||Pyar Ki Uljan|| (Meet) Pt. 6 Pg. 12 (11/15) - Page 5

Thanks for all the comments guys! 😃 will comment back super soon! 😛

FANTASTIC update thats all i can say and would as its the best fic out thier WOW o.k enough of my compliments lol ( i know you want more but i will b 2 teired 2 type up) so please keep it up n thanx 4 ur p.m

@Maddy: Will wait! 😳

Originally posted by: Aaliyah01

Nice update

Harman maybe be a two=faced dog but at least Meher has some great friends

Loved the way you wrote Shabo and Preet it was as if you could almost sense the anticipation of being caught

Cant wait for the next part

Awww thanks, and yes Meher has awesome friends, Shabo and Preet....too much fun!😆

@Anzu: Can't wait to see what you think! 😊

Originally posted by: shabo24

I feel so weird reading about myself. It's like, people's opinions of me on paper, or screen. And hey, I am I VERY agreeable person. Sure? 😳 And yes...well this is not completely what I think of you, it's just some of it...seemed to work! 😳

So comments on Harman in general - you are RIGHT! Hate him, and taking "care" of his sister is not a wishy-washy reason! Gosh, someone needs to open Meher's eyes! BTW; the contrast between Maddz and me was awesome, and you painted the friendship between the three fantastically. Thought so! 😃😳 I'm glad you liked the way the friendship worked! 😳

'kay I'm a tad confused? Me and Preet are a couple? Cuz we are were "friendly" in this. Ohhh I can't WAIT till the matchmaking and the falling in love starts! BTW; Meher sounds a lot like you in this fic. Just saying. 😛 Nope nope...I've explained to you, ek ladka aur ladki dost bhi ho sakhte hain!😉😆😆 I'm glad you like it so far, and honestly I still don'\t get the Meher and Me similarity yet!😳😆😆

--shabz

Originally posted by: pRinc3ssRZxJT

heyyy thatt was so0o niceee😃

plz add me to ur pm list

cant wait to see whts gonna happen next

btw nice coupless u formed deree loll hehee😆😆

luv rumsha

I'll add you soo, and thanks for liking it Rumsha!

Originally posted by: sourpuss

THIS is one of your longest chapters?! 🤣 I see I see... Sssh!! 😳 for this ff maybe? 😛

So I wasn't planning on commenting, but the entire thing had me in stitches, and I just had to comment! Yay! 😃

I loved the way you described Harman's wishy-washy-ness. And the way Shabz thought he was wishy-washy just because he had bought two hats in different colours just because he couldn't decide. And the mashed potatoes-french fries thing. Seriously hilarious. 🤣 Thanks! 😳 One of my cousins is like that....gets on my nerves!😆😆

And then Shabz and Preet. "Hey, ladies." 🤣 That is so typical Preet!!! 🤣🤣🤣 And they stole Daljeet's coat and the register? Man, Shabz and Preet are just aweswome. *worships* Awww I'm glad you liked it! 😛 And they are that! 😃

Awww but poor Meher! Harman came with Mayashrimpface! *hugs Meher* Stupid Maya...but I'm telling you all in advance...she's not so evil! 😳

I almost thought Preet and Shabz were together, but as I was typing out this comment I remembered that it's a Meet FF. -_-" Today just isn't my day, in terms of common sense. no...I can't explain things properly enough!😳😆

Love,

Bhav (:

Originally posted by: -Pooji-

ok i just started reading ur ff meera
it's awesum
i loved it
toooooo gooooood
add me to pm list too

Thanks Poonam! 😃 Definitely will add you! 😳

@Jamune: yup! 😃 Thanks for reading!

Originally posted by: noneeM

Me! That was such a wonderful update! Of course, I think I'll need to keep my PTG handy...😆 but Me! I loved this one! But you know what! I think Shabzie and Preet are very very cute together....Yikessss! Please kill me (I did not just say that!!!!! Too much time at the books does that to one...Makes one feel like one is living in an Alternate Universe😆 N! 😃 *hugs* Thanks for liking the chapter! 😳 I think that too, I shud just change around the story a bit!😆 I can't kill you! 😛 The alternate universe is so much more of a happy place! 😃

Giddha competition! Yay! *dances* (Thanks Me!) You're welcome!😉

I love the fact (and the reasons why) Shabzie doesn't like Harman! Way to go! Am sure Harman pretty much just goes downhill from here on...anyway😆 I'm glad you liked it! 😛 Umm...maybe?😆

As for Sanjana...hmmm, I'm sure Shabzie and Maddy will do the needfull. I have the faith...(in S&Ma and in you!😆) idea: next time she goes to get her hair done, let Mr. bean loose as a friseur....and hope that he accidentally, on purpose, cuts her head off while giving her a trim...Or! as it is Sanjana, just cuts all her hair off....She'll promptly jump off the next building willingly, I detect narcissitic tendencies in her, anyway😆 Ooops, sorry Me! just getting carried away...Just hit me on the head!!!!!) Teehee! 😃 I like that idea! 😳 I would not hit you on the head N! 😛 😆

Sorry! Getting back...😆 Yes! Preeeeet *daydreams* Awww, I'm sho happy *imagines hugging this Preet* And I loved the part where he straightens up, flashes a smile, runs a hand through his hair..*faints* That was so Preetish....Cho cute....I'm glad you loved him, not that it's such a great surprise!😉😆😆

I like the way Maddy says "By God!" So cute! And I hope it's discovered that Sanjana was using a love potion or something (like romilda Vane on Ron:book 6/HP) and so Manav is under a spell.....Cause, there's no other way Manav should look at anyone else but Maddy, right!!!!! 😊 She told me she says it in daily life just like me so I thought I should have it in there! 😳 You might be lucky about Manav and Maddy! 😛

I liked the way you've written S telling meher that's harman's checked in the earlier day. That sadness!!!! True friends!!!! Cool Me! I loved it. Thanks 😃

Big hug:)
Love:-Nonee

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

I love Shabzie in this fic. She stole the register! *dances* And Preet helped. Heh. Okay, got an idea here, if Mayank were to come in, and you wanted Manav and Maddy to end up together in the end, I wouldn't mind Mayank and Shabzie. (See Shabzie, I can let you have him.) I'm glad you like her and I love your idea...as for what happens? My lips are sealed at the moment! 😳

And I want to be the one to seriously injure both Maya and Sanjana. Cameo me? Please? And I want to knock Harman down a peg or two (or ten). Cameo you....hmmm!😉😆 It'll come near the end, but I've got a place for you to have some fun with Sanjana!😉😃😳

Love,
Radz

Originally posted by: shikha87

FANTASTIC update thats all i can say and would as its the best fic out thier WOW o.k enough of my compliments lol ( i know you want more but i will b 2 teired 2 type up) so please keep it up n thanx 4 ur p.m

Thanks a lot shikha! 😳 These compliments are defintiely enough to keep my grinning! 😳

Part 3

I was upset; to say the least. The minute my mom let me leave Kwality, I went straight home and called Harman's cell phone three times but there was no answer. Then I called his hotel cabin, (that I heard he rented through Shabo) three times, still not answer. I sent two texts after that but I still didn't get anything. The silence was becoming too loud.

I had trouble believing that Harman could do something like this. He wasn't Manav Khanna who lost interest in Maddy overnight. Shut up, I told myself. I had no right to think of it that way. I had no idea what was going through Manav's head. I should just stay focused on my own problems.

Another problem tonight was the mela that was taking place near the hotel. I was going to go with my friends like we went every year. Before I could even make up another excuse of trying to get out of it I saw Shabo and Maddy walk towards the house.

My mom saw me watching them and handed me some money and kissed me forehead. "Go have fun,"

I couldn't even argue with her. Even though I had told her EVERY little detail over dinner about Harman and this new 'Maya' he had brought along—she failed to see the gravity of the issue and assured me to take life as it comes.

"Come on," Shabo linked her arm through mine. "The best thing to do is pretend like there's nothing wrong."

"Nothing is wrong," I said as she tugged me out of the house. "He probably just hasn't had a chance to call me yet."

"That's what I think," Maddy chimed in. "Come on, let's walk." All of us neglected to mention 'Maya,' but I like to live in delusion usually.

I quickly grabbed a pop from the nearest stall which happened to be my dad's and we walked along the road.

"Keep drinking that and you'll be unable to enter the costume contest,"

The three of us stopped dead in our tracks. Shabo was the first to turn around and Maddy followed close on her heels. They stepped up to my side and together we faced Sanjana.

Sanjana had her two henchmen with her, Anita Menon and Sayli Bano. Sanjana was a monster of a girl. Taller than all the girls, with a loud voice and long hair. She kept Anita and Sayli on a tight leash. If either one of them liked something, Sanjana always either liked it more or first. And she treated Manav like a lap dog, always hurling orders at him, especially if Maddy was close enough to hear them.

"Shut up, Sanjana," Shabo snarled at her.

"Shabo, you need to seriously do something about your hair. Straight is out. Curls are in," as if emphasizing her point she kept tossing her curls around.

"What do you want?" I asked her.

"Nothing—just wanted to give you some much needed advice."

"Right," I just rolled my eyes and looked away.

"Well at least I'll have a date for the dance. You'll be disqualified, and your" she pointed at Maddy. "'dress will have to be laughed at another time," With that she flipped her hair yet again and walked away.

"She's not even making sense anymore," Shabo said.

Maddy was sadly quiet.

"Come on Madz," I took her arm again. "She's just mean because she hates it here in such a small town."

"Yeah," Shabo joined in.

"So now we can focus on other things please?" Maddy said fluttering her hands.

"Shabo, why would Sanjana say that?" I asked.

"Say what?"

"Why would she say that thing about me being disqualified for being single?"

Shabo and Maddy both looked at me and said nothing. Shabo lifted her shoulders and pushed me forward. "She's just mean that's all."

I walked along, slipping back into that depressed state I was in before. I reached for my cell and saw that there were still no messages.

So I paged through the messages I had sent him. As I looked at them, checking to see how desperate they sounded, I began to sift though yesterday's and then before that and then I went back a week. I hadn't sent more than I usually did, and nothing I wrote could seem to be naggy of needy, which was always what I was afraid of.

"Hey, you still with us?" Shabo asked, knocking on my head to be funny.

"Yeah, yeah. I'm here."

Maddy took my pop and finished it off.

"This is so silly. If he wanted to break up he would have told me, right?" I turned to Shabo for confirmation. The answer to this seemed kinda dire, and she was my go to girl for that sorta thing.

"I don't see why not. Or he would just not come this year," she muttered.

"Thanks a lot."

"What? I'm just being a realist."

"No, here's here." Maddy said with a squeak stopping dead in her tracks. Shabo and I looked at her in confusion.

"Huh?" Shabo asked.

Maddy didn't respond. She just raised her arm and pointed into the forest, thickened with trees.

Standing not twenty feet from us was a couple hugging and laughing and kissing. It was Harman, hugging a girl as gorgeous and tall as Sanjana.

Harman's here! (Not that anyone cares...I know! 😛) But anyways..it'll get more fun soon!😃

Love you all,

Meera😳

You can virtually hit them all, and shush about your idea! 😛 I'm already thinking about it...in a diff way! 😳

Works for me...but it'll be kinda near the end! 😳

Hey Meera
Awesum update
thankz for pm

I really hate Sanjana. Insulting my hair? Now its personal. 😈

I feel SO bad for Maddy in this part, I agree with Radzie di, I want to take a frying pan and knock some sense into Manav. And HARMAN?!?!?! What a spineless, deceiving, disgusting man. *sorry Meher*

But I have to say, Meher is so helpless right? Here she has two friends willing to go beat the crap out of Harman but she can't let them because she loves him. Or so she thinks. ENTER PREET!

--shabz