My First Piece of Writing on PREMEER Part51 Pg149 - Page 3

Hey that was great...
i think the baby should be a cute 5 years girl called Prema...as the name is close to prem and got similar meaning ....love.....
Waiting for the next update


Sarah

PART5

Prem's life in 5Years

Wen Heer left Prem he became very weak emotionally, Heer was his strength, pyar, guroor and he lost all. Heer ke jaane se Prem ki zindagi se pyar, khushi, bharosa, sab chala gaya. He never went for an outing. Prem ki zindagi mein koi dost nahin raha, he never shared his secrets feelings wid anyone. He just lived his life wid one purpose to give happiness, peace n comfort to his parents. He had Heer's memories n he took gr8 care of them. He went to office regularly but didnt went on special days like Heer's bday, the day of their 1^st meeting, n their wedding anniversary. On those days he spent whole day in his room going through Heer's memories n remembering their romantic precious moments or in his office bcos office was the place where they had many beautiful moments. Prem stayed quiet most of the time n only took care of his parents. He never thought for himself bcos Heer was his everything. Ek din, ek pal bhi aisa nahin jab Prem ne Heer ko yaad na kiya ho. Prem was lonely, he hardly smiled, he was not an ambitious n determined businessman anymore, he didnt cared abt anything except Heer's memories. He didnt had that power, energy, liveliness in himself due to Veera's death n Heer's departure. Heer apne saath Prem ki saari khushiyaan legai, he had sorrow in his life.

(i know its sad but its true Heer ke bina Prem adhoora tha)

Juneja Family members

Lalit & Gaya3: Lalit's relationship was strained wid Gaya3, they talked only if there was any work n if needed or else there was silence among them. Lalit retired n spent his time at home, he too missed Heer a lot n the reason for his awkward behaviour wid Gaya3 was that Gaya3 unnecessarily blamed Nihaal for Veera's death n he didnt liked that Prem fought wid Heer n Heer left house. Ghar ki bahu jo Lalit ke liye beti thi woh ghar mein nahin so he didnt liked it n felt bad. He used to think ke Heer aur Nihaal kahan honge but had no idea n just prayed ke woh theek hon. He didnt had any hope ke Heer kabhi ghar wapas aayegi.

Kulraj, Kiran lived at Juneja house wid their kids, after 5years Vikas, Ketan were 10 years old n Tanu was 8years old. They were busy in thir life n cared for family n were pretty happy.

Harman, Maya didnt had any child bcos Maya cared more abt her figure. At times they fought, at times they loved.

The only interesting thing in Juneja family was Meet wid their cute lil 4 year old boys. Meher when Heer left juneja house, decided that her parents have died n her sis have left so from now on she'll never say anything abt Nihaal to anybody. She had all the love n support of Preet n at times wid Preet she discussed abt Heer n Prem but not wid anyone else bcos Gaya3 n Prem might not like it. Her cute lil sons were naughty wid Maya, paid respect to Lalit n Gaya3 n loved the rest of members. The brothers Ayush n Avi had gr8 understanding n bond of love amongst them just like Prem n Preet.

Kulraj n Meher both did all household work, took care of their husband n kids n stayed busy. Both were given equal love by Gaya3. Meher had value n Gaya3's love n blessings bcos she never took Nihaal n Heer's name infront of Gaya3, she was obedient bahu. Gaya3 noticed difference between Maya n Meher so she loved Meher more n also bcos Meher gave her two cute grandsons.

In Juneja house there was love, sorrow, all emotions but phir bhi ek adhoorapan tha. Gaya3 missed Veera a lot so she wished for a grand daughter. Everybody in their hearts missed Heer n wanted her to come back but never expressed it to each other.

Heer's life in 5Years

Heer went to a place called Panchgani, she lived there since 5years. Once Heer saw add in newspaper abt a hotel which was in bad state n at the verge of destruction. Heer decided to join it so she met concerned authorities, convinced them that hotel wil be back wid a bang n she was appointed as a general manager. Heer worked hard day n night. She was 6months pregnant n due to stress n work load she got unwell. She was in hospital for few days then Miltali came to Panchgani to take care of her. Mitali didnt let Heer to work for many hours till 3months.

Then finally one day an angel knocked at Heer's door n brought tons of happiness in her life. Heer was blessed wid a cute baby girl. Her features: face eyes, all were like Heer n she was named Additi.

When Heer for first time saw Additi n took her into her arms she kissed her on forehead twice once on her behalf n second time on Prem's behalf. Heer said:

"Oh mere nanhe farishte tum meri zindagi mein khushiyaan laai ho, tum mere aur Prem ke anmol pyar ki nishani ho, tum mere liye Prem ka diya huwa tohfa ho jise main hamesha sambhaal kar rakhoongi, Tum meri zindagi mein Prem ki kami ko poora karogi aur aaj se tum hi meri zindagi ho."

Then she hugs her n brings her close to her heart". Additi listens to Heer's heartbeat n at that moment Prem feels Heer's heartbeat, he gets up, goes to window n says:

"kahan ho tum Heer? aaj aisa kyun laga jaise mere aur tumhare dil ke taar kisi ne jor diye, aisa kyun laga jaise tumhein aur mujhe ek karne wala woh rishta duniya mein aagaya. Kyun maine tumhari dhadkan ko mehsoos kiya, kyun mujhe yeh ehsaas huwa jaise mera ansh is duniya mein hai aur tumhare bohot kareeb hai kyun???"

Precap:Some more analysis on maa-beti ka rishta, Part6 will revolve around Premeer and their cute lil Additi.

awhh hunn amazing workk.... its realli realli goodd =)
continuee soon =)

PART6

Heer then moves Additi from her aanchal n places her on lap, Additi was born at night time n like a normal baby she cried but when doctor gave her in Heer's arms she was sleeping, now she cries, opens her eyes n Heer shows her Prem's picture. For first time after opening eyes Additi saw her papa Prem. At this moment Heer had tears in her eyes bcos she missed Prem.

Prem since he felt his ansh's arrival in this world so he remembered past scene of his wid Heer.

Past scene (Prem remembers)

Premeer in bed thinking abt their child n both in romantic mood especially naughty prem!

Heer: Kya?

Prem: Yahi ke hamara bacha jab is duniya mein aayega to sab se pehle mujhe dekhega

Heer smiles

Prem: Has kyun rahi ho?

Heer: Prem duniya ke saare bache sab se pehle doctor ko dekhte hain

Prem: Haan to doctor ke baad mujhe dekhega.Tumse bhi pehle dekh lena, aur phir main hamara bacha tumhein godh mein doonga aur tumse pyar karoonga.

Heer: Bacha meri godh mein hoga phir bhi tum mujhse pyar karoge?

Prem: Haan kyunke us bache ke bhai beheno ka intezaam bhi hamein karna hai

Heer: Prem!

Then they hug n go to sleep

After coming back from thoughts Prem says: Woh waqt, woh lamhe najane kahan kho gae.

The next day doctor comes to check Heer n baby n says that both are fine n can go home today, doctor asks Heer to fill some formalities like baby's birth certificate. In space for father's name Heer writes her own name. She tells doctor that the baby's complete name is Additi Heer.

Heer in her room, Additi in her lap she's trying to put her off to sleep, she puts her in cot n puts cute pink blanket on her.Then she goes near window.

Heer remembers her cute past scene wid Prem

Heer sitting on window n Prem comes n hugs her from back

Prem: meri jaan kya soch rahi hai?

Heer: aaj mall mein ek aurat sab chehel pehel bhool kar apne bache ko aanchal mein sula rahi thi.

She looks at Prem n continues

Heer: sach mein chaahe duniya bhar ka pyar mil jaae par aulad ka pyar insaan ko ek nai zindagi deta hai.

Prem: Haan heer pati patni ka rishta poora tab hota hai jab woh do se teen hote hain.

Heer: ab tak maine zindagi ka har rishta jiya hai aur ab main maa banne ki khushi mehsoos karna chahti hoon

Prem: to kab suna rahi ho khushkhabri? ke meri little heer aarahi hai

Heer: Prem! tum bhi na!

Heer feels shy n hugs Prem n says: aur by the way beti nahin beta hoga tumhare jaisa

Prem: nahin dekh lena beti hi hogi aur woh hamari jaan hogi. Palkon pe paaloonga, zamane bhar ka pyar doonga main use

Heer: haan prem, hum dukh ki parchaai uske kareeb nahin aane denge. Aakhir apni maa ki parchaai aur papa ki laadli hogi woh

Prem: lekin uske liye tumhein pehle uske papa ke kareeb aana hoga

Heer: kya tum bhi!

Prem: main bhi kya! pehle uske papa ko hug karo phir use kar lena.

Next morning Additi cries in cot n Heer comforts her, then Mitali comes n asks Heer: tumhari cute baby so gai? poori raat tang kiya tumhein?

Heer: nahin aaraam se so rahi thi, she lovingly says mera bacha!

Mitali: Heer tumne Additi naam hi kyun rakha?

Heer thinks then says: kyunki yeh naam hum dono ko pasand tha.

Mitali places hand on Heer's shoulder then leaves.

Heer in thoughts: (Premeer past scene)

Heer is drying her hair when Prem comes n stops her from going away by holding her hand.

Prem: aaj tum bohot khoobsurat lag rahi ho

Heer: Mujhe pata hai, ab mujhe choro, bohot kaam hai

Prem: mujhe tumse zaroori baat karni hai is liye 2min!

He makes her sit on bed

Heer : ab batao kya baat hai?

Prem: main soch raha tha ke humein kahin ghoomne jana chahiye

Heer: uski kya zaroorat hai prem?

Prem: zaroorat hai, agar hum is ghar se door saath waqt nahin guzarenge to maa ka sapna kaise poora karenge?

Heer: kaun sa sapna? she asks though she knew it very well

Prem: unhein dadi banne ka aur mujhe intezar hai apni beti ka

Heer: lekin mujhe beta chahiye tumhare jaisa

Prem: hamari beti hogi tumhare jaisi aur uska naam hum......

Together they say: Additi!

Prem: bohot acha naam hai hum dono ki pasand hai

Heer: main use additi hi bulaaongi kyunke yeh naam tumhare dil ke kareeb hai

Prem: aur main use my little princess bulaaonga, woh subha ki pehli kiran ki tarhaan hamari zindagi ko roshni aur khushiyon se bhar degi.

Heer: hamari beti bohot khush naseeb hogi kyunke use tumhare jaisa itna pyar karne wala papa milega. They both smile!

After coming back from thoughts Heer goes near Additi, touches her cheeks n kisses her on forehead!

Precap: Little bit more to know abt Heer's 5 years then a description abt the first morning of Juneja house and Heer's house after 5 years leap.

awesomeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggggg for next asap.

Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesomeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggggg for next asap.

Originally posted by: Crazy_94

No need 4 thanks u truely deserve da credit 4 such a beautiful story,waiting 4 other prts.update dem soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Originally posted by: happybrar

great part

Originally posted by: prempadmasujal

baby girl (Aakanksha)