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sia

@luv_kdmhmd

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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

Hey Ria

So cute. 😊Ok let me first comment for 4^th part. Aww, bechari roz uske liye jagti phir late uthti thi, tab tak vo chala jata tha. 😆 I guess god is on side of heer, Mumbai aate hi prem se milwa diya. Although she met prem late but atlast she did meet him and wow kiss bhi kar diya. 😉I liked it a lot

5^th part- prem aaj toh vo pehli baar baat kar rahi hai atlast, aur tuumhe dair ho rahi hai 😡 and why does he always talking about sleeping, arre let her speak prem. great heer is stealing glances at prem. Wow I loved it when heer was about to fall and prem caught hold of her. "aise toh kitni ladkiyan jo mujhse sach mein pyar karti hai par aisa toh nahi ki main sabse shaadi karlo" 🤣----what a dialogue—chahe mann mein ladoo phoot rahe ho.

Atlast prem also started feeling for her. That's good and quick too. but seriously I like the way your story is shaping up. Now you left me asking for more. I want to know what will happen tomorrow. I loved your update. Thanks for pm. Update as soon as possible.

Sia

Edited by luv_kdmhmd - 16 years ago

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Ayesha Hameed

@Ayesha24

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#32

Fantastic dear..
i just hope prem too realizes his love for heer n start loving heer
cant wait for next update
thankxx for the PM

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NOOR

@Noor_PremHeer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

MY SPOT awesome update...and u update it daily...plz update next part soon

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Whypadhu

@Whypadhu

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Posted: 16 years ago

#34

fantastic frnd
thanks for daily updates
iam daily waiting for ur update
thanks a lot frnd
update asap

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Komal

@Momana

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#35

hey nice update
can't wait for the next part..
nd thnxs for the pm
plz pm me again when u update.. 😊

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ria

@hreeyaa

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Posted: 16 years ago

#36

yaa main daily update karti hoon.yaa sure main update kartehi pm kardungi.

everyone THNAKS A LOT 4 ur sweet sweet comments

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pratibha singh

@pratsy

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#37

wow ria...loved d talk b/w preem heer....ab bas..jalsi se heer apne dil k baat batade

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ria

@hreeyaa

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#38

part-6(heer ka izhaar special)

heer is waiting 4 prem.bohot joro se barish hoon rehi hain.

heer:are itni joor se barish hoon reha hain prem kayse ayega😕

prem dour te dour te darwaje k taraf aya n door knock karte pehlehi heer ne door open kardiya😆

heer:jaldhi andaar aou.(prem k haat pakhar k andaar khich rehithi heerjiske bajaise prem heer k upaar girne hi wala tha paar prem ne khudko sambhal liya😆)aap jaldhi se fresh kapre change karli jiyea.

prem:haan.

heer:(mind)bhige huea kitna cute lagta hain.😍

prem fresh ho kaar aya.heer window bandh karrehi thi

prem ne heer ki help kiya

prem:aapto bhig chuki jaiye change karlijiyea.

heer aapne room main kaapra change kiya.

prem ko kuch file cahiyethi aapne room se issliyea uske door pai knock kiya

prem:main aa sakhta hoon?

heer:haan aaphi ka hi to kaamra hain.

prem andar aya .heer kitchen mein gaie.prem room mainhi tha.heer prem k liyea barehi payar se coffee banate banate aapna haat hi jalah diya😆

heer:coffee

prem:thanks.

heer window thodi open karrehi thi becoz barish thoda kaam hogeya hain.aur prem dekhta hain k uski haat thoda jaal geya hain

prem:(heer ki haat pakar k)yea kaya hua aapke haat main?

heer:nehi bo thoda jaal geya tha

suddenly barish bohot joor se aana suru kardeta hain n window open ho jata hain.aur yahan prem heer to ek duje k akhon meinhi khoye hain issliyea undono k ghorhi nehi kiya k bodono bhigh rehe hain firse😆

suddenly bijli chali jati hain.heer n prem ho aab hosh aya hain😆

prem boha sejaraha tha.heer ne prem ka haat pakarh liya

heer:mujhe chor kar maat jaou.

prem heer k taraf dekha.

heer:(prem karib aakar)main tumhare bina nehi ji sakhti pls mujhe chor kaar maat jaou.

prem:silent

heer:main itne dino se tumse baat karni cahrehi thi paar nehi kaar parehi thi.main..main... MAIN TUMSE BOHOT PAYAR KARTI HOON PREM BOHOT PAYAR KARTI HOON TUMSE
bijli aagai

heer:(prem k haat ko kiss kiya)bohot payar

prem:mera sagai fix ho chuka hain(bohot upset tha)

heer:(prem ka haat chor deti hai)

prem:mera sagai ash k sath fix ho geya hain.aur

heer dour k boha se chali jati hain n kitchen main jakar kitchen ka door bandh kardeti hain.

premwindow se moon ko dekhraha hain.prem ki aakh bhari hui thi.

servant:sahab..sahab..bo larki heer ne aapne aap ko kitchen main baandh karliya dawaja kholhi nehi rehi hain.

prem:kaya!!!!!!!!!!!

yahan heer dukh k mare kaya karegi saamse ek poison ka bottle tha

heer:main nehi jina cahti aab.(poison ka bottle open kiya)

prem:heer darwaja kholo heer..heer yea kaya pagal paan hain..

heer poison pine hi wali thi k prem door toor k andaar aageya

prem:(heer k haat se bottle chin k usko slap kiya)pagal ho gaie hoon tum!!😡😡

heer:haan pagal ho gaie hoon main.tumhare liye.main prem ki diwani hoon.sirf tumhae liyea main aapni maa,bhai aapna ghar aapna parivaar aur aapni sheher taak chor k aagaie.sirf aur airf tumhare liyea main aapna sabkuch chor kaar yahan iss anjaan seher aagai jahan mera koi nehi hain.itna bishwash tha tumpaar k ek paal k liyebhi nehi socha k kaya prem mujhe aapnayega sirf chali aie bina kuch soce samjhe.(prem ka kutrta pakarh k)bolo prem bolo kyun kiya maine ayse kyun kiya itna payar tumse haan bolo....bolo...(crying loudly) bolo...(behosh ho gaie)

prem:heer kaya hua heer.

prem heer uthake room main legeya.doctor ko bulaya

prem:kaya hua doctor?

doctor:sahid bohot barah sadhma laga hain inko issliye behosh ho gaie.

prem:silent

doctor chala geya.
prem heer paas beitha.

prem:(heer k head mein haat rakhke)itna payar karti hoon mujhse!!kyun?kyun kitna payar kiya mujhse?(crying)kyun kiya itna payar mujhse main to tumhare payar k layakhi nehi hoon.cahkaarbhi cahkaarbhi main tumhe nehi bool sakhta k mainbhi tumse KITNA PAYAR KARTA HOON cahkaarbhi main tumhe aapna nehi sakhta.main jis din tumhe pehli baar dekha tha usi din se tumse payar karne laga tha.mujhe pata tha k tum mujhse payar karti hoon,mere liyehi yahan aie hoon saab chor ke.paar main majboor hoon..majboor hoon.(uthkaar chala geya)

prem moon dekhraha hain.

prem:kyun kiya tumne aysa kyun milwaya mujhe heer kyun karne diya usse itna payar kyun aab to heer ko bhulana orbhi mushkil hi geya hain mere liye.

heer aur prem k payar mein aya yea kaysa moor aab kayse mill payenge yea do dil................................

TO BE CONTINUED...............

Edited by hreeyaa - 16 years ago

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Komal

@Momana

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Posted: 16 years ago

#39

awwwwwwwwwww soooo cutee. he loves her tooo😳 ,.. .
wonder wats gonna happen next😍
anywazz awasome update as always..
thnxs for the pm
plz pm me wen u update
update soon 😛