|| Doosri Mulaqat || A Surprise One Shot! - Page 2

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

OMG, she's going to go crazy. (And my cousins' think I'm mad 'cos I was laughing my head off while reading this.) You think so?? Hope so....😳

Will be back soon. Can't wait! 😛

*edited*

First off, what a sweet premise! The two are best friends, for so long, but are separated, because life is like that sometimes. And when you are young, it is your parents that make decisions for you. But still, their friendship survived, and flourished during the separation, and they both realised, they were in love. How sweet. Really? You liked?😳

And the way they met. That was such an awesome reunion. I mean, Preet sweeping Bhav into his arms and hugging her like there is no tomorrow. *sigh* And him letting it slip, how he feels. So much like Preet. So, so, SO cute. I'm glad you liked it....I really hoped it sounded Preetish enough 😳

I hope you write more surprise shots. They are so well written! I beg to differ!😆😆

Love,
Radz

Originally posted by: munam_13

atleast try not to write shots like this, coz they make me break my promise and make me comment...😛... " I hate you Meera for this" , *o god my nose has grown*😆 ... this was an awesome shot , so romantic😳 *yep my nose came back to its size back, now I believe why my mum says dont lie😆*... Bhav's so lucky😳... Preet's so awesome and romantic... did I ever tell you I like stories where best friends turn into lovers???😉... I seriously love them... Just loved Preet's emotion while she was leaving and his gesture , when she came back, it was not at all forced but very natural, something he longed for...awesome work... But "I HATE YOU" *shucks!!! my nose has grown again*

Originally posted by: ash08

Meera, great job. I truly truly love it. It was beautiful.

Ok, I am running out of adjectives to express. It was really great.

You are a great talent. Keep them coming dear.

Love,
Ash

Originally posted by: noneeM

Oh my God! Lucky Lucky Lucky Lucky Lucky ( a thousand billion times over) Bhav..... Teehee, I can tell what you mean Nonee, I would've felt the same way if it was Prem!😆😆😆 But don't worry in my next surprise shot...I'm super jealous!😆

The concept is lovely and you've written it so well, I totally loved this surprise shot (with my PTG's on, I mean....😆 Kidding:) Awww thanks!😆😆

Everything is perfect about this shot, the execution is flawless. Keep writing more Preet please:) I do! 😛 I wrote sooo many Meet shots in between! 😆

The only reason I'm still sane (well, sort of) is that I read it again with my PTG [*and promptly dropped down dead....almost*] 😆 Awww no....dropping dead is not good!😳

Big Hug:) Love:-Nonee *hugs back* Thanks soo much Nonee! 😃

Originally posted by: sourpuss

Ahhh Meera!!!!!!!! 🤣 I'm glad it made you laugh Bhav! 😊

This was just the thing to give me a Coke-like energy boost after work! (Which wasn't too bad today!) Except that I've been on my laptop for like 20 minutes and I still haven't started watching the Supernatural episode like I planned to. -_-" Thanks, Meera. Ahh yay! 😛 Oops? I made you procrastinate? 😳

No, really. Thanks! You don't have to say it so many times! 😛

I have to say though, I laughed at the 'flight whatever to Singapore' part. I seriously just laughed (silently, though, so Grandma wouldn't think I was completely off my rocker!), pretty much because I knew where this was going. 😛 Yup...that was the main clue 😃😛 And aww no probs! 😛

Lemme try to comment on this objectively though. Okay! 😃😳

Radz is right: the premise was just so sweet. Of course Preet would remember her! I mean, he knew the exact number of days! (Side note: Oooh I'm 24 in this story, huh?) And their meeting...just...AWWW! It made me squeal, and the squealing was *kinda* made worse because it was my name there. (Okay it's really hard to comment objectively...!) I can totally imagine them standing there a little awkwardly, with Preet just staring at her and...her...wondering why he wasn't saying anything. Totally adorable. Yup yup...I was going to have it 8 years intially but then I was like na....26 is too much! 😳😛 And awww I'm stil glad that you were squealing though, cus then I feel like it was worth it! 😳

You rock, Meera. 🤗 Now I have a reason to bake a cake: I can ship it over to you! 😳😆 So even if there's no Meet scene today, I can sleep happy. WHEE! Ohhh cake! 😃 Teehee, thanks! 😳 *hugs back* But yay! 😃 There was a Meet scene! 😛

Love,

Bhav (:

Originally posted by: purplestar22

Reserved,,,,😛

That was really good.. I already knew the main character wouldnt be Heer cuz of the surprise..lol.. I was thinking it was going to be Prem but it was Preet!!

I loved it!! It was amazing😊😊

Originally posted by: shabo24

Kuch Kuch Hota Hai!!!!!!! Really? cus of the whole time change and all?

Seriously - thats what this shot reminded me of. Of course - not comparing Preet to SRK and DEFIANTLY not comparing Bhav to Kajol (🤣*ducks*) but this had such a sweet feeling, the same type I get when I watch the movie! Very sweet - and I loved it! Teehee...I'm glad you liked it! 😳

--shabz

Originally posted by: urworstnitemare

aahhh!!!! I'm too slow these dayz!!!!!

I come on the forum and tada there are like 5 surprise one-shots!!!! *panics..I love them all though!!! Awww no problems at all Avi! 😃

Ohh..this one is of Bhav? Lucky, Lucky LUCKY*pouts!!! I LOVE Preet!!! yes LOVE him!!! *sings in a screechy voice.LOVE HIM !!!!! So imagine the overload of jealousy in my system, which should be down attacking the bad guys (aka germs) but nah! THe jealousy is still there! When I read about him hugging *sniff..Bhav!!! *cries Indeed it is....ahh you love Preet THAT much?? 😆 I'm sorry! 😛

But ignoring that, i'd say that I love the way you wrote thislol...the way u described the thought process' was awesome!!! Really? that means a lot...but oooo you didn't laugh at any of it? 😛

Keep it up!! and I absolutely LOVE reading ur stuff..but u already noe that heh? *man I think I sneezed three times while typing this up...gah, its funny! lmao..c ya around Meeru!!! *grumbles..lucky Bhav Thank you again! 😃