Jisse rab jodey vo bandhan kaun todey? LPHone shot - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
#11
WOW!this is gr8😃
awesom work👍🏼
i hope sumethin like this happens on monday😍
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanx a lottttttttttttttttttttttttt to all of u...................for reading and replying...................Hope u enjoy the next part too.................and send in ur valuable comments..................Thanx....................😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Prem then tells how gaytri had asked him to make the choice…………..listening to which…………Heer was stunned………….

Before she could say anything else…………..she felt dizzy all o a sudden…………and fell unconscious…………right into Prem's arms……………..who looked at her shell shocked shouting out--- HEER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Prem picks up Heer in his arms…………….rushes down the staircase and putting Heer in the car…………….he drives quickly to the City hospital…………………

There after a while………………u see Prem moving from one end to the other of the corridor……………when he sees the lady doc walk towards him……………..

Prem asks—Kya hua docsaab?................Heer………….Heer kaisi hai?.................vo theek toh hai naa…………..

The doc smiles and replies--- Don't worry Mr. Juneja…………..she is fine………….bas thodii sii thakaawat hai…………..she will be fine soon…………….waise………………congratulations Mr. Prem……………ur wife is pregnant………………

Prem just stares at the doc…………….not knowing how to react……………he smiles…………..within he felt elated………….bas abb toh the only thing he wished was to go and meet Heer………………asking the doc…………..he makes way to where Heer was admitted……………

He goes in…………..looking at Heer lovingly and gratefully for giving him this chance to enjy the bliss of being a father……………..

He walks upto her…………..putting a hand on her forehead he says softly--- Heer?!..................

Heer looked pale……………and tired……………as she opened her eyes and looks at Prem and manages a smile……………….as she says weakly--- Prem………..Tumne achcha kiya kii tumne maa ko chunna…………..mujhe maaf kar do jo main binaa baat tum par naraaz hui…………..I'm sorry………………

Prem couldnot believe his ears!...............After all that she had gone through…………….she was ready to forgive him for it………….and agree with his decision even when it meant that he abandoned her!..................

Prem has tears welling up in his eye……………he bends to sit and kneeling down………………moving his hand on her hair he says--- Nahiin Heer…………..glatii toh mujhse hui hai…………..jisse abb main hii theek karoonga…………….tum………….tum fikar matt karo…………….

Just then the doc comesin and she tells Heer—Yeh davaaiyaan lkh dii hain mainne…………….inhein aap roz leejiye………….aapke aur aapke aaney waale bachchey donon kii sehatt ke liye hai…………….

Heer looks at the doc surprised…………….and her lips break into a smile………….as she looks back at Prem…………..to find him all smiles and nodding his head…………….as he holds Heer's hand and kisses her forehead saying--- Abb main tumhe kaheen nahiin jaaney doonga Heer………….tum ghar chalogii………….aur vo bhi abhi issi waqt…………….

Prem and Heer reach the Juneja house………….where Heer reaches the entrance……………just as she is about to step inside……………she hears Maya shout out—yeh aap kya kar rahi hain Heer bhabhi………….bhool gayii aap………………kii abb aap iss ghar kaa hissa nahiin hai…………..aur naa hii Prem baiya kii zindagiii kaa…………….(Maya walks down the staircase with that evil smile on her face as she says further)……………aur Prem bhaiya ne khud hii appko iss ghar se nikaala hai……………phir app yahaan kya kar rahii hain?...........................

Heer has tears welling up ine her eyes…………as she sees Veera and Gaytri come down too………….

They all r shocked to see Prem behind Heer………………

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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeeeee too good update more asap waitinggggggggg
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wowww.
Waiting for the next part. I'm eager to see their reaction to Heer's entry into the house that too with Prem & how Prem handles it. Wish these happened in the show.
Vrinda
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Posted: 16 years ago
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waO......super duper sweet
very well written👍🏼


waiting for the next part
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Posted: 16 years ago
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NICE.....really really nice.......waiting for the second part....:)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#18
Thanx sweta..............Glad u enjoyed this one too............The one shot ends here.............😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanx Vrinda..............glad u enjoyed it dear............Lekin this is a one shot in just two parts.............Isse aagey I have not thought of anything................anyways Thanx...............😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanx Innocent02.................Glad u enjoyed it.............😊

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