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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 10…………….

Every body ws bz having fun at the farmhouse……..children were playing …prem and preet just got their worked off…and all the ladies were preparing for the shopping lists and places to shop….the bonfire was postponed for tomorrow cz ov weather and also because preet and prem were really tired after the meeting…..so they all wer gathered at the dining room for having diner ……

Vikas(kuldi elder kid) : "to aj raat ka plan phr cancel…?"😭

KULRAJ: " nai beta cancel kyun bus kal hoga postpone hi to hwa hai.."

PREET: " YEH AJ SHAITAN KI NANI NAZAR NAI A RAI? KIDHAR HAI WO "?😛

In the meanwhile riya came with fone in her hand….

RIYA: "maa ka fone tha….they all r missing us…." She said taking her chair next to preet on dining table…

RIYA: " r han yaad aya preet r Harman ash said hi…shes evn missing u 2 " riya said smiling at both ov them with dt dead luk on their face…

Maya got all worked up….she ws glaring at Harman while meher gave a deadly luk to preet…riya chuckled a little ceeing both ov their reactions….

preet thn slowly whispered to riya " kyun muje mere hi ghar se niklwane pr tuli ho..itni mushkil se meher mani hai…ab naraz hoi to muje to garden mei sona parega ….."

riya started laughing while evn Harman kicked riya under the table..they all had fun and went to their rooms a little early so they can av rest as they all had big plans for tomorrow…

In room preet ws watchng tv all absorbed in the news and headlines…he heard bathroom door getting open and close bt didn't notice until meher called her….

MEHER: " preet ..yeh tum kya news dekh rae ho yahan tum news dekhne aye ho"

PREET luking at meher said "meher wo mei to……." But ws stunned to c meher in a black night gown luking beautiful and breathtaking😳…her hair ws blowing…she came and sat at the bed…luking for sumthng in her drawer…he moved towards meher from back slightly whispering in her ear…."u luk sexy mam…"

Meher turned toward preet facing him…and blushing to the fullest😳…

"thanku sir…"

PREET: " oye hoye mei marjawa….dis z the luk I love…"

Meher smiled and found the magazine she ws finding…and started reading it…preet got all annoyed with it…

PREET: " meher tum yeh kya magazine parh rahi ho…abhi thori deir pehle muje dant rai thi r ab tum khud…"he snactchd the magazine from meher's hand and flip it on bed…

MEHER "preet mei is mei ek article dhond rai hn…do min love k…riya keh rai thi ek both acha article hai is mei.."

PREET: " riya to kuch b parthi r bolti hai…"he again took the magazine from meher's hand…meher said again "pret ruko na"

She again took the magazine..

PREET: " theek hai paro, tum apna yeh bakwas ,sara hwa magazine…meri to koi fikar hi nai…"he said moving to tv again and making face lyk a baby when he doesn't get his desired thing.

Meher smiled at preet ceeing hs reaction..she put the magazine away and moved towards him…

MEHER: " acha to kya keh rae the tum.."

PREET: " kuch nai tum parho apna ghatiya magazine.."

MEHER: "preet….itna bachpana kyun…."

She then bited preet ear and slightly kissed him on his cheek..

MEHER :" hann agr ab bhi mood nai ha to k …"

She started moving but then preet took her in her arms lying on top of her…

PREET: " agr tum itne pyars se manao gi to kon nai mane ga.."

Meher: "acha g .."

PREET: " hmmm.." and he kissed her on her lips…just then the meher's fone rang with a msg tone..

Meher:" is tym kis ne bheja hoga…let me check…"

Preet: " choro na meher…kal check kr lena konsa kahi bahag jar aha hai ye fone.."

MEHER: " preet…plzz…:"she got up and checked the msg which said "BE CAREFUL…THERE IS DANGER IN UR LYF CUMING UP."

Meher got all tensed up reading the msg and she then read it aloud to tell preet…she ws all confused tht who has sent this msg.but preet didn't seen to get bothered about it.

PREET: " meher is mei pareshan hone wali kya baat hai..kisi ne mazak kiya hoga..zaroor riya hogi.."

Meher just nodded but she thought riya can never do dis but who else and then just only one name occurred to her ASH..she witched of the fone …

PREET: " to hu kaha par the.." saying thi he pulled meher in his arms again….continuing the bliss where they had left it….

To be continued…………….

Do comment guyz….

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Posted: 15 years ago
#42
hey really nice update thanks for pm plz update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
superb!!!!!!!!
who has sent the msg, even i think ash.
eagerly waiting for your update.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
aww how cute! very good job as usual!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hehhe loll Riya wass so naughty .. saying Ash said that she missd Preet and Harman loll .. can't wait for the next part, update soon and thnx for the PM :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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o0mgg i thinkk it iss that kutti Ash ...uughh ii hateeee her loll
awwww...butt MEET r so0 cuteeeee
ii w0ulddd do0 anythinggg to haveee a hubby likee preet
u portrayedd him so0o cutelyy hereee
......... nd lemmee guesss....ur prolLyyy Ria, then girlL u betta savee Meet from that bii00oootcchhhhh namedd Ash lolll
plzz continuee fasttt
kk....will be waiting
luv ya Rumshaa<3
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 11…..

Meher was really tensed as who have send her dt msg….she evn talked to riya about dt msg but evn riya didnt got who had done this….days passed…preet got more occupied in his work as their ws a big launch cumng up in few months…and the surprise element ws tht ash joined him in the launch with the dressing part…meher ws not so happy with it but she didn't complained as she didn't wanted ny trouble with preet……in those days of working together preet got really fond of ash as a friend…as most ov tym they were together…..nd with dt pret and meher realtion took a turn….either preet use to come home late r evn if he use to b at homee he and meher most ov tym use to get in few arguments….meher was eally worried about it and most of it she ws worried bout preet's behaviour….she has seen ash closeness to preet and evn tried talking to her but when she talked to preet they landed fighting…..

Ash didn't miss the tension between preet and meher as she was the one creating it….she always use to do sumthng tht wud made preet always thankful to her…she use to make it a point now tht preet didn't get really close to meher so no discussion cud take place between the two of them…..

One night preet and ash were out for a business dinner….at back home gungun ws really missing his father cz evn preet didn't had tym for gungun….she called preet at that moment when he ws busy with one of the most impotant clinds…the phone rang..preet saw the number of meher's cell and thought tht meher ws xalling him…he disconnected the fone…ash didn't miss dt….and nw she tought ws the tym perfect tym for them to get together again and to lead meher out of preet's lyf…

ASH: "preet kis ka fone tha?"

Preet: " wo ash ghar se…."

ASH ; "oh acha .i get it meher thi…lekin preet tumne to meher se kaha tha na ke tume fone na kare phir bhi…mera kehne ka matlab hai ke wo tume har wqt yuon fone krti hai din mei soo bar……"preet lukd at ash

" mei to bas yeh keh rai thi k eek relationship mei kuch space honi chahiye…jante ho mei agr aj meher ki jaga hti to yeh risht buhat alag hta."

Preet lukd at as remembering his old tyms with ash for the frst tym…he got so lost in those thoughts that his phone rang whch startled him…it ws meher again…preet got all annoyed by dt and he switchd the fone off…

In dt moment ash knew dt she had finally won it….

At back home meher entered the room and saw gungun with her fone she quickly went and took the fone from gungun hands ad told her not to do so as her father z bz…

She took her to bed and toght tht hw her and preet relationship has changed in the past few weeks…as for its ok but gungun need her…today m gonna talkt o preet meher thought…

On the other hand ash made preet drink a lot…dt ws frst tym tht preet got drunk with few reasons as he ws considering wat as just told her a few moments ago…uska r ash ka rishta….

When preet got home he wsnt in his senses to go to his room so ash took him to his rooma s he wasn't able to walk properly…just when ash eneterd the room with preet meher saw it..ash mad preet seated on his bed..meher got all worked up ceeing all this as she cud remember the night pb has spent with her…

Meher: "ASH tum yahan….nikal jao idhar se abhi…kuch cheezein kabhi nai badalti…mei theek thi tumhare bare mei …tum jaisi larkiyan…"

She was cut off by preet who got all angry ceeing mehr's reacton towards ash…and when he saw ash crying well dt ws it….

Preet " meher apni bakwas band karo…tum kuch sahi to soch hi nai sakti na…ash muje yahan tak lekr ai kyunke I ws nt able to walk properly……"

In the meanwhile ash left the room leaving the burning preet at back…today ws the night of victory she thought….

Preet continued "tumhari yehi to problem hai…har waqt koi na koi baat ka batangar bnanti rehti ho…har wqt ek hi baat…mei tang a gaya hn meher …in jagdo se in baton se… a mene tume kaha bhi tha ke muje bar bar fone mat krna but nai tume to chek krna hai…koi space to de nai skti muje…"

Meher : " PREET wo fone to gungun……"
but preet ws too furious too listen to meher…

Preet " thak gaya hoon yeh sabit kar kar ke meri zindagi mei koi nai hai….ahr wqt sochta hook e tum kya socho gi tum kya karo gi…is rishte ki khatir kya kuch nai kiya….tumhari kahtor kya kuch nai kiya mene…..tumse shadi ki wo bhi tb jab Harman tume chor kar chala gaya….."

Meher cudnt believe it ws her preet saying all this….he wsnt just talking he ws shouting at her all angry drunk…she ws speechless…she cud just see wat preet had been doing for years ws a sacrifice…ek samjhota???? But she ws worried at in middle of night preet shouting cud wake evry1 and specally gungun…

Meher " preet plzzz ahista bolo ghar wale jag jayebge r gungun…………."

preet cut off her again " gahr wale …kabhi to apne is rishte ki parwa karo meher…r gungun humari beti…hum ne to apne rishte ko bhi nai jana tha k eek beti….mene kaha tha ek bache ke liye nai….lekin tumne kaha, muje to wo beti chahiye bhi nai thi………."

Meher cudnt believe and dt ws it…

Meher " itna zeher….muje pata nai tha preet ke tum aj tak jo karae ho wo samjhota tha…gungun ka is duniya mei ana hum dono ka faisla tha…mera nai…r tumm…aj tum ne sb par kar diya preet….."she ws shouting bak at him nw…she cud stand everything but nt dt the love of her lyf considered her daughter …………..she hated to evn think it …and now she simply didn't care for the frst tym ke ghar wale kya sochenge…..

Meher " tume yehi sb krna tha to yeh risht pehle tor dete…itne saal tak yeh natak kyun kiya…ash ke sath ….."

Preet : " dnt u dare talk talk lyk dt meher….mene is rishte ke liye kya kuch nai kiya ash ko chor diya …tume apnaya tumhare sath diya r tum apne pati pr ita vishwas b nai kr sakti to phr is rishte ki kya zarurat hai…humare sath rehne ki kya zarurat hai"

Meher stood their quite…listening ….this ws nt preet her preet who cud make her smile…and after knewing that he stilled wanted ash in his lyf can she live with such a guy….?????????who didn't wanted their child hw ws meher suppose to live dere….

Meher : " well…phr humare sath rehne ka kya matlb…tum sahi ho preet, humare sath rehne ka kya matlb…"

In the meanwhile every1 woke up with all the shouting wondering who ws it…but till the tym they reached the room where all the noises were cumng frm they saw nothng but meher sitting dere on the floor …nt crying but wondering just wat appened 5 minutes back….tears cumng frm her eyes….preet left the room in all anger ..not feeling sorry…nw it ws tym their relation got wat it wanted….

Heer kudli maya gay3 and riya all made meher talk as wat happened and wher did preet go…meher ws nt in such a condition…but few hrs later everything had changed…….

Meher told them bout their fight …prem lalit cudnt believe as preet cud behave such way…..but now it ws tym to take decision …a right decision for meher for herself ad her daughter…….

To be continued……………….

Well guyz dts for now lots of fun romance new characters u wud b wonderng hw it can b fun when meet rnot together but dnt worry…when riya z dere av no fear………..

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Posted: 15 years ago
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That was really good! i think you really analyzed their relationship! i am glad that the preet on the show is not like this preet- but you wrote the part so well that my heart went out to Meher. I think Meher should leave the house and make a new friend( a new MALE friend 😉) This was really good! I cna't wait to see what you have next! I will update my FF if you update yours.lol deal?

Edited by tadashi - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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amazin amazin amazin.............wow separation k baad re-union ka mazaa hi kuchh aur hai.........cnt w8 4 Preet 2 realize his mistake!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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amazing !! i was thinking abt this FF since u askd for some ideas and I got ur Pm .. Excellent !! I loved this part since the story moved forward ..
Now its time for Mehr to show some attitude ..
We generally say a separation brings two hearts even more closer , "People never know how special someone is until they leave, but maybe sometimes its important to leave, so they are given that chance to see how special that someone really is!" ..
that's the luv circle : 'When u Love,U get hurt..when u get hurt,U hate..when u hate, U try 2 forget..when u try 2 forget, U start missin..whn u start missin, U fall in LuV again'.. so I hope they eventually be together .. Plz not a tragic end !!

Edited by tasnime - 15 years ago

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