FF:You and Me are Inseperable [Part 6 Pg. 17] 8/3 - Page 4

Originally posted by: nityatarlapally

that was aweeesome garima!!

heer..in western??..sounds so not like her ..but hey..5 years can really change a person right?!

payal?!..that is such a cuuute name!!

aweeesome story!!

Originally posted by: -Pooji-

hey
wow awesum part 2
i am loving it

Originally posted by: shabo24

You continued it! *claps* Good, I loved this first shot, and WOAH HEER IS ON FIRE! 😆Yes I did!! And why wouldn't I? Aakhir mere readers ka sawaal tha! 😉 LOL! yes, Heer is DEFINITELY on fire, and in the future you'll get see her raging in fire!...okay well not maybe raging but u get the point!😆

That ending was FAB! :) Such a good cliffhanger, and Payal is such a cutie! *pinches her cheeks* Continue soon! Thank you soo much Shabz! ur so sweet! Will continue soon! 😳

--shabz

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

mine! 😛Hehehe!😆

*edited*

I'm blackmailing again...you make it sad and I will not like you! 😛😳 But for this part...I loved the way you described everything Heer was going through--sounds so tough! 😔 *Shocked muh* Meera! How could you?! Blackmailing...AGAIN?!!😲 LOL! *Shakes head* tsk tsk tsk....very bad Meeru, very bad..😆😆 Its okay...it wont be sad, it'll get better! 😉 Aww! Thanks...yeah poor Heer had some tough times, but now Prem is gonna try his very best to make it up to her! 😃

But Payal honestly is adorable! 😛 And I can't wait for this Premeer interaction! 😃I know!! Payal is a cutiee pie! Their interaction is gonna be something! 😉 Thanks for the comment Meeru! Luv ya!😳

Originally posted by: nityatarlapally

awww....cinderella's castle??!!...shoo cuute!!

i can just imagine how payal looks!

so heer wants to go back but she can't trust him yet?!..it's ok..prem is stubborn..he'll get her back!..but she shouldn't give in yet!...mess with him for a while!

aweeeesome..chapter 2 was amaaaing!

update soon!

~luv nitya

Originally posted by: happybrar

nice part

Originally posted by: premheer605

wow u r a nyc writer keep it up nd pliz pm me if u update this thnks :)

Originally posted by: d@niy@

very nice updates....😃

Originally posted by: resham12345

update quickly pleasssssssseeeeeeeeeeee

Originally posted by: eternal.beauty

hey garima Hey Aqsa!😃

i thought tht ths ws 1 shot nt a new ff😆😆LOL! yeah...it was supposed to be a one shot, but my friends encouraged me to make it into an FF! 😆
..............beautiful part, very well excecuted frm current situation, prem is very much well deserved of this cold behaviour but really very sweet of heer to let prem hold his daughter, hold her in his arms close to his heart n feeling few moments of luv n affection inspite of all this n heer has chngd so much Aww! Thank you, yeah Prem did kind of deserve it...but he will try his best to gain his trust back with Heer, yeah she had to let him hold his daughter, it was nice of her. 😳
i guess she need to to teach prem a lesson n if this thng happn similarly thn i would really want heer to be just lyk ths n ths tym nt lettng prem to go off easily n forgive him so easily as she always..............hope to see ur next update soon Yeah, Heer is definitely teaching Prem a lesson, and hopefullly she will be successful in it. My update will be soon! Thanks again for commenting! It means alot to me! 😃

aqsa

Originally posted by: amu142

wowy...continue soon pls....