My First Piece of Writing on PREMEER Part51 Pg149 - Page 4

Originally posted by: aaminaman

hey it was a really nice please update it as soon as possible i think the same happens in the story also and ha i think if it is a boy then i think you can give the name Rohan and if it is a girl then Anushka it's just my suggestion if you like it or you can put your own but i should say the story was superb no matter what name you give and please update it as soon as possible i am eagerly waiting for it to see prem's and heer's life for the past 5yrs oh god can't imagine and wat about meher and preet?

Originally posted by: Orville_sam

Hey that was great...
i think the baby should be a cute 5 years girl called Prema...as the name is close to prem and got similar meaning ....love.....
Waiting for the next update


Sarah

Originally posted by: kyph05

awhh hunn amazing workk.... its realli realli goodd =)
continuee soon =)

Ur story has becum too interesting..its Fabulous n loved heer aditti scenes.heer's dialouges were really very nice.

Aditti is very cute and ur story getting more n more attractive.waiting 4 other prts.plz update soon

PART7

Heer along wid Additi n Mitali goes for shopping, Heer buys some dresses for Additi n some other useful things for her baby n also does some shooping for Additi's room. Currently Heer, Additi n Mitali are living at some other house temporarily bcos in Heer's house construction work is going on. Heer bought an area of land n she's getting the workers to do construction. Heer have ordered for 5rooms upstairs out of which 3 tends to be very special n 4rooms downstairs out of which 2 are important, apart from 4rooms downstairs there will be a kitchen, drawing room, dining room n a mandir.

The description of heer's house will be given later, now some cute maa-beti scenes!

Additi was 1 n a half months old when she was constantly crying n Heer was trying to make her sleep, Additi crying in Heer's arms n Heer was walking in whole house so that her daughter goes to sleep then she shows her Prem's pic n talks wid her abt Prem.

Heer: Dekho beta yeh aapke papa hain, aap se bohot pyar karte hain lekin abhi aapke saath nahin hain par aapko bohot miss karte honge aap bhi unhein miss kar rahi ho but plz ab so jaao, mama bohot thak gai hai!

Additi gets quiet

Heer: chalo ab mama aur mama ki pyari sleeping beauty saath soyenge

Additi's cot is beside heer's bed

Heer puts Additi in her cot wid her tiny cute bears at side of cot n she sits wid legs stretched on bed, she looks at moon n says: tumhari beti ki tarhaan uski mama bhi tumhein bohot yaad kar rahi hai Prem.

At same time Prem was sitting on bed in same manner like Heer, looks at moon n says: miss you heer!

Heer takes gr8 care of Additi she feeds her n makes her sleep on time, n plays wid her, she spends enjoyable quality time wid her cute little angel n Mitali helps Heer while she gives bath to Additi.

One day Heer comes from office early n she gets Additi ready

Heer: aaj main aur meri pyari additi bahar jaayenge, hum mall mein ghoomenge, shopping karenge, khelenge.

The three of them: Additi, Heer n Mitali go to a shopping mall where they do shopping, Heer makes Additi eat cerelac, Additi sits on some musical swings but Heer makes sure that she doesnt fall. They get their pics taken for preserving these beautiful moments. Heer gets Additi's pics developed not only ones taken there but she brought digital camera from home which had many pics of Additi. Heer then gives the man a pic which was covered n tells him to add this picture wid one of her n Additi's pic in which they both are together. Heer wanted two pics to look like one wid some latest technique.

Ek pic to Additi aur Heer ki hai, doosri pic kis ki hai? you'll come to know in description of Heer's house.

Then comes a time where Additi goes to doctor for vaccine n Heer is very much worried, Additi was baby so when doctor provides her injection she cries but Heer at that time closed her eyes she could'nt bear to see her child in pain.

Heer-Additi scene

Heer is doing office work on bed n Additi 6months old is on floor moving here n there n has some tiny toys near her. Suddenly Additi starts crying n heer shouts: Prem!

Prem: aaya!

Heer: prem sambhaalo apni beti ko, mujhe tang kar rahi hai kaam nahin karne de rahi

Prem takes Additi in her lap, gives her loves n says

"Kya huwa my little princess kyun ro rahi ho aap, mama ne aapko daanta? mama bohot buri hain."

Heer smiles n says Prem!

Suddenly Additi makes cute sounds like bah! bah! bah! n touches a musical sound which break Heer's thoughts n she realizes that all this was her imagination.

She gets up, takes Additi in her arms n hugs her.

Then Heer needs to go out for some business tour n she cant take Additi wid her bcos she was too small so Mitali stays wid Additi, promises Heer that she'll take gr8 care of Additi.

At night time Additi misses her mama n cries so Mitali calls Heer n she talks wid Additi. Heer talks wid her, gives her kisses n sings some sweet melodious rthymes that Additi likes a lot. Finally Additi sleeps n Heer gets back to work.

Heer back to her house

She takes Additi n makes her sit in lap hugs her n kisses her.

Mitali: Dekha additi mama time par aagai na aapke birthday se kuck weeks pehle ab humein aapke birthday ki tayari karni hai

Heer: haan meri pyari additi ka 1^st birthday uske nae ghar mein hoga, us ghar ka sara kaam poora hogaya hai aur kuch dinon mein hum apne nae ghar jaayenge.

Heer and Mitali decorate the whole house wid balloons, glittery stars and a banner "Happy Birthday Additi". Heer gets Additi dressed in white princess dress wid a crown on head n her cake is also of a princess in white dress. Additi surely was looking like a cute little princess. Heer made her cut cake, some cute poses of bday girl n her mama n house was flooded wid kids. Heer n Mitali were not alone wid Additi for her bday so the women n kids in their neighbourhood were invited to bless the bday girl. Party went good n it was an enjoyable one.

Then comes time where Heer gets admission of Additi in montessori when Additi was 2+ then after 6months she got her admission in nursery. In school's documents Heer have written her name in father's place n Additi's full name at school is Additi Heer.

Mitali stayed wid Heer n Additi only till Additi was 1year old then she went back to Ludhiana.

Precap: Morning at Juneja house and Heer's house description.

PART8:

Juneja house morning after 5years

Gaya3 does pooja n lightens diya at Veera's frame, then goes to every room. First she goes to Prem's room where he was getting ready for office, she gives him aashirwaad n tilak on forehead. Then she goes into Kulraj's room where Kiran was getting ready for office, then Maya, Harman's room where Harman was getting ready for office n also getting irritated by Maya's bakwaas. Gaya3 then goes into Meet's room where they took her aashirwaad n she gave them blessings n tilak. Then Gaya3 goes into children's room, it was a bunk bed of three floors. On top there were Vikas n Ketan, on 2^nd there was Tanu n on last one Ayush n Avi. Unlike the other 3 Ayush n Avi had blanket on their faces which Gaya3 removed n touched their cheeks.

Then Meher n Kulraj entered n Gaya3 told them "shuru ho jaao apne kaam par"

Gaya3 went to Lalit's room, he was looking at Heer's pic in drawer, then he took prasad from Gaya3 n she said ke come for breakfast then went away.

The mothers woke up their children then both mothers wid their 5 children were in one bathroom. Tanu was dancing n applying toothbrush, Vikas, Ketan were standing, toothbrushing n half asleep. Ayush was sleeping on potty chair n Avi was in meher arms half asleep. Both mothers were shouting at the top of their voices on their sleepy children then fathers came to rescue. Kiran helped Kulraj n Preet took Avi from Meher n in no time kids got ready for school. They all came outside, Vikas n Ketan ran towards table for breakfast n Kulraj went upto them. Tanu went to her nanu who came there just now while Ayush n Avi went to their dadi, touched her feet Gaya3 placed tilak on their forehead gave them prasad n blessings. Meher then wid Gaya3 went to kitchen to help her while Maya went towards table for breakfast wid no intention of helping Gaya3. Gaya3 loved Meher n her kids a lot. She loved Meher bcos Meher never took Heer or Nihaal's name infront of her n took gr8 care of her house n family. Gaya3 loved Meher more than Maya bcos of Maya's attitude n Meher gave Gaya3 two cute well manered grandsons while Maya didnt.

Then Prem came n took Lalit's aashirwaad n headed for office while rest of ppl happily had beakfast, Lalit was sad but he had meals wid his family bcos of his grandchildren. In these 5years Prem never had meals wid his family on dining table. He either had in his room or in office.

(I hope you like it, now lets have a look of Heer's house)

Heer's house "Additi's mansion"

The outside view of Heer's house is beautiful its a huge one n also has a garden wid beautiful different coloured flowers. The entrance door is of coloured glass. Now lets go upstairs. There are 5bedrooms.

First of all it is Additi n Heer's bedroom it had a bed n above bed it is Additi n Heer's huge frame: Additi n Heer on Additi's 1^st bday in which both are smiling n looking as beautiful as ever, then it has some cushions, one sofa, a cupboard wid Heer's clothes, a dressing table where both maa beti get dressed n at times only Heer, n there's a window through which Additi n Heer look at moon n miss Prem. It is a beautiful room where maa beti sleep, enjoy quality time, Heer tells Additi stories n Additi falls into sleep n has sweetdreams.

The next room is playroom. It has loads of Additi's pics from the day she was born till 5years, it has all kinds of toys wid which Additi plays. There are some swings, slides, barbie dolls, doll houses, bears n also a cupboard which has Additi's dresses n a cute small dressing table of Additi. The room is of pink but it has some bright colours as well bcos both mother daughter love colours. Additi has a separate cupboard n dressing table bcos both mother daughter take long time in getting ready so in that way both will not be waiting for each other.

Next is Heer's study room bcos Heer is not allowed to do work in bedroom n playroom so she does all her office work in study room this is Additi madam's rule n Heer strictly follows it. It has a table where Heer uses her laptop, a huge shelf wid all necessary files n documents. It even has a table n inside it's drawers there are Heer's confidential papers, files n on table there are Heer n Additi's priceless moments. There are frames of all sizes wid Heer n Additi's pics, when Heer took Additi in her arms for 1^st time, when Additi was 1 month old, when Additi got vaccine for first time, Additi's 1^st bday n also rest of bdays. Additi's 1^st day of school n many more cute poses of sweet cute lil Additi!

The other two rooms upstairs are guest rooms. Now lets go downstairs.

One room has Balraaj, Teji's pic on wall wid garland on it. On other wall it is Nihaal n Veera's separate pictures wid garland on it. Heer have not forgotten the dead ones so in their memory she had one small room for this purpose.

Next room has pictures of whole Juneja family. Each member's pic separately n even pictures in groups are in that room. Some on wall while some on desks in form of frames. Juneja family is an important part of Heer's life so she had their memories in form of pictures.

The other two rooms are guest rooms. The kitchen, drawing dining are just like of any other house. The house has a mandir where Heer does pooja.

The description of Heer's house is done, now morning in Additi's mansion n continuation of Juneja house will be in next update, it will also reveal about that picture that Heer ordered in mall.In next update you'll come to know about that two into one picture mystery.Enjoy!!!