MEET FF~Hum dil de chuke sanam~ update chp 24 pg34 - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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very nice continue soon
Kamal
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Posted: 15 years ago
#12
omgg ii reallyy likedd it
HAHAHAHAHAHAAAAA...Ash got wht she deserved 😈
loll.....awwwww i foundd it really REALLYY cutee when Preet got jealous for his wife😳....hehee i l0vee him so0o muchh😍
..0o g0d..it should take Meher a lot of guts to stay away from him likee dat loll 👍🏼
**gasps** ashh is just scaring me lmao0o....i w0nder wht she's planning now
butt i kno u have back-up for our meet...lol...and dats RIYA hehee
..o0ohh i cant wait to read the next updateee ....the upcoming epis0dess seem so0o interestingg 😉..Meet romance..o0oh yeahh !!
loll
i ho0pee u continueee really so0on ..u doin a wonderfull jobb
luv ya Rumsha<3
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Posted: 15 years ago
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yay! i loved the meet slow dance!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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aww thnx guyz so much...............it means alot...definitely ash gona pay bt no more story reveal 4 nw.just wait.....................
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Here cums part 5………………… plz ignore the mistakes

As riya called all of them to hall they all wondered wat ws it nw….riya said that bauji wants to talk to all of u …..ash came down wearing a salwar suit…maya kuldi Harman and riya lukd at ash and tried to suppress their laughters….bauji congratulated all the bahus 4 such a gud party and gave each ov them a diamond bracelet…..but nt to ash(she deserves it)..they were leaving nw..preet and meher were going upstairs to their room when riya told preet: "yehi muka hai brother meher ko mana lo" and winked😉 and smiled at him…😊

Preet and meher entered their room and preet closed the door… preet took of his coat and throwed it on bed…meher went to the dressing and started taking her chudiyan off…preet went from back and holded meher meher from her waist and put his head on meher's shoulder ceeing their image in the mirror…meher lukd up and smiled….

PREET: "so aj party mei kafi maza aya tume ?"

MEHER: " han achi thi…kyun tume party achi nai lagi"?

PREET: " Nai…"

Meher knew tht preet ws jealous and she ws relly lyking it bt didn't wntd to shw it so she decided to tease him a bit…

MEHER: "kyun? Itni achi party thi r itne ache log"

PREET made a face : "kon se log ache the"?

MEHER : " tumhare wo british delegates..they were so sweet…"

PREET : " sweet? Kahan se ? muje to sweet nai lage..tume bara pata hai un ke bare mei…?

MEHER: " preet mei to bus youn hi keh rai hn.."

PREET: " younhi..isliye tum younhi uske sath has rai thi r younhi dance krne b chali gayi.."said getting all jealous…

Meher smiled at him in the mirror…"preet wats wrong..? tume bura to nai lga na?"

PREET: 😡"bura? both bura laga… tum ne mere sath to dance kiya nai r uske sath kiya.obviously bur alga …"

MEHER: " tum bta dete tb to dance na krti…bt I must say he ws a handsum man".meher giggled ..preet nw knew tht meher ws teasing him bt evn thn he didn't lykd his wife dancing with a HANDSUM MAN…

PREET: " waise I cant evn blame him….tum aj both achi lag rai thi…"

MEHER: "acha kitni achi?"😳

PREET slowly whispered in meher's ear " bohat"… meher felt shy..she started taking her earing off but preet started taking it of saying " let me help"….while doing this preet asked " waise agr mene pucha hta to mere sath dance krti"?

MEHER: " HMMM uske bare mei to sochna pareyga"..

Saying this meher started moving toward the cupboard..but preet grabbed her hand from behind….meher ne peeche murkar preet ko dekha " preet ?"

"dance with me"preet said smiling…." Now?"Meher asked…preet nodded smiling.and he started the music player….meher made a doubtful face at preet …."please." preet said lyk a innocent child…meher smiled "ok"..

The song HUM DIL DE CHUKE SANAM started playing …preet pulled meher towards him…and they started dancing….none of them said anything..they were just lost in the beauty of each others eyes….meher hairs were blowing In the air and according to him she wsnt luking less thn a angel….preet than slightly kissed meher on her right cheek and then on left cheek….meher ws overwhelmed with the love…she didn't remember she evr had a fight with him…r she wasn't talking to him…wat she remembered ws tht he is her's….forever and forever…preet lips then moved near to meher lips…more near more near…….and then preet slowly kissed meher on her lips…this ws the world for both of them…. Meeher dancing in preet's arm..this ws her world…preet then slowly kissed meher on her right shoulder….meher shivered a little…and feeling shy she turned to move but preet grabbed her hand again and then lifted her in his arms……………………………..

TO BE CONTINUED…………………….

So hw ws it???do comment….there z lot more fun and romance coming…so keep reading………….luv u guyz

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Posted: 15 years ago
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i likedd it so0o muchh 😃
HAHAA ...i'm blushing😳........
and when u sed there is more romance coming...hayye now my cheeks are pink lolll
but it was a veryyy sweet updateeee ...i'm eagarlyy waitng for more
lovee MEET with all my heart ..heheee....and ur FF
luv ya Rumshaaaaa<3





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Posted: 15 years ago
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love it...can you use the harman may baby giving track as a twist in meher and preets relationship?
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: pRinc3ssRZxJT

i likedd it so0o muchh 😃

HAHAA ...i'm blushing😳........
and when u sed there is more romance coming...hayye now my cheeks are pink lolll
but it was a veryyy sweet updateeee ...i'm eagarlyy waitng for more
lovee MEET with all my heart ..heheee....and ur FF
luv ya Rumshaaaaa<3





thnx alot rumsha.its really sweet ov u .nd nw i knw i can make people blush as well........😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: tadashi

love it...can you use the harman may baby giving track as a twist in meher and preets relationship?

hm.k let me think.this harman thing will nt be there in few upcoming parts.but ill try to put it in..........😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Here cums the next part 6…………..

Avoid any grammateical mistakes..thnku……..

Preet carried meher in her arms toward the bed…and lay her down on the bed….he kisses her then on her forehead and then kissed her on both her eyes……………..meher kissed preet lightly on his forehed as well…….then preet slowly kissed meher in her lips….and then whispered " I love u meher"……………

On the other hand ash was really jealous of meher's closeness to preet and frustrated with wat had happened in the party…..she ws standing nw outside preet and meher's room…she thought of something…..throwed the vase nearer to her placed on the table on the ground and then fell herself pretending tht she z hurt…."ouch…hai meri tang…uff"

Riya came running hearing the voice of ash..she suspected ash outside the room pf preet and meher and told her self " daal mei kuch to kala ha8i ..is ko to mei na…."…kuldi Harman and maya also came listening to the noise…Harman and riya picked ash frm the floor…" uff ash tum kitni bhari ho..kis chaki ka ata khati ho?"

Ash made a face realizing tht preet still hasn't cum out of his room…she started again crying in pain…but riya knew she ws upto sumthing…….."ash ab bus bhi karo.tum cheekh to aise rai ho jaise tume kisi ne mar diya ho…choti sic hoot hai….sb ki neend kyun kahrab kr rai ho……"maya made a face ceeing Harman pick ash up…

In the room meher heard ash crying voice and she suddenly got up…

PREET: " kya hwa meher ?"

MEHER: " Preet yeh shor kaisa hai…tum ne suna…..?" dekhte hain kya huwa hai?

PREET: " yar bache hn ge ya phir riya lagi ho gi tum bhi naa……"

MEHER: " NAI PREET PHR B DEKHNA TO CHAHIYE KISIKI CHILANE KI AWAZ HAI…"

Meher got up frm the bed started to move towards the door to c when preet grabbed her hand frm behind….

PREET: "mat jao na……….."😳

Meher made a face at preet…….." k baba dekhte hain ke kya hwa hai…" preet said frustrated😡 with the disturbance in their romance and opened the door to c wat has happened…he saw all ov them walking towards the other room ..…riya ws there in the front and ash ws there at back ov her…….she had givn ash to kulraj as she said she ws too fat for her to carry….preet opened the door and riya ws just leaving…when preet said "kya huwa hai?yeh shor kaisa hai?"

RIYA: " chalo tum logon ki bhi neend kharab ho gai…kuch nai yar bus ash ka pao phishal gaya r wo gir gayi…lekin girte girte pure ghar ko jaga diya…"said rolling her eyes…

MEHER: " zyada choot to nai lagi..? is she fine?" said genuinely worried nw.

RIYA: " uska to pata nai but usk utuhane ke baad Harman r kuraj ke tango r kandho mei zaroor dard ho ga…itni bhari hai wo…….. uff."

Meher made a face while preet chuckled😆…" she z fine yar…kuch bhi nai hai..u go av rest.." riya said.

Ash saw preet and meher standing in the door…riya coughed aloud…ceeing sumthing………" waise lagta hai ash ne sach mei tum dono ko disturb kr diya…hain na preet ?"

Riya said seeing sumthng on preet's face…and then giggled…preet didn't understand her reaction bt then meher followed riya's gaze and saw the lipstick on preet's cheek and a little on his lips…her eyes wide open…she elbowed preet ..but preet didn't understand wat she ws trying to say…" kya hai meher" preet whisphered…

" actually mei wo tumhe ye btana cha rai hai ke tumhari chehre par kuch laga hai ..shaed kuch lal.." RIYA said and saying this she bursted into laughter…meher got really embarrassed and shy but this didn't seem to bother preet at all..he just smiled annoyingly at riya….riya ws laughing loudly kuldi came and asked wat happened riya just showed her the marks and she also started laughing ….ash saw all this and also the marks tht riya ws showing to kuldi…she really got angry😡 as she ws going to get meher killed the just tht moment….

"ASH TAKE CARE OV UR SELF.." MEHER said smiling at ash…preet also smiled at ash…"take care ash"..saying this they all left and preet and meher went back in to their room….

Sorry guyzz this tym the update ws small bt nxt tym itll be big and better….keep reading…luv to all.

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