New SS: Tanhai Part 9 pg69 Dec 27

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Svetalana Singh

@-svetalana-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#191

OMG ..i am just speechless...i can't bear heer's sorrow and pain..

by the way i guess preet mehra is prem juneja..am i right ???

wonderful update

Quote

maneesha

@maneeshaF

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#192

Amazing update jazz.
Loved it.
U kept up so long and gave a beautiful update.
I doubt that this preet can be prem , with a new name.
Hope it 'll be true.
and waiting for the next.

I loved the song u put for the dance, it 's truly very meaningful.
And prem's dialogues were awesome.
Loved it , and plz update soon.😊😊

Edited by nuptalie - 16 years ago

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Payal

@-Payal-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#193

THANK YOUUUUUU!!!!!

No time for comments anymore, so will simply press the "like" for now until further notice, but you know I will get back to it at some point...sorry, thats the best I can do right now...haven't even read it yet actually...its 2 AM....will read tomorrow when i get the chance.....hope you're well...take care, sweetheart!

Jaan Leva Jhappi to You!
Love,
P

Quote

purplestar22

@purplestar22

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#194

Edited my comments for the Prologue, Ch1, Ch2. On pages 1 , 8 , 14!

Ps: Will edit my comments for Ch3 and Ch4 in the next 1-2 days!

😊

Quote

Nitty

@Nitty2910

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#195

Very, Very Emotional update... I has tears in my eyes reading them.loved it,,, feeling very sorry for heer.. she carries alot of her withing her... and only person she can share with is Prem...

Will be waiting for the update.. and will wonder who is this Preet Mehta gonna be...

Quote

coolgal270

@coolgal270

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#196

Oh! Thanks for the wonderful update!
I can't take heer's pain anymore...She is so alone in the world..And to think she has to see those people every day of her life who ruthlessly took away her life from her! *wipes tears*..This must be one of the most difficult situation one can face in life! sigh..
really happy that manmeet is a good char..that he loves veera..and I really like maya..she is a true frnd to heer who understands her pain without heer saying it out loud..

and this Preet mehta, is he prem? like u know, he changed his name, surname and went out to earn so much wealth so that he can get heer back?,,
i know u wont tell now but just cant wait for the update!..
lovely update and jaz, u r a grt writer! seriously!hats off to u!

dont forget to add me to ur PM list..I will be eagerly waiting for the next update!
love,sumi

Edited by coolgal270 - 16 years ago

Quote

amazingneira

@amazingneira

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#197

nice part.. liked the way prem expressed his.. feeling

it was a very painful part!!!

Is prem alive? Please disclose something

Quote

Maha

@-Maha-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#198

👏another great update yar.really emotional romantic sad 👏👏the way you describe heer pain was awesom

but ab ye preet mehra kahan sy aa gay😡

i hope he is prem otherwise i will be like😈

but seriously yar you are a great writer.plz disclose something about prem.we can not see heer in such pain.hope you will update soon and dont worry about delay

thanks for pm and plz pm me about next update😊

Quote

Angie

@angel82

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#199

Jaz , as usual beautiful update.....

I love it how the three sister-in-laws are more of sisters to the heer and veer .....their suport ,love and bonding....are soo touching....

Veera is so fussy but still cute...

Absolutely loved Premeer's first date....romantic, innocent and sweet....

I have always told u ,I love ur style of writing ..how you explain the scenes, the dialogues , the way you bring out the emotions so effectively , everything....

I loved the dialogues you wrote here...they all sounded so realistic...( hmm I thot you are from bangladesh, if yes , then how do speak hindi so well)

I loved how you brought out Heer's emotions, her loneliness, her sorrow .....like the scene where she's herself in the mirror dressed up or the scene where she sees love in manmeet's eyes for veera...all written well...

Heer's story here is soo heart-wrenching...she has to live with the pain of loosing her love,her life, with the ones who took it away from her.....

Preet Mehta....Jaz , no plz dont even think of pairing Preet with Heer ....

Preet MEhta better be Prem Jhuneja in disguise....and let him be prem itself after he gets his heer back ....plzzzzzzzzzz..........

Balraj and his sons appears as typical hindi movie landlords here...beautifully described

Quote

Aradhna

@Anhdara13

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#200

I'm crying now. I'll come back when it stops hurting.

*edited*

You have this ability to write in such a way that the readers' innards get twisted about until they're feeling for the characters. It's at the same time, brilliant and horrible. Brilliant, because that just shows what an excellent storyteller you are, and horrible, because everytime I read something by you I wanna cry. 😆

I love the fact that Heer is there for her sister, despite everything, she hasn't let her hurt and pain destroy her relationships with her Bhabhis, Mom and sister. And you know the bit where she gets all teary after talking to that buddhi aunty about being a vidva? I was so thrilled that she glared at her brother there. So so happy. She needs to remain angry at them.

And then the flashback, oh, their first date, and already they're planning their wedding? So like PremHeer. When she came back to reality, I had a hard time stifling my sobs when she wondered why her family couldn't be happy for her, for her being lucky enough to have someone who loved her so much. And why they're happy for Veera.

Entry of Preet now? I'm expecting him to be a good guy.

I cannot wait for more!

Love,
Radz

Edited by Anhdara13 - 16 years ago

Quote

1 ... 18 19 20 21 22 ... 55

New SS: Tanhai Part 9 pg69 Dec 27 - Page 20

Related Topics

Explore Topics