF(FULL UPDATE page-24)

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NOOR

@Noor_PremHeer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: noor arshad
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awesome update👏👏

....but realy sad😭😭

.........hope everything become fine😃

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Riya

@PrincessPatel77

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Posted: 16 years ago

#62

awesome update

continue asap

thanks for the pm

pm me!!!!!!!!!!!

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pratibha singh

@pratsy

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Posted: 16 years ago

#63

aww..poor prem..kitni rudely baat ki usne heer se....

heer chali gye..noooooooooooooo

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Whypadhu

@Whypadhu

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Posted: 16 years ago

#64

i dont have any words to xpliane how much i love this part.
update next part asap plzzzzzz

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sia

@luv_kdmhmd

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Posted: 16 years ago

#65

Hi Ria (this reponse is for seventh part, i still have not read eighth part😊)

It is going very interesting ria. Rishab villain ke alava kuch aur ho hi nahi sakta. I hate him so much. As far prem is concerned how can he believe a stranger😡 and the gal who he loves. I hope he listens to heer and believes her. Plz yeh problem jaldi khatam karo.

Sia

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ria

@hreeyaa

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Posted: 16 years ago

#66

sia love story problem bina majahi nehi ata n yea problem itni jaldhi nehi khatam hogi aur abhi taak to ash n gay3 ka part bakihi hain

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ria

@hreeyaa

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Posted: 16 years ago

#67

part-9

prem heer ko lane geya.its raining.prem heer ko dhundh raha hain.heer barish mein bhig rehi thi prem usko dekhkar car ne uthra.

prem:heer chalo heer

heer:yahan kyun aageye main nehi aoungi.

prem heer ka haat pakarh k ghar legeya.

prem:jaou change karlo

heer:😭

MORNING.........

prem chala geya

rishab:prem kaya hua heer se baat hui?

prem:nehi bo

rishab:uuff prem ayse nehi hota to acting karo aur tumhe acting to bohot achi ati hain

prem:

ghar aya.

prem:haan rishab thikhi bool raha tha.

heer:(gussa hain.)chai

prem heer k hand ko touch karke chai liya

heer:(surprise)!!!!

aysehi bohot din paar hogeya.aab heer samajhti hain k prembhi usse payar karti hain.

rishab:(called prem)hello prem kitni door barih baat?

prem:haan main kosish karraha hoon tum chinta maat karo main jaldh se jaldh heer ko tumhare paas laounga😭

heer ne saab sunliya.uske haat mein coffee ka bo gir geya

prem:heer!

heer:chi prem chi tumne itna barah dhoka diya mujhe??kayse kaar sakhte hoon tum aysa prem kayse main bhi kitni bewakuf samajh hi nehi pai k tum to sirf payar ka nataak karrehe hoon.are jaab yeahisaab karna tha taab wapas kyun laye mujhe boha raste paihi bhatakne dete isse to bohi acha tha.y prem y!!!(prem k haat se phone chin leti hain)hello rishab?

rishab:(surprise)heer!!

heer:tum kaal aajana mujhe lene

rishab:kaya!!!!!haan heer haan😈

heer:(phone raakh diya)aab khush?????mujhe aapne aap paar ghrin aati hain k maine tumne payar kiya aur tumhare liyea aapna saabkuch chor aie.bewakuff hoon main

heer boha se chali gei

prem:😭😭main aaj bohot khush hoon heer bohot khush tumhe tumhara payar aur rishab ko rishab ka payar mill geya.paar maie indino jobhi kiya so paal bitaye tumhare saath bo saab natak nehi tha heer nataak nehi tha bo paal mere zindegike saabse hasin paal thea💔

rishab aya

prem:(dor open kiya)tum?

rishab:haan mujhe to aanahi tha kyun?

prem:nehi bo itni jaldhi!

heer:kahan itni jaldhi main to kaabse tumhara intezaar karrehithi aaou rishab baitho.1min main abhi aatihoon

prem:

heer:(ring laie)yealo

rishab:yea?

heer:(prem dekhte dekhte)haan laie to thi kisi k liyea paar aafsoos bo samajh nehi paya.yea lo aab se yea tumhararukko main bag lekaar ati hoo

prem:😭😭

heer:yea heart aur ring main tumhare liyea laie thi paar...bo ring maine rishab ko de diya paar yea heart sirf heart nehi hain mera dil hain jo main kisi aur ko nehi de sakhti.

prem aya

prem:heer!

heer:(aasu pouch liya)haan packing ho geya jaa rehi hoon

prem:hamesha khush rehna

heer:huh khush??khush kayse reh sakhti hoon main prem mere khushi toh...aur main tumhe yeasaab kyun batarehi hoon tumhe to aapna payar milgeya agar issmain kisika dil toote to kaya sahina khush rakho

heer chali gei

heer:(holding rishab's hand n looking at prem)rishab chalo

rishab:haan heer chalo

prem:😭😭

kaya chali jayegi heer prem ko chor ke ..........

TO BE CONTINUED............