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Posted: 16 years ago
#41
OMG OMG OMG u took my breath away 😆
but now relieved after reading whole part....
i was scared when Vrinda ran with Prem.......But thanks so much for getting her married to Yug...i really like Yuvi.....
wow yaar what an amazing part.......so much unexpected.......
Hats off to u.........it was brilliant.......
loved it so much.......m really liking ur ff a lot...
plz add me to ur PM list😊


with lots of love
Deeksha
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Posted: 16 years ago
#42
hey
awesome update
thankz for pm
wonder what plan b is
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Posted: 16 years ago
#43
l just loved ..............feel like singing now ...............
plz continue asap and make a ravishing entry of heer..................😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: 9rpatel

awesome part
awesome!!!!!!!!
it did my answers!!!
PM me!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you. The next part will be today.

I'd pm you

Originally posted by: stunninstar

hey ...

nice one... wanted to write a bigger comment.. but dear i'm in a hurry now..anyways do update next part quickly.. waiting...;)

Thank you. No probs you can comment wenever you find time. The next part will be today.

Originally posted by: buttercup123

Wordless!I mean AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU ARE A WONDERFUL WRITER!!!!!!!!!!!And I just loved this part!!!!!!!!!!Please update soon!

thank you so much.

i'll update 2day

Originally posted by: cute_17deeks

OMG OMG OMG u took my breath away
but now relieved after reading whole part....
i was scared when Vrinda ran with Prem.......But thanks so much for getting her married to Yug...i really like Yuvi.....
wow yaar what an amazing part.......so much unexpected.......
Hats off to u.........it was brilliant.......
loved it so much.......m really liking ur ff a lot...
plz add me to ur PM list


with lots of love
Deeksha

Thank you so much.

Stay tuned for next part hoping to make it better than this but let me see

Anywayz it'll be posted this evening

Originally posted by: -Pooji-

hey
awesome update
thankz for pm
wonder what plan b is

Thank you I'll update soon

Plan b will be more rocking than this because it'll be preet in action

Trying to make it hilarious and emotional too tough job

I'll do dat by evening

Originally posted by: angel_60107

l just loved ..............feel like singing now ...............

plz continue asap and make a ravishing entry of heer..................

Thank you. Even me and my friend's mood got all excited when we just thought about it .

As you said ravishing entry of heer it would take some time.

thanks again everyone. your comments inspire me to make it more and more interesting. the next update will be in the evening. got to go now byeee

hoping to see more comments
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Posted: 16 years ago
#45
hii dat was jus amazing👏
waiting 4r plan b
plz update soooooooooon
pm me
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Posted: 16 years ago
#46
sorry guys it would be a short part as i had to loose the other part twice because of mutliple power cuts. i was a bit off today and to add on it these powercuts hoping it isn't too bad

Chapter 4

Finally, coming back to senses preet decides to call prem, taking his cell from his pocket he makes his way towards his room and quickly dials the number. There, prem after messaging rajveer was heading towards the car when he gets a call. Seeing its' preet he quickly attends to it

PREM: Hello preet mein bas tujhe hi call karne wala tha

PREET: Oh god! What have you done? I thought you never hid anything from me.

PREM: preet listen I'm really sorry but I didn't wanna take any risk.

PREET: risk!!!!! Ab kya aapne kum risk le raki hai what are you going to do now?

PREM: Its' not me but it is you who are going to make the rest of the plan work.

Before pret could interrupt prem goes on saying listen carefully and tells him the rest of the plan.

PREET: Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaat? Are you out of your mind PB? If papa comes to know about it he'd surely kill me considering the fact how much he loves me. My life is very dear to me even if it doesn't matter to you.

PREM: please Preet tu itna bhi nahin kar sakta.mere liye na sahi toh vrinda ke liye, uski khushi ke liye

PREET: oh now stop that emotional atyachar. I'll do as you say.

PREM: That's like my cute brother. Agar kuch gadbad ho gayi hai toh just message me and one more thing she'll be in the backyard in 5min.

PREET: teek hai I just hope everything goes on well.

He then disconnects the phone and falls on to his bed. He thinks PB you just always get your things done by emotional blackmailing.

Back there near the mandap, someone was asking the band why were they silent as if someone was dead. Shaadi ka ghar he bajao. An orchestra was also arranged, they start playing

Jia Jia Jia Jia Doleh'
1-2-3-4'6'

Yeh dil pighla ke saaz bana loon,
dhadkan ko awaz bana loon,
smoking
smoking nikle re dhooan.

Seene mein jalti hai armanon ki arthi,
Arrey what to tell you darling kya hua.
Arrey sapne dekhe jannat ke,
par mitti mein mil jaen,
phooken re ghar baar ki duniya..
ko bole
good bye..
Chad jae haye Allah,
jisko bhi yeh bukhaar,

Tauba
Tera
Jalwa, Tauba tera pyar,
Tera Emosanal Attyachaar!
Tauba
Tera Jalwa, Tauba tera pyar,
Tera Emosanal Attyachaar!

Jao Jao oh dilbar,
oh dilbar ohh!!
Tauba
Tera Jalwa, Tauba tera pyar,
Tera Emosanal Attyachaar!

Ho gai dil ke paar tragedy'tragedy,
lut gai re bahaar, gul sukh sukh murjhae,
Ho gai dil ke paar tragedy'tragedy,
lut gai re bahaar, gul sukh sukh murjhae,

Preet then, jumps out of his bed and storms out of his room angrily. Making his way through the dancing crowd reaches the orchestra and then gives a serious look to them. Terrified of his looks they just stop singing then, preet joins both his hands together and says "please koi aur gaana bajao." They start singing a punjabi song and everything resumes. Preet then moves away from there. He stands in the corner thinking "if only PB knew through what emotional atyachar he has put me into." I feel stuck between a mud pool and water pool. He then sees lalit who was busy chatting with a group of people in the front and the mandap in the back.

PREET(to himself): I guess I should leave for the backyard now. I must get her inside before anyone else finds her.

He then goes into the backyard to find a girl in bridal attire with ghoonghat covering her face. He then takes her inside the house through the back door. Without getting noticed by anyone he manages to get her into vrindas' room. All thanks to his experience of getting late to home from pubs and then slipping from back door to his room silently. Leaving her in the room he joins everyone downstairs.

The pandit then asks the dulha to sit in the mandap and starts performing the pooja. After a few minutes he asks to get the bride, gauri was about to go when preet stops her and says "I'll go". Gauri nods and then preet leaves.

In vrinda's room

He finds her standing at the window. He says " panditji's calling." Then, he gets her down . gauri takes her to the mandap and helps her sit beside the dulha. One by one the rituals were being performed. With every passing minute preets' skipping a heart beat watching lalit who was smiling widely. Finally, the marriage takes place. Then, the pair goes and takes aashirvaad from everyone. They go to lalit and gayatri, then pratham and gauri finally reaching rajveer's mom. They touch her feet , she blesses them and then hold the bride and removes the ghoonghat from her face.

It wasn't vrinda, it was bharti whom rajveer loved but his mother opposed.

RAJVEER'S MOM: yeh sab kaise hua. Lalit bhaisaab aap aisa kaise kar sakte hain.

Lait was rooted to the ground unable to believe what he had just seen.

PREET(to himself): satyanash ho iss budhi ka ghar jaake nahin dekh sakthi thi kya? Jiska darr tha woh hi hogaya.

once again sorry. there'll be just one more chapter and then would be the entry of someone. plz bear withe me for one more chapter. plz comment guys i wuldn't mind even criticism the views are hundred times more than replies. 😭😭😭

Edited by premeer4rever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#47
😊
*edited*
soo sweet update.poor pret feed bad 4 him.its really amazing part.wait 4 the next update asap.
thanks 4 the pm.
Luv
Fatima
Edited by -fsn- - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#48
hey,
that was really very nice...
GOD!!! prem really did atyachaar on poor preet...
but wow what a drama...
keep up the good work!!!
regards,
Suhana.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#49
hey, it was good.
so dramatic
preet's emotional atyachar was gud. bechara
hope he doesn't land into trouble
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Posted: 16 years ago
#50
"satyanash ho iss budhi ka ghar jaake nahin dekh sakthi thi kya? Jiska darr tha woh hi hogaya."
wow!...that was the best dialogue in the whole story!! LMAO! I can just imagine Preet saying that!! 😆
aweesome update!...i finally understand everything!..vrinda loved yug and raj loved bharti so they switched brides! and Prem helped becuz that's the kind of person he is!!
LOL...when preet stomped downstairs to the band and told them to change the song...i was laughing like crazy!!!
overall..it was funny!..sweet that preet did all of that for his PB and vrinda!..superb!
update soon!!
~nitya
Edited by nityatarlapally - 16 years ago

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