||Pyar Ki Uljan|| (Meet) Pt. 6 Pg. 12 (11/15) - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Ohh that sounds really interesting
Could you add me to the PM list as well please
Edited by Aaliyah01 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks! Will add you all soon! 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Meera that sounds FANTASTIC! And I want to read that book now. *mutters, must add to list*

I cannot wait for you to begin. And we can all wait. (I'm sure you'll manage to add in Prem, I know you will. You cannot live without him.)

Love,
Radz

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Posted: 16 years ago
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@ Radz: It's a very cute book! 😳

And Prem?? Not this time, there's only one spot for him, being a boy who's whipped by his girl..not sure I want tht! 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 1


"So I think I'll be able to make it perfectly gorgeous," my best friend, Maddy said as she pushed a sketch pad towards me. She had designed an exquisite baby blue colored anarkali suit with embroidery everywhere. "In other words, you'll look so much more beautiful than Sanjana Rampal that she'll cry."


I picked up the sketch pad and examined the suit from top to bottom and set my ice cream bowl on the far end of the table. I couldn't stand to be away from ice cream too long. After all family business has to be appreciated right? But for the moment I forgot about my Chocolate Fiesta as I placed my eyes on looking at Maddy's sketch. "Oh! It's so pretty!"


She grinned up at me. "Really?"


"Really."


Maddy squealed and went back to checking over her design while I pulled my ice cream bowl back towards me. Maddy had been through so much in the past few months--it always felt good seeing her smile like this.


The main reason we were intent on looking better than Sanjana Rampal was one main reason. We HATED her. She was one of those girls you'd always hate. She came from Mumbai a year ago and literally stole everything from under our noses. We were smart. She was smartER. We were fun. She was funnER. We were pretty. She was prettiER. But the worst thing she did was steal Maddy's about-to-be boyfriend, Manav Khanna.


Manav and Maddy were next door neighbours and Maddy had loved him from afar for years. At the end of the last school year, it had seemed like Manav was FINALLY noticing Maddy; he'd asked her to go with him to dinner, and he had been spending time at her house, 'studying.' (READ: watching television while holding hands.) Then Sanjana had set her sights on him and it was like Maddy didn't exist anymore. They had become an item then.


Ever since then Shabo, our other best friend and I had declared war on her. Although the only thing we'd done so far was sneer at her. As I watched Maddy sketch a tux figure next to the anarkali suit my eyes immediately drifted off to my dream world. I could hardly judge guy's clothes, but Harman would look amazing in the tux that Maddy designed for him. Of course, Harman just happened to be the cutest guy I'd ever met, with his curly hair all cropped short--and those eyes. *


"You're frowning. Why are you frowning?" Maddy asked suddenly as she looked up at me. "You're not happy?"


"No! I think it's gorgeous." I stuck a spoon of my ice cream back in my mouth. "I was only thinking, will you have time before the big dance to design it?"


She shook her head. "Course I will! All I need are your measurements and Harman's."


I quickly took out my phone and checked through the messages. 0 Messages


Maddy's face looked concerned which made my insides do a little flip. "You'll have plenty of time to get his measurements," I assured her.


Harman didn't live in our city. He was more of city boy. He lived in Mumbai with his parents and little sister Veera. I met him three years ago at a giddha competition. He was the first person who congratulated me and I fell for that smile.


But now I was getting impatient. He'd always come up here every year around this time--but this year I hadn't heard anything from him for weeks now. The feeling was unnerving.


Whacha think? 😳 *I'm telling you now...describing Harman like that'made me wanna.....(ugh!) Anyways...I'll start on the next chapter soon, and yes sadly Preet is not introduced yet but he will be soon! 😛 Courtesy of either Shabo or Maddy (who btw...like their additions?😛) I was in the mood to use forum members rather than ppl in my head! 😛 And Radz...no Prem! 😃 Hope you guys liked it! 😛


Love you all loads,


Meera😳

Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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yay* jumps up and down* Me first 😃
thnx for the PM

When I was reading it Im like whose POV is that and in the end I figured it would be Meher.

You write it really really gracefully and its so easy to imagine.👏


Hope you update soon

Love Lily

Edited by LilyGurl - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Woww......im really liking this FF......dont think ive read anything like this beforee......youre such a good writer.....you express peoples feelings/emotions soo well......do update soon......n please add me to the PM list.....thnxx.

Alpha.

xx.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Another FF! And that too a Meet one. Yayy!
Awesome intro!
reservedd!
I loved it Meera!! 😛
Maddy designing Meher's dress..sounds beautilful. Anyways..hauu Sanjana stole Manav from Maddy. I don't like her. They were best...but she was bettER..😆 I love how you did that. Shows how Sanjana really is. Poor Maddy.
hmm....Wasn't describing Harman like that hard? It's really hard to believe the details about Harman 😆 Well I loved the first part. Can't wait till Harman and Preet come into the FF!
Yayy
Love you
Anza
Edited by -Anza- - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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*squeals* You updated! That was quick!!!! 😆 What was that about Radz and no Prem in the end!?!? 😕 Me confused! Any hoo! 😆 I'm one of Meher's best friend, awwwww! Thank you, i'm honoured you thought of me! 😳 YAY, Shabz is here too!
But i'm glad Meher likes the design! 😳😆 I love sketching stuff, i am very artsy............... well i was till i had time and i wasn't in IB!!! 😆 Anyways, OMG! I DON'T like Sanjana! She stole Manav from me!!!! 😲 I'll show her! I agree with Shabz, it's war time! 😆 *Giggles* Manav! *sigh* Stupid Sanjana! *pouts*
Anyways, i can understand! Having to describe Harman all nice is like............. !!! 😆 Frankly speaking, i never thought he was very good looking! Like he isn't ugly, but at the same time he is no Prem or Preet! ☺️😆
Awww, poor Meher is about to be hit by a shocker! 😭 But Preet hai naa!!! 😆 Why do i feel like Sanjana and Maya are about to become the best of friends!?!? *thinking face on* 😆
I like the beginning, can't wait till the next part! 😃 Hope you update soon again! 😳
Love you! *hug*
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aaliyah01

Will read and comment!

Great update
Aww Poor Meher thinks she'll be going to the dance with Harman
At least Meher will meet Preet later
Loved this part as it reminded me of an old friend who literally said the same thing once 😆
We HATED her. She was one of those girls you'd always hate. She came from Mumbai a year ago and literally stole everything from under our noses. We were smart. She was smartER. We were fun. She was funnER. We were pretty. She was prettiER.
Cant wait to read more
Update again soon please 😃

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