MEET FF~Hum dil de chuke sanam~ update chp 24 pg34

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hey guyz.i ws getting bor all day long.so i thought of writing.m a terrible writer.bt i lyk meet nd av been missing thm too so here u go................


HISTORY: its da recent plot heer av come home after knowing the truth of ashlesha and prem...........and nw ashlesha is also back in the home as she av gone to heer and prem and beeged them to forgive her.meher hasnt lykd that bt heer and prem av forgiven ash and nw she lives with them but nw she wants preet back in her lyf........and here the game starts.....and yes there z a new character as well RIya whos gayatri's niece and loves prem and preet lyk her brothers.(shes the fun one positive one)

MEHER:
" ab yeh kyun yahan a kr baith gayi hai. muje to samaj nai ata ke did r jiju ne ash ko maaf kaise kr diya"

RIAY: "oh cmon nw meher tum us ko lekr kyun tension leti ho....just leaver her na.wo agr ab koi problm karegi to mei hn naa..chil kar"

While they were talking preet cums in the kitchen.

PREET: " kis ko chil krna ka keh rai ho"?

RIya: " tumhari biwi ko"

PREET: '" KYUN"?" he goes and holds meher frm her waist frm back......
MEHER" NAI KUCH NAI" meher tries to go bt preet holds her tight.

RIYA" sharam to ati hi nai hai tume preet.waise tum yahan kya kar rahe ho...?"

PREET" wo muje meri files nai mil rai thi to is waja se meher ko bulane aya tha"

Riya" jao meher help ur hubby"

meher and preet leaves while preet turns back and winks 😉 at riya. riay laughd and " yeh nai sudhre ga"

meher goes in the room and open the left drawer of bed and finds the file and gives it to preet...preet luks at her and smiles....she z about to leave when preet grabs her hand..she tried to go but preet holds it tight and pulls her towards her.....

MEHER " preet kya kar rae ho..let go na"

meher z luking downward.....while preet luks at meher.his face an inch frm meher's face

PREET "meher luk at me na.. i knw ur upset ke kal mei tum par gussa hwa but mei tension mei tha.u knw i didnt mean it.....m sorry"😳.meher keeps luking downward "meher plz ..plz plz... ab itna b koi bari baat nai ai tum..... " he cuts off in middle when meher lukd at him with angry face😡

PREET "mera kehna ka matlab hai ke wo... mei ....tum plzzzzzzzzzz shorry.next time nai ho ga paka"

MEHER " paka?"😲

PREET" HUNDRED AND TWENTY PERCENT phir kabi nai hoga"

MEHER" this z for last tym preet.u better get it.." " nw can u plz leave me i av work to do"

PREET " mood nai hai r waise b u dnt wanna b here........??hmmm?" preet said while raising his 1 eyebrow..meher culd c wat preet was upto.........

MEHER " no! nw let go"

PREET " sure? no doubts?" smiling naughtily preet said moving closer and more closr to meher... preet pushed meher back .......nw meher had no place to go as she was in the corner with preet hands on both her side ...........

PREET" MRS JUNEJA dnt u think v shud spend sum tym togethr u nd me and no one else....." he said while his lips wre just an inch frm hers.she culd feel the his sweet breath on her face ..........

MEHER " MR JUNEJA, muje apka irada kuch theek nai kag raha....."

PREET" hmmm" preet ws about to kiss her when both of their romance was disturbed by a knovk on the door......preet got all annoyed while meer pushd preet back so she can c who it was ...who else it culd be except one of the....ash....... ASH been seeing all this and she culdnt stand preet getting so closer to meher ......so she decided to ruin it...\


PREET" arey ash ao na koi kam tha" he said while smiling to towards ash.meher raised her one eyebrow and preet smile all vanished ......

ASH " han wo meher ko auntyg bula rai hn"

MEHER" acha mei ati hn tum chalo "

in the mean while preet pickd his office bag and coat and was leaving for work.....

PREET" OKAY guyz ill c u in the evening u carry on " preet said and then kissed meher on the cheek and whisphered in her ear "we'll CONTINUE in the evening mam.... i luv u "

in the same second riya also came in the room...while ash was boiling with anger and jealousy seeing all this......

RIYA" OH HW SHWEET ..THEY R SO MUCH IN LUV ... NAI ASH" riya said teasing ash cz she knew hw ash felt.........

ash just nooded nt in a state to speak...preet rushed out of the room " bye sis"... " bye little brother" .. riya then turned to ash waise tum yahan kya kar rai ho ....ash? she asked....

ASH " wo mei meher ko bulane ai thi ..." and then she leaves...

MEHER" uff pata nai yeh kb yahan se jaye gi" saying this meher leaves...

while riya stood there thinking a new mischief 4 ash...
" dnt worry meher zyada dino tak nai ...lagta ha its fun tym 4 ash" she talked to her self and smiled...

TO BE CONTINUED............

OK GUYZ tell me wt do u think.i knw it was slow bt ill write better nxt tym bt u av to give me ur comments and criticismm k ..plz do tell....and as far as the updtaes r concerned is ka har part har roz hoga ya ya phir ek din chor kr bt nt ttoo long................
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey , dat was great ..
Please do continue !!
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good but i neer lots of premeer scenes frnd
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So here cums the part 2……….

Meher cums down in the hall where all the ladies av gathered……….kul di, heer di ,maya, ash and then riya also joins them……gayatri maa is telling every1 tht bauji had told er ke tomorw wil b a party in the house.its a business party but it shud b gud and well managed…….gayatri assigns every1 there duty and then leaves…….

RIYA : oh its gud keh ghar mai party hai ,maza aye ga.kul di dnt u think it shud b sum kind ov fun.different.?"

KULDI : riya , to b nay eh Canada nai hai.kya different karein ge.wasie b business party hai..bore hi hogi………

RIYA: yeh b sahi hai bore to ho gi……..lekin phir bore ko shu mantar krna humara kam hai na…….

In the meanwhile meher and heer and maya r discussing their duties(maya z nw a good girl ..her attitude iz positive with meher and heer di thnks to riya jis ne ek din maya ko yeh samjahay ke agr ash yahan hogi to problems paregi leking meher r heer achi hn so no problems in future regarding all jaidada thing cz riya wntd to make things in favour ov meher and heer nd is wja se maya hui ash ke khilaaf)

ASH: kul dip phr mei khane ka sara kr leti hn k?"

KULDI: han theek hai…."

Ash leaves then thinking k in this party she'll try to cum near preet and everything will b perfect…..

Sham ko sb log ghar par hote hn.they r sitting in the hall and discussing bout the party…..bauji r maa hav gone to sum sort ov family gathering.and nw all the young couples r here.meher and heer cums with tea and snacks…….meher then puts the tray and stand besides preet…preet is all upto mischief so…

PREET whisphers to meher " so mrs juneja missed me whole day"?"

Meher smiles and then said 'nai to"

PREET " acha ? hmmm ?"

While everybody z bz discussing preet gets a call from office nd goes up to his room and calls meher frm upward..meher goes thinking as nw what z dt he cannot find….in the way she sees gungun (meher and preet daughter) crying…meher goes in the room and sees her with ash whos tryng to make gungun quiet and z holding a a glass of water..meher quickly goes to gungun and asked " kya hwa beta"?"

Gungun: " mama aunty ne mere hath ke upper pani gira diya" listening to it meher all gets mad and starts shouting at ash.ash tried to tell meher tht it was all by mistake bt meher didn't listened to er. In the meanwhile preet cums and sees ash crying….

PREET: KYA HWA MEHER TUM IS TARAH ASH PAR CHILA KYUN RAI HO?"

MEHER : tum dekh nai rae ho preet us ne gungun par pani gira diya"

PREET: to kya hwa meher galti se gir gaya ho ga.kyun baat ka batangar bna rai ho.."

ASH:" han wo galti se gir gaya muje table lga r pani gir gaya"

MEHER: galti se …meri beti…." She ws cut off by pret who ws nw more angry at meher for blaming ash(preet culd notice the changes in meher from ash return bt he ws quite as nt to discuss it)

PREET: meher bus…ab chup.." meher ws nw angry and sad as preet has shouted at her in front of ash.(.it was rare 4 preet to b in such a mood bt he ws nw in a bad mood due to some business cal he'd just received five mins bak).meher left the room holding gungun hand…and taking her out of room.

PREET: " m sorry ash wo meher b na .."

ASH : " nai preet m sorry meri waja se tum dono mei jhagra ho gaya.muje kbi ana hi nai chahiye the yahan wapas..muje to lagta hai ke tum ne b muje abhi tak maa nai kiya hai"

PREET : aisi baat nai hai ash plzz..r tum plz rona band karo.."

Saying this ash left the room while preet sat on the bed his face in both his hands…kuldi and riya were listening to all this..kuldi left cz kiran was calling her while riya entered the room and sat next to preet.

RIYA: "preet tumne theek nai kiya brother..mei kafi dino se dekh rai hn ur tensed…lekin youn meher par chilana..nt good bro"

PREET: "lekin tu ne meher ko dekha ..pata nai use kya ho jata hai r pata nai muje kya hogaya..muje meher par nai chilana tha but…"

RIYA: "preet aik baat pucho……kyat um ab bhi ash se…"

PREET: " riya wats wrong wid u yar tum janti ho ash z no longer there 4 me I luv meher…."

RIYA: then prove it buddy..aj tum logon ka jhagda huwa and dt cz of ash..preet har larki kay dil mei thori both insecurities hti hn..r ash ne jo bhi prem r heer ke sath kiya uske baad meher sirf darti hai ke khai wo tum dono ke beech mei na a jaye…uske dark o sach mat banao preet"

Saying this riya left the room. Preet culd c wat riya has just told him..ofcourse evry 1 z insecure..he thought to himself jb Harman bhai wapas aye the tb evn I ws …aj I ws rude to meher…

On the other ash was happy tht her planned work…khel to abhi shuruw hwa hai meher.aj ek choti si baat par preet ne tume dant diya age dekho both jaldi preet mera hoga kyunke I deservd hm…kal party mei" …nd she laughed as she thought of her another plan..riya heard all of ash plan..nd nw riya was worried about preet and meher nd she exactly knew wht ash ws upto and evn riya had one plan..she thought of joining kuldi in her plan but then she thought: uske to peth mei kuch nai rehta r heer ko btaya to..nai nai…kon hai jo madad kare ga??" Hmmm.and thn she saw who can help er…

VIKAS(kulraj elder son ..i lyk hm in the serial hes kool kid) shoutd riya..'' ji riya di" vikas said .." I need ur help …ull help me?"

"Sure di" vikas said and then riya said something in his ear aand thn riya winkd at vikas and vikas winkd at riya…" hmm maza to ab aye ga ash wait nd c"…

TO BE CONTINUED…………………………..

So guyz hw ws it..i need comments and if sumthng ws missing tell me so then u can get better and better to read c u ……………..i need criticism……………



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Posted: 15 years ago
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you should add an angle where preet gets jealous of a "new" friend! i love jealous and pssessive preet!

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ya i thin dts a gud one jealous...wait 4 the party ..............
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Here cums part 3………….

That whole day preet and meher didn't talkd..nxt day meher was In the kitchen riya came and sat on the table.

RIYA: " meher is everything k btw u and preet? Mera matlab koi tension to nai hai?"

MEHER: "nai riya sb theek ha.wo bus…."

RIYA: " mene kal tumhari r preet ka jhagda sun liya tha meher"

Meher lukd at riya and she had tears in her eyes….

RIYA: "aww meher …yeh kya tum kyun udas hoti ho…ek to yeh bharti nari galti chahe kisi ki b ho rone beth jati hn…ufff…meher kal galti tum dono ki thi na hi tume you jhagda krna chahiye tha r na preet ko youn chilana…"

MEHER: " riya mene r preet ne kal se baat nai ki. Muje dar lag raha hai riya kahi as.."

RIYA: " UFF YAR EK TO TUM DARTI BOHT HO…preet net um se baat nai kin a ..ab tum meri baat suno tum bhi preet se baat mat karo..na jhagda na shikayat kuch bi nai…"

Meher opened her mouth to say sumthng but thn kuldi came frm bak and kuldi interuptd saying :" Haan meher yeh ladke b na pata nai khud ko kya samjhte hn.. to preet se baat nai karegi na to wo khud bechaen ho kr tuje manye ga ..are galti kisi ki b ho yeh aj kal ke ladke khudi mun phola lete hn…

While they were talking maya came saying sumthng angrily to Harman .she also had a jhagda wid Harman..

RIYA: " ab ise kya hwa..? maya tum theek ho subah subah kis ki shamat ai hai"

MAYA: ' yeh Harman b na be waja jhagda krta hai r phr…"

KULDI: " lo bhai lagta hai aj sb ke jhagde ho rae hn…hum b abhi yehi baat kr rae the..lekin tera jhagda hwa kyun?"

MAYA: " wo ash ne na…"

MEHER: " Yahan b ash…"

MAYA: " yahan bhi ka batlab r kis ke sath .."

RIYA: " meher r preet"

MAYA: " is ka to kuch krna parega …pani sir ke upr jar ha hai.."

RIYA: " dnt worry maya…uski tum tension mat lo (she winkd at maya)…pr ek baat yad rakho aj party mei ladko koi bhao nai de ga ..dekhna khud hi line pe a jayenge…"

They all planned 4 party ….on evening…..riya goes to meher and gave her a black shaffon sari with sleevless blouse to wear…she told her she has giftd every1 in the house…on the other hand in the hall preet was worried as meher has neither talkd to him nor complained till nw kyunke meher un logon mei se hai jo dil ka gussa nikal de gi..

All the guyz r in hall..riya cums in hall seeing all of them..

RIYA: '' tum logon ne tyar nai hna..party ka tym hone wala hai."

HARMAN: " kai ki party yahan to puri tyming hi kharab hai ..subah hi maya se jhagda hogay r ab wo mujh se baat b nai kr rai.."

PREET: " Mera b hwa meher se r wo baat nai kr rai..pata nai in urton

ki problem kya hai…"

PREM: " TUM LOG UN SE JHGADA KARTE HI KYUN HO"

PREET: folding his hand in front of prem said" BHAIYA ap to bhagwan hain…"

RIYA: " R YEH INSAAN HAIN..GALTI KAR KAR KE SEEKHTE HAIN"

Riya ne vikas ko ishara kiya as to say wht they had planned..

VIKAS: " mamo aj to ap logon ki kheir nai mei abhi ma r mamion ki baat suni wo party mei kuch krna ka plan bana rae the r unho ne yeh b kaha ke aj ap mei se kisi ko b nai bakhshein gi..ap to gaye.."

HARMAN: " han bhai hum to sach mei gaye..pata nai ab yeh rakhshano ki sehna kya kare gi ..chalo bhai tyar ho jaten hn.."

PREET: " han wrna bara rakhshak ajaye ga ..arey bauji r kon.."

Everyone laughed and left while preet told riya that meher isn't talking to her..riya told her sb theek ho jaye ga wait 4 the party to begin..preet goes in to the room and sees meher had already pressd his cloteh r she has evn hangd them..preet ws very confused as meher neither have got angry rnor complained afterwards…she was so casual with hm..dt ws the part upsetting him the most….wats wrong hi thought….

The party started guest started arriving,,there were ritish and American deligates too..heer ws wearing blue sari, maya red and ash wore a silk dress try to luk more updated…bt where ws meher preet thought..nd then he lukd at stiars one woman in balck cuming downstairs he ws stunned to c who it ws………………

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YAY! i am excited about this party!😆
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o0oww w0ww
ireadd all threee parts right noww
0OMG i can sensee that this part-ayyy is g0onna be AWE-S0MEE!!!!!!!!!
..I hope u continuee so0n
u really got mi h0oked to this storyyyy loll
luv ya Rumsha
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here cums part 4

so in the party there were british and american delegates....as preet lukd up at the stairs he saw meher in simple black sari..her hair blowing...gosh man she z so beautiful preett thought to himself..........evry1 ws bz with guests....all the ladies were bz with the guest but as planned nobody bothered bout their husbands..they were laughing and njoyng....ash ws also trying to get mingle in the conservation but koi bhao hi nae de raha tha use............
preet ws actually surprised by meher's behaviour...he knw that meher didnt lyk getting along with all the firangis but she ws talking to all the delegates which ws surprising and shocking 4 preet bt he ws really happy wid er..preet and riya were talking to british delegates...there were two men two women.ash came up and said hi.......

ASH: " HI m ashwarya...aishwarya mann."

RIYA then whispered tp preet " bta to aise rai hai jaise aishwarya rai ho......" preet chuckled a little...

BRITHISH WOMAN: " aishwarya the heroin?"

RIYA: "NO aiswarya the vamp..."

BRITISH DELEGATE: " SORRY..."

RIYA: SMILING " NOTHING...."...
then riya saw meher cuming dt way and she called her.....

RIYA: " HEY MEHER IDHAR AO ZARA...."

RIYA: " gentelmen this z meher juneja mr. preet's wife.."

BRITHISH WOMAN : " oh mr .preet's wife..its nice meeting u..."

MEHER: " YA SAME HERE....SO U ALL COMFORTABLE HERE"

preet lukd at meher surprinsingly in regard to her hospitabitlity towards the guest..nd ws impressed.....

BRITHISH MAN: " oh yes its very nice party.."

BRITISH MAN: ' So mrs juneja wat do u8 do ?"

MEHER:" Well m a house wife .."

RIYA: "and a lawyer by proffesion" she told them interrupting meher...

BRITISH MAN: " WELL thn mr juneja u shud never have any problms regaring cases..."
they all laughed...meher got along with the woman quite well and in the end ov cpnverstaion the both woman were really fond ov her...

BRITHISH WOMAN 2: "I LOved ur dress mrs juneja..i really like indian dresses..u r a lucky man mr juneja to have a wife lyk her..."

PREET said smiling : " indeed i am .." ash got really angry with all the conversation and she left in between it...the british man ws nw really complementing meher which made preet frustated. and angry ..he didnt lykd it and wat most he diodnt lykd ws tht meher ws all smiling towards him ( one ov the british delegates ws a tall handsum man with the same age as preet)...the music started and the couples started dancing on the dance floor...

RIYA: ' SO lets dance...wht say guyz"

HANDSUM BRITISH DELEGATE: " CAN I DANCE WITH U MRS JUNEJA?" meher lukd at him surprised well preet got all boiled up..ceeing preet reaction the man said" if ur husband and u dnt av a problm"

RIYA:" Sure why wud preet will av a problm"? hain na preet" riya said trying not to laugh ceeing his reaction...

MEHER :"sure "

preet lukd at meher shockinglly..the man and preet movd to the dance floor..on the other hand maya and kulraj were bz dancing them selves giving no importance to harman and kiran. prem and heer were dancing in each other armss.full ov romance and love...
preet and harman movd to the bar both ov thm angry and frustated....riya went to thm and askd preet to dance with him..he ws in no mood bt went with riya ...while dancing riya sked preet : "wats wrong with u? itna ghoor ghorr kr meher r us admi ko kyun dekh rae ho?"

PREET" meher uske sath kaise ance kr sakti hai....r dekho kaise smile kr rai hai..mujh se to kal ki baat b nai ki"

RIYA" Preet stop being such a kid..tum bhi to r ladkiyun ke sath dance kr sakte ho par wo nai..."

then the music changed and men passed their partners..and then meher laded in preets arm...preet lukd at meher and pulled her close to her...his one hand tight on meher's waist...they both lukd at each others eyes ...and it seemed lyk their ws no one around....

PREET: "ABHI TAK NARAZ HO "

MEHER: " nai to naraz kyun"

preet movd his face closer and more closer to meher and slowly whispered in her ear..." m sorry mrs juneja...." and then lightly kissed meher on meher's cheek meher blushed bt said nothing....
riya and ash were standing at one corner ceeing all this riya laughed as preet kissed meher saying:" yeh nai sudhre ga ..oh man they r so much in luv" to tease ash..while ash ws boiling with anger her both hand in a fists...riya then winked vikas who ws at the other corner to start their plann..vikas came to their side holding a coke in his hand and he suddenly fell and dropped all the coke on ash's dress...
ash got all angry..riya lukd away trying not to burst in laughs bt on the opposoite side harman maya and kulraj all started laughing ceeing all this..

ASH:" vikas yeh tumne kya kiya ..mera dress..."
VIKAS:" sorry wo mei pao phisal gaya"

RIYA" chu chu chu ash yeh to kaharab ho gaya..go and change wrna to abi bus wo log has rae hn baad mei sb hasein ge"
ash left frm their to change quickl so she can come back and try her idea to seprate preet frm meher ..riya clapped vikas hand" nice job kid"..pata nai kulraj ke yahan itna honhar beta kahan se a gaya".......

in the meanwhile song ended and people started leaving...they all said bye to guests and evry1 ws about to leave to go to their rooms when riya called all ov them in the hall....


TO BE CONTINUED........................

I KNW guyz thora slow hai bt nxt episode will be plenty of romance and luv btw meet and evn the upcoming episodes too.do comment and criticize...............






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