'Main Prem Ki Diwani Hoon' FF(FULL UPDATE page-24)

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Ayesha Hameed

@Ayesha24

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Posted: 16 years ago

#41

Oh my god awesome awesome awesome update yaar...
cant wait for next one...
but unfortunately my xams r on i wil b unable to read u r update...
but after 16th i will surely readd all u r update..
i hope u write the best..

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NOOR

@Noor_PremHeer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#42

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awesome awesome update👏👏👏

...loved it hope everyhing goes fine update soon

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Whypadhu

@Whypadhu

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Posted: 16 years ago

#43

oh my god excellent part
frnd thanks so much for ur wonderful update
thanks a lot plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update next part asap
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz frnd

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pratibha singh

@pratsy

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Posted: 16 years ago

#44

wow..prem ko bhi heer se pyaar hai..too gud..bt vo use bata kyu nhi sakta..............

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Riya

@PrincessPatel77

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Posted: 16 years ago

#45

awww so cute!!!!!! they love each other
continue asap
awesome update
thanks for the pm
pm me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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...Nikhita...

@...Nikhita...

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Posted: 16 years ago

#46

hey..........i really love u r ff.........its very different from the rest........the concept is really unique.........and its really fast too and doesnt drag[thank god for that!]

your writing is very cute...........do continue soon!

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ria

@hreeyaa

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Posted: 16 years ago

#47

thanks every one 4 ur lovely comments.

part-7

prem and ash ki saggai ho raha hain.prem&ash bohot khush hain.prem ne ash ko ring pehnaya n ash ne bhi prem ko ring pehnaya.

heer:prem aysa maat karo mere sath prem.

prem:main ash ka ho chuka hoon heer.

heer:prem prem

prem ash ka haat pakarh k jaraha hain

"PREM"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

heer utth gaie.

servant:kaya hua aapko?

heer:(pasina pasina ho gaie hai)haan

servant:aap ayse chikhi kyun?

heer:nehi bo prem kaha hain?

servant:sahab toh chale geye

servant chala geya.

heer:yea keysa saapna dekha maine agar yea saapna sach ho geya toh main to maarhi jaoungi.main prem k bina nehi ji sakhti.nehi mujhe prem se ekbaar fir baat karni hogi.usse bolungi main yaakin dilwaoungi k main usse kitna payar karta hoon to bo mujhe apna lega ash se saggai nehi karega.haan main aajhi bolungi usko main jaoungi usse baat karne.

heer taiar hokaar nihal rehi hain.

servant:are aap kaha ja rehi aabhi abhi to thik hone lagi thi pure tarehse thik bhi nehi hui

heer:nehi hain thik hoon aap mujhe bataye k prem ka kaha paar milega mujhe.

heer ko servant address diya.heer boha pouchi.

heer:are yea yahan kaya karraha hain.

its rishab

heer:oh no main toh bhul hi gaie thi k main yahan pouch to gaie paar maa to mujhe bina dhunde nehi rehegi.issliye issikohi bheghna tha.aab kaya karu agar issne mujhe dekhliya to mujhe kalkata lekar hi daam lega yea.prem k ghar pai thi safe thi ek kaam karti hoon main gharhi chali jati hoon baadmein mil lungi prem se.

heer chup ke ek rickshaw mein baithi.but bad luck rishab ne usko dekhhi liya.rishab heer ko follow karraha tha paar heer ne nehi dekha yea.finally rishab heer ko follow karte karte prem k ghar pouch geya.heer ghar k andaar chali gei.

rishab:heer akhir tum mujhe milhi gaie.oh yea to prem juneja ka ghar hain.to tum aapni manjilbhi pouch gaie.achaa hain mere liyea tumhe yahan se lejana aurbhi aasaan ho geya hain aab.(called heer's mom)hello aunty ji.

mom:haan beta heer mili tumhe?

rishab:haan aunty ji milgaie

mom:kaysi hain bo?

rishab:aab kaya bataou aunty ji uski halat baath baathar hain.prem k paas gaithi paar prem thukhra diya bechari ko aur thukhrata kyun nehi bo thehra ek supar star aur kaha heer ek mamuli larki haan yahan bo rashte rasthe mein daar daarke thokar kha rehi hain maine bola mere sath chal ne k liyea paar manah karrehi hain ekin koi baat nehi aap chinta maat kijiye main usse jaldhse jaldh aapne sath lekaar araha hoon.aap befikaar rehiye

mom:thik hain beta.

risha:(phone rakh diya)aab main to tumse prem k sath hi milunga heer..😈

premka shooting khatam hua.prem ghar poucha.rishab taab taak bohahi tha.usne prem ko dekha.

rishab:oh to prem is time ghar pouch ta hain acha hain.

heer:prem!

prem:(heer ko ignore karraha hain)

heer:prem tum mujhe ayse ignore kyun karrehe hoon.mujhe tumse baat karni hain.

prem:mujhe kaal jaldhi se jana hain hain mujhe aab sona hain(so geya)

heer:(aapni room main)kyun prem kyun tum mere sath aysa karrehe hoon....😭😭

prem:mujhe maaf kardo heer main maajboor hoon😭😭

MORNING...

heer:prem!

servant:sahab chale geye.

heer:😭😭main baat bhi nehi kaar paie aur jabhi nehi sakhti boha iss rishab k wajaise😡

rishab ne prem ko follow kiya n shooting spot pouch geya.

rishab ko andaar jane nehi derehe hain.

rishab:are pls mujhe prem se baat karna hain.

guard:nehi aap andaar nehi ja sakhte

rishab:mujhe heer k barenmain baat karna hain

prem sunleta hain

prem:ane do inhe

rishab:hello prem.mujhe aapse heer k baremain kuch jaruri baat karna hain

prem:aap heer ko jante hain?

rishab:hain main heer ko nehi janunga toh koun janega akhir bo mera mangitaar hain.

prem:(shocked)mangitaar

rishab:haan kyun heer ne nehi bataya aapko bo keya hain na usko tv show actor se bohot payar hain yea dekhiyea na angad bo iqbal khan usse hi to kitna payar karti thi uske liyeahi to mujhe thukrana cahtithi paar aab jaab show khatam ho geya usko chor diya aab jaan aapko dekha firse suru ho geie issliyea boha yahan chali aie.yeasaab payar beyar nehi hain sirf AKHON KA PAYAR HAIN . DO DINO BAAD SHOW KHATAM HONE SE YEA PAYAR BHI KHATAM HOJAYEGA.

prem:🥺

rishab:aap jara heer ko samjhana aur mujhe batana fir main usse lene k liyea aajaounga.bohot PAYAR karti hain mujhse paar samajhti nehi

prem:isska maatlab heer ka bo payar sirf ek ekhon ka jhoka hain sach mein bo mujhse payar.....🥺🥺 mujhe kyun itna bura laagraha hain ek tarah se achahi to hain mujhe to ash se haddi karnihi thi.achai hain.aur jahan mera baat main dhire dhire bhul jaounga use.😭😭😭haan pehla payar thoda mushkil hoga paar na mumkin to nehi😭

here...

heer:prem tum kyun nehi samajhte mere paayr ko main tum se sachaa payar karti hoon😭

here....

rishab:achaa hua aab heer dekhta hoon ayse samjhati hoon tum prem ko aab tumhe mere paas ane se koi nehi roukh sakhta.😈

toot geye do dil.paar kaya prem samajh payega heer k payar ko kaya prem jane dega heer ko rishab k haaton main kaya hoga aab .....

TO BE CONTINUED ......................

Edited by hreeyaa - 16 years ago