My First Piece of Writing on PREMEER Part51 Pg149 - Page 2

Originally posted by: Crazy_94

Yeh lag hi nhi raha k u wrote irt 1st time,i mean its fantastic n dis story shud cum in kis desh.wonderfull writing! gud going sweetheart.

your stroy is amazing

Originally posted by: uzmaaltaf1

excellent story.. waiting for next part

Originally posted by: aaminaman

hey your story was really nice i think that will happen for mondays episode please continue your writing i wish prem will be there with heer

Originally posted by: pakibeauty18

wow that is tragic.....so not looking forward to modays episode....i think what u wrote is going to happen

Originally posted by: nityatarlapally

hey your story is amaazing!

atleast heer found out the truth before leaing the house in your story..i'm pretty sure that's not gonna happen in the show..but still

i'm not gonna loose hope.

Originally posted by: happybrar

your stroy is amazing

update soon

No need 4 thanks u truely deserve da credit 4 such a beautiful story,waiting 4 other prts.update dem soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

PART4

Nihaal is at home, he goes through Veera's things in his n Veera's room. He remembers all his moments wid Veera n cries, while going through all this he finds out a video cassette (written on it for my family from veera) n plays it, that video is of Veera in which Veera says

"hi everybody how are you all? you must be thinking that just lil time ago we met then how come i'm in this video, actually i wanted to confess something to you all. When i first got married to Nihaal i didnt liked him at all n i didnt wanted to live wid him, so i showed the negative side of Nihaal to mumma but that was not true, i always told mumma that Nihaal cares more abt his sisters than me but thats not true for me nihaal broke his sisters's bonds and bought a car for me, he gave me all love, care n luxuries but then i commited a crime. Maa bauji main aap sab ko yahi batana chahti hoon that maine apna abortion khud karwaya. Nihaal just once slapped me when i told him abt abortion, then shouted at me when i told him that i killed his 2months daughter in womb, then i forced him to send me divorce papers. I am really sorry for doing all this, i ruined my life then wid Nihaal i came back to his house. Then Nihaal started ignoring me and finally i realized my love for him. I hav a plan i'll spread lil kerosene n fire then Nihaal will save me. I know i'll cause lil harm to myself but i know its a gud plan to impress him. I know u ppl will b very angry after watching this but I'm sorry."

All this Nihaal saw, cried then Heer came told him that i've left my house all have ended everybody blames you for Veera's death. I'll not live here i just came to meet u. Then Nihaal gives her video n says that whenever you go back give this to Juneja family. Then Heer leaves.

Nihaal n Heer were very depressed n in pain so they didnt went to give video to Juneja house plus due to their mental state they might not believe the video so this proof is saved for future use.

Nihaal gets a call from his secretary Mitali, he sounds low n she decides to meet him tomorrow morning. Nihaal gives one last look to his house, he keeps Veera's photo frame in one corner then spread kerosene in entire house, he says that he is doing his n Veera's shraat, they both could'nt live together but will die in same way. Finally he uses matchstick n fire spreads in house. One last look of Nihaal is that he is standing n getting burned.

In morning Mitali comes there n shocked to see the burnt house, she goes inside n sees something very terrible! Veera's photo frame beside it some khaak(ashes) n in which it was Nihaal's locket. Nihaal ki end mein sirf khaak bachi thi bcos he was completely burnt, no body no bone nothing. Heer gets a call from her, she too shocked to see house burnt then runs inside n doesnt believe her eyes. Mitali then leaves, she goes out n Heer sits near Veera's photo n Nihaal's khaak, she picks up his locket n cries a lot, she shouts, screams bcos the pain was unbearable, tears running down her face, her eyes are closed n her mouth is open n wid terrible screams she cries.

Next scene she puts Nihaal's ashes in clay type pot, takes Nihaal's locket n Veera's photo frame. Then she leaves, Mitali saw all this.

Later in evening Mitali goes to the place where Heer stayed(at frnd's house). Heer tells her that she has dropped Nihaal's ashes in a well known lake n now she is leaving this place forever, Mitali said that in this condition should you travel? Heer says "isi ke liye to ja rahi hoon", she knows that she is pregnant, then she gives cassette to Mitali n says "agar tum kabhi ghar waalon se milo to yeh cassette de dena yeh Nihaal ki aakhri khwaish thi. Mitali asks "can i do sumthing for u?"

Heer: haan, Nihaal ki maut ke baare mein kisi ko khabar na lage, na press, na media, na newspapers aur na Juneja family. One more thing seal n cover Nihaal's house so that ppl doesnt come to know that it is burnt. Yeh zakhm mera hai aur main nahin chahti ke hamare siwa koi aur is zakhm ke kareeb aaye.

Heer tells Mitali that in lil time she will be leaving for Panchgani

n she might never come back. She says bye to her n moves towards airport while walking she says:

"ab is ant se ek nai shuruwaat hogi, ek nai kahani likhi jaaegi aur is kahaani mein main akeli nahin hongi mere saath koi aur bhi hoga" She places hand on her tummy n smiles, Prem is shown standing alone at window n kdmhmd background music comes not full song just 'Kis des mein hai mera dil' smooth simple music.

Precap: Story now is after 5 years, in Part5 first i'll tell you abt what happened wid Prem n Heer in 5 years time. I'll tell you abt Prem n Heer's lives individually. Just make a guess Premeer ke pyar ki nishani kya hogi cute baby boy 😛😛😛 or cute baby girl😛😛😛? n what name do you suggest? i have one name in mind its well known n cute 😉😉😉!!!

hey it was a really nice please update it as soon as possible i think the same happens in the story also and ha i think if it is a boy then i think you can give the name Rohan and if it is a girl then Anushka it's just my suggestion if you like it or you can put your own but i should say the story was superb no matter what name you give and please update it as soon as possible i am eagerly waiting for it to see prem's and heer's life for the past 5yrs oh god can't imagine and wat about meher and preet?