FF:You and Me are Inseperable [Part 6 Pg. 17] 8/3 - Page 2

Originally posted by: sweetness4eva

Nice one Garima!!! I liked it, but i still cant believe prem kicked heer out again!! But overall, good one!!! Keep writing!

Mahrukh

Originally posted by: quanfused

Hi Garima, wow I'm speechless this is a wonderful piece of writing 👍🏼 and your very talented Masuallah 👏

Originally posted by: cola_gul

Heyy Tht was greeatt...honestly..i could tell tht u put aloottt of effort into tht ..great job.

Originally posted by: -Pooji-

hey garima
that was awesum
i really liked it
loved how premeer met

Originally posted by: punjabi0926

This was really good. You should continue.

Originally posted by: happybrar

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Originally posted by: shabo24

Woah. Dude, I love it when you write. Thanks man! It's my pleasure to write for you guys!
That was so good!!! And then on top of everything a DAUGHTER?!?!?! LOL, I can imagine all the ideas swimming in your head after exams. :) Aww! Thank you so much! 🤗 Yes a daughter!! heyy, I didn't have any ideas swimming in my mind after exams! *puts hands on hips*....or maybe I did 🤔...how'd you kno?😲 🤣
Can't wait to read more and BTW; I think you should have given them a son and named him Harsh? No? I mean...spin off Harshad of course....😉Oye! apna muh band rakh! 😆 Well...i wanted it to be a girl! 😛And I know exactly why u suggested the name HARSH! of couse...its based of Harshad tho 😳 lmao! ahaha good times good times...I luv you shaboo!!!! 🤗 Thanks for the comment! 😳

--shabz

Originally posted by: Soaps1

Beautifully written story ... something like this is what they would probably show now ... but sadly it won't have Premeer are won concept ... if they had done it in anyother serial i would have been ok but kis desh??? sighs why do they have to break their oneness

But you wrote really well!!!

Originally posted by: Intellienough

wonderful..

Originally posted by: amu142

hey..this cant b a one shot...u hv to write more parts...make it a short story...too good....Prem is still the old Prem , who hasnt stopped loving his Heer....pls continue soon

Originally posted by: ~Rinki~

GARIII! By gosh, i loved it. 😃Thank you so much Rinks! 😳
Firstly, thank god for prem having a brain and regretting his stupid decision 😆Lmao! u got that right! I gave some brains to Prem, and he did regret his decision! haha😆
And yes! Preet..☺️ *coughs* LOL! I added Preet just for you! 😉😆 Aren't I so generous!😆
anyway...yayy Premeer meet! Ooh-lala, Heer's changed has she? Well i love her change...all westernized yet still wit the traditional beliefs. Yupp! they meet and Heer has definitely changed, but just to get over with her past. 😃
Aww, the little girl is so cute! Payal, how cute. Her and Prem's interaction was adorable..I know! Isn't she so cute! I've always wanted Prem and Heer to have a daughter, and so in my story they did!😆
Garii! U shud totally make this into a FF instead of a one shot. 😎Awww! thanks yeah, a lot of ppl have suggested that, so I've decided to make in into an FF! Thanks for the encouragement Rinks!😳😃
I looooovvvee it! Thankooo!! *Blushes*
Write more...asap! 😆I definitely will! thanks so much for the comment Rinki! Luv yaaa!🤗
-Rinki

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

omg omg omg! 😃OMG! MEERU!!! 😆

I loved it....and now I'm waiting for you to continue it 😳 I swear Gari if this is not continued....you'll face my wrath! *tries to look evil* Thank you sooooo much Meeru! It means a lot to me! Oye! Are u trying to blackmail me?😆😆 Well, you've got ur wish come true cuz I'm continuing it! 😃Luv yaaa! 🤗

Originally posted by: eternal.beauty

hey garima..................very beautiful n my god heer in totally western avtar

gr88 work

Originally posted by: d@niy@

hey garima... very well written story.....😃