||Pyar Ki Uljan|| (Meet) Pt. 6 Pg. 12 (11/15) - Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
#21
Me! I'm so excited you updated! I just sneaked in a glance before crashing for the day...and what do I see....An update from you! Yay!

And it's such a wonderful wonderful update! And we have Maddy and Manav....Whooooopeeeeeee....I love manav and maddy....

And Shabzie...Yay! Cool!

But Harman....cute????? (Kinda hard to digest) but Me! you've written him, so I like him already...😊

Loved the conversation between Maddy and Meher....Awesome!

Oh! I just can't wait for the next update Me! Can't wait!

Awesome Update! I loved it!

Big big hug:)
Love:-Nonee
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Posted: 16 years ago
#22
great part please update soon sorrie for late reply just got home
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I'm going to miss Prem, I love how you write him!

But Harman actually sounded cute (and his smile is actually to die for), but considering what is coming? Hmph.

Ahh, Madz and Shabzie? Meher's best friends, I can so see it! And I don't like Sanjana already. And Manav, at the moment, I don't like him all that much either. He needs to be hit over the head to see sense. Ooh, I'd love to see Maddy come looking all gorgeous, and Manav ignore Sanjana and just drool over her, and she ignores him! And focuses on her date. Who should so totally be Mayank! (My sexy sadoo *blush*)

Love,
Radz

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks Jamune and Radz, will comment back on all comments tonight! 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow oh wow please do more i love reading this and i know what u mean harman and cute smile ( don't scare me please) lol
Posted: 16 years ago
#26
Ohh Madz and me? *high5*

That was so awesome, and EWWW, sorry I can't like Harman, but you described him really nicely. Ohhh loser Manav. Let's hit him with a frying pan and make it look like an accidental. 😆 SS is BACK! Continue soon!

--shabz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: LilyGurl



yay* jumps up and down* Me first 😃
thnx for the PM

When I was reading it Im like whose POV is that and in the end I figured it would be Meher.

You write it really really gracefully and its so easy to imagine.👏


Hope you update soon

Love Lily



Yay! 😛 I'm glad you're first, and aww no probs for them pm. Sorry, I should've mentioned it! 😳

Originally posted by: Mallu_gal

Woww......im really liking this FF......dont think ive read anything like this beforee......youre such a good writer.....you express peoples feelings/emotions soo well......do update soon......n please add me to the PM list.....thnxx.

Alpha.

xx.



I'll definitely add you to the pm list asap, and I'm glad you like the way I write it! 😳

Originally posted by: -Anza-

Another FF! And that too a Meet one. Yayy!

Awesome intro! Thanks Anzi! 😃
reservedd!
I loved it Meera!! 😛 Awww yay! 😃
Maddy designing Meher's dress..sounds beautilful. Anyways..hauu Sanjana stole Manav from Maddy. I don't like her. They were best...but she was bettER..😆 I love how you did that. Shows how Sanjana really is. Poor Maddy. Teehee, thanks! 😳 Aww yes...stupid Sanjana...and aww I'm glad you liked that! 😛
hmm....Wasn't describing Harman like that hard? It's really hard to believe the details about Harman 😆 Well I loved the first part. Can't wait till Harman and Preet come into the FF! It was....torturous! 😛 And Preet's coming in the next chapter!😉😆
Yayy
Love you
Anza



Originally posted by: blackdaughter

*squeals* You updated! That was quick!!!! 😆 What was that about Radz and no Prem in the end!?!? 😕 Me confused! Any hoo! 😆 I'm one of Meher's best friend, awwwww! Thank you, i'm honoured you thought of me! 😳 YAY, Shabz is here too! I did! 😳 Yeah...once I get into the story, I write too much! 😛 Ahh that was....because Radz doesn't think I'll be able to write an ENTIRE ff without Prem, but I said that I would! 😳 Awww no need to thank me Maddy! 😳 I needed another guy that was Preet, or Prem or Harman, and as much as I love Mayank...he's not so...'flimsy' In a way..and Manav just suits this, a bit soft and all..kinda? 😕

But i'm glad Meher likes the design! 😳😆 I love sketching stuff, i am very artsy............... well i was till i had time and i wasn't in IB!!! 😆 Anyways, OMG! I DON'T like Sanjana! She stole Manav from me!!!! 😲 I'll show her! I agree with Shabz, it's war time! 😆 *Giggles* Manav! *sigh* Stupid Sanjana! *pouts* Teehe...I'm glad you are artsy! 😃 And no one likes SS! 😛
Anyways, i can understand! Having to describe Harman all nice is like............. !!! 😆 Frankly speaking, i never thought he was very good looking! Like he isn't ugly, but at the same time he is no Prem or Preet! ☺️😆 Ugh! Please...I didn't wanna but I had to show that Meher really liked him...and no one's like Prem or Preet! 😳 Well Prem for me!😆😆
Awww, poor Meher is about to be hit by a shocker! 😭 But Preet hai naa!!! 😆 Why do i feel like Sanjana and Maya are about to become the best of friends!?!? *thinking face on* 😆 You think? 😳 We'll see...
I like the beginning, can't wait till the next part! 😃 Hope you update soon again! 😳 How's today for you? 😛
Love you! *hug*



Originally posted by: Aaliyah01

Great update
Aww Poor Meher thinks she'll be going to the dance with Harman
At least Meher will meet Preet later
Loved this part as it reminded me of an old friend who literally said the same thing once 😆
We HATED her. She was one of those girls you'd always hate. She came from Mumbai a year ago and literally stole everything from under our noses. We were smart. She was smartER. We were fun. She was funnER. We were pretty. She was prettiER.
Cant wait to read more
Update again soon please 😃



Thanks for liking it Aaliyah! 😳 And Aww yeah there are SO many girls like that...

Originally posted by: noneeM

Me! I'm so excited you updated! I just sneaked in a glance before crashing for the day...and what do I see....An update from you! Yay! N! 😃 I do that every morning before starting out my day! 😛

And it's such a wonderful wonderful update! And we have Maddy and Manav....Whooooopeeeeeee....I love manav and maddy.... You made me love them together! 😉😳

And Shabzie...Yay! Cool! She''ll get expanded on too! 😳

But Harman....cute????? (Kinda hard to digest) but Me! you've written him, so I like him already...😊 Partially N! 😛 but I know what you mean...I was like ugh writing it! 😳

Loved the conversation between Maddy and Meher....Awesome! Thanks! 😃

Oh! I just can't wait for the next update Me! Can't wait! Well it'll be up asap! 😛

Awesome Update! I loved it! Thanks! 😃

Big big hug:) *hugs back*
Love:-Nonee



@Anzu: commented back! 😃

@Jamune: thanks again! 😳

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

I'm going to miss Prem, I love how you write him! I'm gonna *sniff* miss Prem too! 😔

But Harman actually sounded cute (and his smile is actually to die for), but considering what is coming? Hmph. Really? I never found him cute...but since I just saw all the Kis Desh episodes I've missed...I loved him in the one where Maya was pretending to jump from the hotel!😆😆😆

Ahh, Madz and Shabzie? Meher's best friends, I can so see it! And I don't like Sanjana already. And Manav, at the moment, I don't like him all that much either. He needs to be hit over the head to see sense. Ooh, I'd love to see Maddy come looking all gorgeous, and Manav ignore Sanjana and just drool over her, and she ignores him! And focuses on her date. Who should so totally be Mayank! (My sexy sadoo *blush*) Yup...they're her bff's....and here's a hint! 😛 Shabzie...almost bff with Preet too!😉😳 Ahhh no one likes SS! 😳 And Manav...yeah but I needed someone like that...😆 And (yes Prem suits the character😛) Mayank? shud be Maddy's date? 😛 We'll see! 😳

Love,
Radz



Originally posted by: shikha87

wow oh wow please do more i love reading this and i know what u mean harman and cute smile ( don't scare me please) lol



Thanks Shikha for understanding what I went through to even imagine it! 😆

Originally posted by: shabo24

Ohh Madz and me? *high5*

That was so awesome, and EWWW, sorry I can't like Harman, but you described him really nicely. Ohhh loser Manav. Let's hit him with a frying pan and make it look like an accidental. 😆 SS is BACK! Continue soon!

--shabz



Yup yup you two! 😛

Thanks! 😳 And I don't like Harman either...and you...even in this ff...DEF don't!😉😆 Let's not hit Manav and let him be! 😳 As for SS...she def is! 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 2


Harman Juneja. How to describe him? Three years ago our annual giddha competition (it's a form of dance for those who don't know) was going on and the minute I was announced the winner I jumped off the stage in excitement and ran into the crowd bumping into the tall Harman Juneja who mumbled a quiet congratulations—but from that moment on I was gone. We got together shortly after when he came into my parent's ice cream place and we began to talk. He'd always come up after exams and they'd stay for two weeks and then until the next time—we'd survive on texts and emails.


"Don't worry Maddy," I smiled at her. "He'll be here in time for measurements."


Maddy was lying though. She wasn't worried about the measurements; it was Harman himself. Shabo had gone and planted a seed of doubt in her mind, the same seed that she'd been trying to plant in mine for weeks.


The fact was I kinda hadn't heard from Harman in about three weeks. Shabo had gotten wind of Harman's sudden blackout and was convinced that this was HIS way of telling me he wouldn't be coming up to Ludhiana for the break this year. Shabo didn't like Harman. Two years ago he had promised to drive her up to see one of her favourite bands but he had to cancel last minute since Veera—his little sister had broken her leg. Ever since then he appeared 'wishy-washy' to her. I mean he was looking after his LITTLE SISTER. I for one think it's a valid reason. But once Shabo decided on something—it was hard to change her mind; and now lately she had decided that I should also understand. Her favourite examples of Harman's 'wishy washy' ness were when he bought two of the same hats in red and blue because he didn't know which one he liked better. Or the time when we were at a restaurant and he couldn't decide between French fries or mashed potatoes and he took so long that the waitress just brought him both.


Shabo never understood Harman. But I did and that was why we were together. Despite his little indecisiveness; he was one of the most caring and sensitive guys I knew.


I licked off some of the ice cream on my finger and pointed at Maddy. "You and Shabo have me thinking bad about Harman,"


"Sorry Meher," Maddy mumbled.


And she pulled that face on me again. I couldn't stand it when Maddy's bottom lip started quivering. "No—I'm sorry."


My main reason for going along with this, 'Make Sanjana Rampal pay' scheme was because I wanted her to cry her eyes out break up with Manav so that he could realize what he was missing with Maddy and that would leave me feeling happy. (Yeah I know dreams never come true,)


Maddy pushed her bangs away from her face. "I wish Shabo would let me design a dress for her too,"


We both knew that wouldn't happen. Shabo had her favourite dress picked out from ages ago. The only issue at that point was finding someone to flaunt on her arm; not that she wasn't asked out. She was asked out PLENTY. The promise was—no one was good enough for our Shabz.


The door to my parent's ice cream shop, Kwality opened then; the bells clanging loudly indicating my need to rise and help them out. But as I was standing I saw that it was only Preet and Shabo.


I looked immediately at Maddy, to point out the fact that Shabo and Preet were together. Her eyebrow shot up, and her mouth formed an O. I had decided that only love would shake Shabo from her slightly sarcastic nature.


Preet was sunny enough to overcome Shabo's sarcastic nature, but he was the apple of almost every girl's eye in our college. It was a long shot that he'd ever settle for dating just one, but I still held out hope, for Shabo's sake. Not that she'd ever expressed interest, but still.


As Shabo and Preet walked through the door, I saw that they were both red-faced. They were sort of speed walking, not really running but moving fast while trying hard to NOT run. In fact, they looked like they were trying to avoid being noticed. And Shabo looked funny. She had on a too long, too old lady like bulky midnight navy parka that I'd never seen before. It didn't really fir her, and now only that, her left arm was draped in front of it, as if she was holding something underneath the coat.


"Oh no," I didn't know what it was all about, but the two of them were each mischievous in their own right. When they got together, the havoc they could cause was untold.


"Shut the door!" Shabo exclaimed, catapulting herself through the entrance and snagging the sleeve of the ridiculously puffy coat on one of the bells. "Argh!" She made a very very weird sound while trying to get herself untangled from it.


"How do you lock this thing?" Preet fumbled around the door, looking for a lock.


"Hey Preet," the freshman girls sitting at the bar cooed. Preet straightened up, forgetting whatever had been so urgent just moments before, ran a tanned hand through his gorgeous hair and flashed a smle that melted hearts. "Hello there, ladies."


I rolled my eyes and Maddy giggled.


"Preet! Lock the door," Shabo half shouted at him. Preet looked at the door as if he'd never seen one before and then walked over to it while I just shook my head and went to help and quickly turned the lock that was plainly in sight for him.


"Oh," He said, turning his grin on me. "I don't know why I never saw it,"


"Preet, you'll have to keep an eye out. Stand there and keep watch," Shabo ordered. Her dark hair tumbled down her back as she whipped off her dark grey hair.


"Keep an eye out for what?" Maddy asked.


"What's going on? Whose coat is that?" I asked.


Shabo nodded her head and pointed a finger at me, as if acknowledging my observing skills. "It's Mean Daljeet's. I had to take it. It was the only coat bulky enough to hide it."


"By god," Maddy shook her head and let it drop in her hands.


"You didn't," I said as I sank onto the booth's seat.


Shabo pointed at Preet. "It's all his fault. He's the one who made me take it."


"Hey! You thought she should see it too," Preet said lazily from his post at the door.


"Yeah, but I wasn't the genius who had the thought of stealing it. Do you know what Mean Daljeet's will do to me if she realize what we did?" Mean Daljeet was Shabo's boss at the front desk from the local hotel. She had it out for Shabo, ever since Shabo got caught lecturing some guests about wearing leather. Daljeet was old—nobody knew how old—even though she desperately tried to look young.


"I was just going to have you come over. But it turns out Preet's kinda good at theft." I didn't say anything to Shabo, but if Preet was the one who was good at 'theft' why was the stolen item in HER stolen jacket?


"Shabo! It's her! It's Mean Daljeet!" Preet pointed through the door, and Maddy and I held our breaths while Shabo tried to disappear beneath the table. Then Preet shook his head and said. "Nope. My bad. Just a big dog there."


Shabo glared at him.


"Guys, you're making me nervous." I said. "What's going on?"


"Sit down, Meher," Preet suggested.


"Yeah, sit here." Shabo pointed at the seat across her. "Like I said, this wasn't my idea." She unzipped the parka as Maddy stared at her stunned. "I can't believe you stole her jacket."


Shabo laughed. "That's the least of my worries. Daljeet's gonna freak if she finds THIS missing." And Shabo took out a large leather-bound oversize book from the coat.


"You took the register book?" I asked in disbelief.


"Well it serves her right for not letting us get a computer. Everyone uses a computer now."


Maddy put a hand on Shabo's arm, to calm her. Maddy is very soothing and once Shabo starts on Daljeet, it's no use trying to calm her down.


"Okay so what do I need to see?"


Shabo took a deep breath.


"Just show her already," Preet shouted as a group of people walked through the door.


"I'll be right with you," I said to the customers as they approached the counter. It'd take them a while to pick anyways.


"Hurry up okay? My mom is going to kill me."


Shabo took another deep breath and flipped through some pages while my breathing slowed and then got faster all in the same minute.


"I found it this morning but I didn't know what to make of it." She flipped some more and stopped at the page with the list of participants for the costume part of the special dance coming up and put her finger on a pair of names and rotated the book so I could read it.


I saw my own name next to Harmans. Looking just like it should; perfect. But then Shabo took the book away from me and turned one page and her finger stopped on another name.


"Maya Singhania? Who's that?" I asked.


"Keep reading."


I did. Maya Singhania of Mumbai, was entering the contest as well with Harman Juneja. My boyfriend. I was too confused to say anything. I looked up at Shabo, hoping she could help me figure out what to think.


"He's here Meher." Shabo said sadly, and flipped back towards the front of the book. "His family got in yesterday."


Harman had been in town for an entire day and he hadn't called me. And he'd brought another girl with him.


How was that? Next chapter should be up tom or the day after...! 😛 I feel like I'm on a roll...weird na? 😳 I'll have you also know...this is one of the longest chapters EVER! 😛


Love you loads,


Meera😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
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salsa! =D
I'm so sorry! I have been so busy lately! *holds ears* Aww, i feel so bad for Meher! Poor thing. I'm so glad at least she has us by her side! 😭
OMG, he couldn't decide what he wanted to eat, so he got both!?!?! 🤣 That's so...... lame!! 😆 Hehehe, it seems i'm good with the puppy dog eye expression! Go me! *proud smile* 😆
Oh yay! Preet's entry! With shabz eh!?!? 😆 Shabz is wearing a parka!?!? 🤣 This is hilarious!! You made me say 'by god'!!! I freaking love you!! *truck loads of hugs* If only you knew how much i say it now!! 😆
I love DJ's explanation!! So funny!! Oh no though!! Hraman is already here with his family!! Not good what so ever for Meher's heart!!! 🤢
I don't like maya!!! i guess we should thank her because in the long run she is the reason that Meet will be together but still!! 😆 I feel awful for Meher!!! 😭
Great update, not gonna comment on the next part!! 😳
Love you! *hug*
Edited by blackdaughter - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i didnt mean it that way i like clues😳
reserved Second :D

What do I say.... Oh yeah hate Haman these days hes the main villain in every other ff. Whenevr I see my gym teacher who sorta looks like Harman I hate him at the spot always making us angry. So yeah the gym teacher makes me angry Gosh hes so strict >Harman makes me even angrier when he hurts Meher.

Meera it was so cool. Shabz di has Preet right now all im wondering how will Meet get together without hurtiing Shabz di.

Thnx for the PM

Love Lily
Edited by LilyGurl - 16 years ago

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