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Posted: 16 years ago
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part-4

2:30 night

prem ka shooting finish hua.

prem:ash main ghar jaraha hoon.barish hone wali hain tumbhi jaldhi chali jaou ghar

ash:thik hain.bye

prem:bye

prem car drive karraha hain.

here...

heer to mumbai pouch gaie paar uska mumbai mein koi nehi hain so bo sunsaan road mein bhatak rehi hain.ek akeli larki ko dekhkaar kuch badmaash uska faida uthana cahraha tha.heer unse bachne k liyea bhaag rehi hain.

Its raining...

heer dour te dour te ek car k saamne aakar behosh ho gaie.

Its prem's car.....

prem:OH shit!!!

prem car se bahar nikla n dekha bo loog heer taraf door k arehe thea.bolog jaab prem ko dekha taab bo bhaag geye.

prem:HEY!!!!!!

bhaag geye bo loog.

prem:(holding heer)hello?are yea to behosh ho gaie hain.

heer k hatton mein uska saman tha(bag)

prem:shahid yea yahan naie hain shahid koi nehi hain isska yahan

prem heer ko car mein usske ghar le jata hain.

prem heer ghar lekar uske bed paar rakhta hain(😳)

prem:yea to puri bhigg chuki hain.agar bukhaar bagera ho geya toh to musibaat ho jayegi.

servant:sahaab kaya hua?aur yea koun hain?

prem:yea mujhse road paar mili shahid isska yahan koi nehi hain.acha suno tumhare ek beti hain na?

servant:haan sahab

prem:usko jaldhi yea yahan bulaou.fast!!!!

servant:sahaab aagaie.

prem:haan suno tum isska kaapra change kardo bohot bhiig chuki hain nehito bukhaar ho jayega

girl:sahab main?

prem:haan.jaldhi karo.mere car mein isska bag hain uss mein kaapre hongea change kardo.

sometimes later...

girl:sahab ho geya

prem:achaa thik hain tum jaou.

girl:ji.

prem k ghar mein prem akela rehta hain so uske ghar mein sirf 1 bed room hain iss liyea prem bed room k bahar drawing-room k sofe paar sogeya.

Morning......

heer uthi.


heer:main yahan!!


heer ne kaal behosi k halaat mein prem ko thoda thoda dekha tha but bo sure nehi hain k bo prem tha ya nehi.


heer:kaal jo mujhse yahan laya bo prem tha ya fir koi aur?jaakar dekhti hoon.

room se bahar nikli(scared)

heer:aap?

servant:aapko hosh aageya?

heer:haan paar main yahan?

servant:haan mere sahab ne kaal aapko yahan laya aap behosh thi na.

heer:sahaab?aamm bo kaha hain?

servant:sahab to kaam k liyea bahar chale geye.

heer:bahar chale geye!😕

servant:haan

servant chala geya boha se.

heer:aab mujhe kayse pata chalega k yea prem hain ya nehi.

wall mein prem ka ek barah sa photo tha.

heer:are yea toh prem ki photo hain isska maatlab yea prem HAIN!!!!!!.main prem ghar pai hoon
.suno suno

servant:haan?

heer:aap k sahab ghar kaab ayega?

servant:atee atee toh raat k 2 or 3 baaj jatehain

heer:2 or 3!!!😕😕

servant:haan .aab mainjaou mujhse bohot kaam hain

heer:haan.

11:30 night............

heer:(waiting 4 prem)

servant:ji mujhse aab ghar jana hain raat k 11"30 baaj chuke hain aap fikaar maat kijiyea main yahan paas meinhi hoon jarurath pare toh bula le na

heer:thik hain.😕

1:30 night....

heer:waiting...waiting...

wait karte karte heer sogaie sofe paar.

2:30 night...........

prem comes.light off tha prem ne light jalaya n dekha heer sofe paar soregi hain.
prem heer ko ustha k room mein le jana cahraha tha paar nehi geya.prem fresh ho kaar aapne laptop paar kaam karraha tha
(ekhi room mein thea dono😳)
prem sogeya.

Morning........

heer utthi.but prem nehi tha boha.

servant:aap kaal yaha paarhi sogaie thi?

heer:hain kaab aakh lag geya paar aapke sahaab?

servant:sahaab to chale geye.

heer:ekdinbhi main unse mil nehi parehi hoon

servant:sahab subeh 7 baje ghar se nikal te hain.(chala geya)

heer:subeh 7 baaje..hhmmm

heer ne 6 am ka alarm dekar raha hain.

heer:aab toh main prem se mil kar hi rahungi.

3:30 night.....


heer room mein sogaie.2:30 taak jagithi.

prem comes.bo fresh ho kaar sogeya sofe paar.


8 am.........


heer uthi...

heer:oh noooooooooooo.8 baaj geye shit!!!


jaldhi se room se bahar nikli n dekha prem chala geya.


heer:😭😭

servant:aajbhi nehi mil paie?

heer:haan😕😕😕

servant:😆😆(chala geya)

2:45 night......

heer:aaj mein nehi soi.aaj to prem se mil karhi rahungi.

someone knocked the door.....

heer:😳😳😳PREM aageya.😳😳😳

dire dire heer door k taraf gaie.opened the door...

heer:aap?(are yea to prem koi bo actress hain,yahan kaya karrehi hain)

ash:who r u??????😡

heer:bo main..

ash:tum prem ghar pai kaya karrehi hoon...😡😡

gusse mein ghar se chali gaie

heer:suniye..are yea toh chali gaie aab kaya hoga!!

servant:kaya hua ash madam aie thi?

heer:haan paar

servant:gusse mein chali gaie.😆bo aysihi hain aap chinta maat ki jiye sahaab saab sambhal lenge.

heer:paar aab to 3:35 baaj rehe hain kyun nehi are prem?

servant:bo aaj sahab party main geye hain unke show ka success party hain na aaj

heer:oh.😕😕

servant:kaal sahab der se jayenge kyunki bohot der raat taak boha party mei n rahenge to iss liyea

heer:thik hain

7 am.......

heer uthi.

heer:prem to shahid nehi geya hoga.(worried)

heer dhire dire room ka door open kiya.heer ne PREM KO DEKHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

heer:aahh.prem😳.sote huea bhi kitna handsome lagta hain.

heer dhire dhire prem k paas gaie.prem k head paar haat rakhi n kiss kiya😳

prem thoda hila.heer uth gaie boha se.prem utha.........................


heer ko to mil gaie aapni manjil paar kaya prem k akhon mein bhi heer k liyea bo payar jagega yaafir sirf heer k akhon meinhi prem k liyea payar samahya rehega......................

TO BE CONTINUDE..............
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Posted: 16 years ago
#22
Fantastic,,...👏
superb as always....👏
i hope prem must realize his love for heer soon...
thankxx for the PM....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#23
hii finally they both met 👏 its going intresting day by day 😳 update soon i m really excited to see prem's reaction on heer's kiss
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Posted: 16 years ago
#24
ohh.. fantastic..poor heer 3 days..hmmm soo update soon
Momana thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#25
nice update 👏
thankxx for the PM.
pratsy thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#26
wow..amazing lolz.....prem ne heer ko bachaya...wow..........................
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Posted: 16 years ago
#27
thnxx everyone for ur comments..🤗

main kosish karrehi hoon achaa bana ne k liyea hope main ayse hi saab ka waahwahi pati rahoon.

hhmm heer prem se to be inteha payar karti hain paar sahid prem nehi aur karbhi sakhta hain yea to dhire dhire pata chalega.

One thing maine everyday hi likhti hoon paar kaal se main jeyada jeyada likhungi becoz bohot bara story hain issliyea khatam hone k liyea bohot tym lag jayega aur mujhse isske baad neri next FF bhi likhna hain.

my next FF "kaysa yea kaya hain" is

COMING SOON





pratsy thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#28
wow wow wow...ab tum jyada likhogi.....gud..n al d best 4 ur new ff
hreeyaa thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: pRaTiBhA.1990

wow wow wow...ab tum jyada likhogi.....gud..n al d best 4 ur new ff



thnxx😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
#30
part-5

prem uttha.

prem:aam aap yahan?

heer:haan bo...

prem:itni jaldhi uthgaie?

heer:haan.

prem:(looking clock)oh mujhse der ho raha hain

prem bathroom geya.

heer ne prem k liyea tea banaya n jaab ko kitchen se bahar nikli taab dekha prem nehi hain.

heer:prem?

servant:sahab toh chale geye.

heer:chale geye?aur breakfast?

servant:boto sahab shootinh spot meinhi karte hain.

heer:(dour k aapne room mein chali gaie n bed paar ro rehi hain)haar baar..haar baar jaab main usse milna cahti hoon,baat karna cahti hoon taab bo mujhe nehi milta.kitni mushkil sehi toh bo mujhe mila tha paar....😭😭.ekhi ghar mein hote huea bhi kitne door hain haam.😭😭aur main jeyada din yahan rukhbhi to nehi sakhti kayse yahan rkh jaou kaya sochea ga bo k kitne din ho chuke abhi taak nehi gaie.aaj to 4 din ho chuke.aab kaya karu main kuch samajh mein nehi aaraha.😭😭nehi main haar nehi manungi aaj kayse bhi hoon mujhe usse baat karni hi hogi.

NIGHT.........

its raining.heer is waiting 4 prem but hes not coming.

heer:3 baaj rehe hain abhi to ajani cahiyethi.

door knocked.....

heer:sahid prem hain...

opened the door...

prem:(surprise)aap abhi taak nehi soi

heer:nehi bo..achaa aap kaapre badal lijiyea nehi to thandh laag jayega.

prem bathroom geya.fresh hokaar aya.

heer:(with coffee)yea lijiyea achaa lagega

prem:(surprise)thanks

prem laptop mein kaam karraha hain.

heer:bo mujhe aapse kuch baat karni hain.main itne in se cahrehi thi k aapse bolu paar aap se milnahi nehi hua.(daar rehi hai.heart dhak dhak karraha hain)

prem:mujhe pata hain aap kaya bolengi.aap tension maat kijiye aap jitne din cahea yahan reh sakhti hain.mujhe pata hain aap yahan neie hain aur aapka yahan koi nehi hain.

heer:(kitna achaa hain kitna barah dil hain issliyehi toh itn apayar karti hoon😳)paar

prem:paar baar kuch nehi aap yahan reh sakhti hain.aab bohot raat ho chuka hain aap jakar so jayea.

heer:aap?

prem:mujhe sote sote der ho jayega.aap jayea

heer:thik hain

heer aapne room se chori chori prem dekhrehi hain.usski nindh to aaj gaie😆

MORNING.......

heer uthgaie.room se bahar nikli.prem bathroom mein tha.

heer:prem kaya aajbhi chala geya...

prem nikla.

prem:aajbhi jaldhi jaldhi?

heer:haan.aajse main jaldhi jaldhi utth jaoungi.😳

prem:achaa hain.

prem aapne hair pouchte pouchte aaraha tha and heer kitchen mein jaarehithi k heer gir gaie n prem ne usko pakhar liya.

heer:(behosh honehiwali thi😆)😳

fir heer uthi

prem:aapko chout to nehi aie?

heer:nehi.

paar heer k leg mein chout aiethi prem chune se usko dardh hi nehi ho raha tha.heer kitchen k taraq pair barahya

heer:aauch!!!

prem:kaya hua???

heer:nehi kuch nehi.

prem jaldhi se aya

prem:are paakto chout lagi hain

heer:nehi thoda hain thik ho jayega

prem:ayse kayse thik ho jayega aap aiyea baithiyea.

heer sofe paar baithi n prem uske pair paar medicine lagaraha tha.

heer:kitna acha hain😳

prem:ji aapne kuch kaha?

heer:nehi bo aapko der ho rehi hain na aap jayea main abhi thik hoon

prem:sure?

heer:haan sure.😳

prem:ok

servant:sahab aap abhi taak geye nehi!!!!!

prem;haan abhi jaraha hoon aur suno tum inka khayal rakhna aur ninhe dayan dedena inhe chout lagi hain.

servant:thik hain.

heer:😳

prem chala geya.

servant:dekha sahab kitna dayalu hain

heer:haan bohot ache hain.😳

12:30 NIGHT.......

heer:main prem se kayse kahu k main usse itna payar karti hoon aur ussi k liyehi saab chor k yahan aie hoon.agar bolu to kaya kahega aur kaya sochega.kitni fans hain usske bohot baar to i love u bool chuke hain agar mujhe bhi boisa samjha toh...god please mujhe help karo.

1:30 NIGHT..........

prem comes..

heer:aaj itni jaldhi kayse aageye?

prem:haan kaam jaldhi khatam ho geya tha issliyea

heer:achaa aap fresh lo jaiyea main khana lagati hoon,aaj to khana nehi khakaar ayena?

prem:hhh nehi.

heer:😳

heer kitchen mein khana garam karrehi hain.prem window se chand ko dekh raha hain.

prem:(in mind)pata nehi mujhe kaya ho raha hain jaab iss larki ko dekhta hoon taab aysa kyun lagta hain k yea meri bohot aapni hain hai kyun main isske taraf khichaa jata hoon.aaj subehbhi saab isse chout lagi taab dardh mujhe kyun ho raha tha.yea kaya ho raha hain mujhe.

heer:khana laggeya aie.

prem:haan

eating...

heer:aap akele hi rehe hoon?aapke mom dad?

prem:bo delhi mein rehte hain.

heer:aur aapki behen?

prem(in mind)isse kayse pata k mera ek behen hain

heer:kaya hua?bo maine aapke barenmein bohot suna hain issiliyea.

prem:oh

heer:mere ek frnd hain bo aapko bohot pasandh karti hain(dil dharakh raha hain heer ka k prem kaya ans dega)

prem:ayse kitne hi fans hain mera.

prem ka khana khatam hua bo utthgeya n sofe paar beitha.heer bhi uske piche piche gai

heer:paar bo aapse sahid sach much payar karti hain.

prem:ayse bohot sare larki hain jo mujhe sach much paya karte hain paar aysa toh nehi k main saabse shaddi karlu😆

heer:🥺

heer bina kuch bole aapni room mein chali gaie.

prem:isse kaya hua!!!!

2MORROW..........

prem chala geya.

heer ne prem se ekbhi baat nehi ki.

heer:kaya karu aab main jiske liyea main aapni saab kuch chor ke yahan chali aie boto mere payar ko samjhe ga hi nehi.😭kaya bolu usse k mainhi bo larki hoon...

servant:kaal main nehi aunga..

heer:kyun kaal kaya hua?

servant:kaal sahab k kaam kuch jeya nehi hain issliyea

heer: matlaab!!

servant;matlaab sahab kaal shaam 8 ya 9 baje ghar aajayenge

heer:sach!

servant:haan achaa aab main chalta hoon

servant chala geya

heer:isska matlaab kaal main prem se bool sakhungi haan kaal main prem ko boolhi dungi agea jo hoga dekha jayega.akhir issi k liyeahi toh yahan aie thi main.toh DONE main kaal prem se kehdungi aapni dil ki baat.

kaya heer prem ko bool payegi aapni dil ki baat aur kaya prem samjhea ga heer ki beinteha payar ko yaafir........

TO BE CONTINUED ..............

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