Originally posted by: loveabletwinz
maafi for bombarding this place with comments! hehe!you dont know...ive been waiting since you 'reserved' the spots...i kept checking...and then this morning...i got the PM...i was like *woo hoo* 🥳Part 2"Eek! Mujhe 'aap' maat bulao!" he yelled. --- ooi maa! How cutteeee! Prem is so adorable!
P.S --> I love reading about their bachpan..its just the perfect touch! Thodi si natkati *wink* he he...he was a cutie wasnt he...😍...notice i said....WAS 😉However, the other side, the one who had been Prem's wife, felt a strange sense of peace at seeing them suffer ---> ahh goosebumps! Such a weird kind of formidable effect this line has :-( I feel incredibly bad for heer! omg...that came to me out of the blue...but once i thought it up...i was like...crap...thats good...i gotta use it!!! 😳😳😳
Woh ek ladka hai, yani boy. Woh mera dost bhi hai, yani friend. Toh woh mera boy-friend hi hua naa?" Heer explained. Hahaha! CLASSIC! My goodness, if only I could count the number of times ive said that myself! *giggle* 😲😲😲...hmm...i get the feeling that you using it isnt as innocent as heer using it...😉😉😉 but hey...we all fib a little here and there...and vaise bhi...the explanation isnt wrong at all...kyun...its 100% correct...i should try it some time...speaking about boys...the other day...mom was talking about a rishta...she is like...boy wants u to call him...im like maa, please! boys call me...mom is like 😲😲 tauba...what boys...im like 🤔...saved by the bell when phone rang!!!
Roshni had a flare for anything fun and fashion related, while Diya was a book worm with aspirations of becoming a doctor. --- oh hoo! Itne alag?! Hehe! Very cute btw!!! they are like my twin niece/nephew...niece is all about the books and indian drama serials...😆😆😆...nephew...is more about sports and computer...love them to bits!!! 😃😃
AHH! That last para was SO darn intense! I cant believe they would do this again! Gosh, a bunch of insensitive, heartless, thick-skinned, brothers! Ufff! Did they NOT seee what happened the last time?! And why on earth is it always on their moms bday? Uff! Aur who bhi us din jab heer matham mana rahi ho! Uff! Jerks these men are! men are brainless...as you can tell from the award i gave Prem in the last KDC...i mean really!! idiotic jerks the whole lot of them...you've gotta train then and groom them if you want them to be half decent...😆😆 wow 😆😆 did i sound like a maha feminist or what? 😆😆
Okay, onto this part...you reallly have a way with words! Everything was so beautifully written! I loved reading about Prem and Heer's relationship! What time does to friendship eh? Man, they had the strongest bond! glad you liked premeer's bachpan ka rishta 😃
And *SIGH* --- heer forgetting her mom's bday... she didnt remember .. 7 yrs ago, she was the only one remembered :-(
jaz, I LOVED this part! There were so many little, intricate details that I fell in love with! And the flashback! Mwahh! With quite a bit going on, you still held a good balance.. it flowed so well! GREAT JOB!!!! thanks luv...wait wait...luv's...there are two of you naa...😆😆😆...thanks to you for commenting too 😳😳<3 tons, me too ❤️
AnnJan!
Originally posted by: loveabletwinz
Part 3
UFFFFFF!!! *fuming ---beats head on laptop* yeh log apni harkaton se KABHI baaz nahi ayenge! I dont CARE ki veera jaanthi thi ke nahi... its still a business deal! Uffff! In admiyon ko bas chaante ki kami hain! Jaz, give me a ticket straight into your FF, ek do thapad maar ke, ill be back! Chalega?! UFFF! KOI tho sabak sikhao inheee! omg omg...dont do that...laptop toot gaya toh phir kya hoga? 😉Uss raath ko maine aapni Didi ko maarte hue dekhi thi." ---> omg, and how old was chutki then? 12? stupid men! Sab ki zindagi barbaad kardi! That child has no business thinking all of that *sob* yup...guessed right...she was 12...nice execution of mathematical innuendo...did that make sense 😕😕😕
"Ussi pyaar ke tootne paar aap bhi toot gayi thi. Main nahin chati ke main khabi kissi se itna pyaar karoon ke usse khone ke baad main bhi aapne aapko khodoon," Veera said. "Aap ke dil mein abhi bhi Jiju hai. Itne saal hogaye aur aap unse utna pyaar karti hai jitna ke aap pehle karti thi. Aur main jaanti hoon, ke Jiju jahaan bhi hai, woh aaj bhi aapse pyaar karta hai ----> aye hayeee! Kya dialogue hain yaaar! I love this bit! I have such a TOUGH time writing dialogues, and when I read this, you make it look easy! MARVELOSO!!!!! and this describes veera's emotions so perfectly! Loving someone to the limit that she forgets her ownself! That kind of love...hmmph.. *poking your arm and saying* KYA KAR DIYA YAAR?! Itna dukh? Jao ab! Cutty!actually...ill be honest...and im not trying to be arrogant or anything like that...but the dialogue comes pretty easily for me...its the rest that i have to work on...like the details and stuff...i find myself talking to myself in the car...which is where i come up with most of my dialogues...well...the good ones anyway...😆oh and i noticed...cutty #3 🥺
*giggle* kulraj is chaloooooo! Badi achi plan thi! I love the relationship heer still has with her bhabi's! Aur kyun na ho... they have always supported her..just those men! Aye hayeee!i thought id throw in a scene with Kulraj cuz back then...the two younger gadhes were not married...😉😉😉
Tik hai Bhai. Aagar uss Manmeet ne kuch bhi kiya'main usse kha jaunga!" Nihaal said. --- haha, okay..i only like these men for one split second! But I will never forgive them for what they did to prem! Oh ho yaarr! BRING PREM BACK! BRING HIM BACK!! pweaasee! *haat jhodke bheek mangoing again* lots of phool barsoing! Maan lo na yaar! *puppy face* lmao....phool barsoing...reminded me of that old song...'baharoon phool barsaao mera mehboob aaya hai' ...wow....thats and old song...but a classic...he he...and yes...the brothers were 'nice' in that scene...but we cannot forget...we WILL NOT! kyun? 😉
haha, laksh! Bichare ka tho chehra utar gaya hoga! *giggle* I love this flashback! OMG! Prem is adorabllleee "Aur haan, mujeh bhi thoda thoda pasand ho" hai naa 😍
Haansi toh phasi!" Prem yelled as he jumped up --- ahhh! *FAINT* paanii! How infreakincredibly adorable is that line! Oh hoo! Baton mein ujlhana koi prem se seekhe! Hehe! you guys have the best combo-nonwords out there...just the best...love them all!!! and your hinglish...wah wah...mindblowing!!! 👏👏👏
My goodnesss! Aisi bhi hoti hain bhabiyaan? Hehe! Itni besharam! Nossssyyyyy! Hehe! "Haath pakda! Oh my God, ussne haath pakda!" Meher yelled! Awiieeee!ha ha...omg...kabab mein haddis rock!! i can say because i am one...just as my best friend...he he...jiju and her never get tiem alone...we pop up constantly...or we will...pehle shaadi hojane doh...jiju will hate me...cuz i only life 3 min away 😉
That was the first night in a long time that Heer went to bed with a smile on her face instead of tears. It was the first time in years she went to bed with hope in her heart instead of pain. It was the first time in years that she looked forward to the rising of the sun the next day instead of wishing the night would never end ---> uff, beautifully written! What a relief it is to read about Heer being happy...semi-happy alteast! I love this ending! yes...semi-happy is right...i got a pm with someone saying...HOW CAN HEER BE ALL HAPPY AND FORGET PREM...im like huh...when did i say that...😲...people take these ff's too seriously 🤣...guess they need a life...😉😉
Gosh yaar, I would have NEVER expected veera to be happy about this sagaai... this whole shaadi! Man, what a rush of memories might have hit heer no? But anywho, as long as veera is happy..and manmeet doesnt turn out to be the psychopath he was in the show, its all good! *happy dance --- bhangra style* woot woot!haila....i was listening to the Dil Bole Hadippa cd and i was totally bhangraing in the car...and yes...she is happy...and no..manmeet is not crazy...you should read Ek Paal...my old ff...wow...now in there...manmeet...Heer's husband...was crazy!! ha ha...😉
And YIPPPPPEE! Main dhanya ho gayi after reading all of this! Gosh, Im not even sure if I could properly comment! Lol! *phew* dharam sankat tal gayi! Hehe! I almost thought commenting on your parts was going to be impossible! Hehe! Finally, we DID it! im so happy and PROUD of my twinnies!!! 👏 so much dedication...haye...*happy tears*...so good to see!!! ❤️
This FF is going in a greattt direction!
But STILL! BRING PREM BACKK!! PLEASEEEEEE!! do an ekta on us and bring him back from the dead! *sob sob* even though we're getting plenty of prem in the flashback, I want him back in fleshh! What can I do? Bribe chalega? Lotssss of pakore for iftaari today? ----> achi offer hain, taalna mat! *giggle* lol...i was waiting for this...as for bribe...what did you have in mind 😉....😛...ill take pakores...but...hmm...im being greedy...what else you got?
JAZ
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