FF: Temptations- Chapter 29: Page 143 (21/09/09) - Page 40

Originally posted by: premeerrock

unreserved! Hey Hiba!

ahem ahem do i smell smoke coming out from sum1's ears???😃 Yes, there is a lot of smoke, LOL! hehe!!! awesome update!!!! awww heer was blushing wen gayatri told her of prem's fave sweet!😳 tht was cute!! tsk tsk gayatri is too sharp for her age😉Gayatri is too smart, she is trying to evoke reactions in the kids, she knows that they have feelings for each other!... heer beter look out if u want to stay away from prem coz gayatri is nt far from making u her bahu 😆 so prem is jealous?? hmmm watch out heer sum1 is ntt going to be very pleased wid u wen u return! 😳Hehe, yes he won't be pleased at all when she gets home, there will be a showdown! thank god ajay is going to america coz if he wld have stayed for long thn i dun noe wat prem wld have made of him😆😆Yes, he was only a cameo, I didn't want him to stay too long and cause problems, he was only there to bring out Prem's feelings!😆 lovely update gurl!! buh i so hate u for stopping here!! nw i cant wa8 to read wat will happen nex!! u miss are very evil!😉 😃 jus kidding! dunt mind😊 pls continue soon!😊I am evil, hehe! But yes, I will continue soon!

lots of love

hiba

Originally posted by: Mallu_gal

Well, well, well.......Mr Prem Juneja.........hehe......Heer n Prem remind me of Tom n Jerry right noww.....lol.....yhh.....i know thats crazyy......geez........the guy is CRAZY over her !!........its laright if he goes out with some girl.....but he doesnt like it if she goes out with someonee ??........whats gonna happen nextt........i cant waitt !!........do updatee asap........eagerlyy waiting.........congo on crossing 50 pages....lol.

Alpha.

xx.

Originally posted by: vrinda16

Hai Zahra, Hello Vrinda!

Firstly, Congrats for having crossed 50 pages👏Thank you, it is all because of you wonderful readers!

It was once again a very apt piece of work. I just loved it. Thank you, that means a lot! Wowww....can't wait for Heer to return from her dinner.All the best Heer, my Sher is surely gonna sit up wide awake waiting for ur return.......I wouldn't be surprised if he does his usual irresistable, sudden, unexpected pounce upon you(Moreover he hasn't had his dinner too)😆She's surely gonna be like a prey b4 a hungry lion/tiger....Be prepared to face the jealous stricken Sheru.....or is he gonna drive up there(I mean their venue for dinner?) to see by himself what's happening there??....Nah, he doesn't know the venue right?😆 Yes he will be up and waiting desperately for her! 😉😆 You will have to see if he pounces or not! Well he hasn't eaten, so will he be hungry for Heer? 😆

So, it'll be the first option then.....& me waiting here in all eagerness 4 ur next update - "Sheru pounces upon his prey again" or "Sheru strikes again"😉😆 Great names for movies! 😆 I love 'Sheru strikes again' 😆

Oh my what an atmosphere....late night, all slept(I mean Bauji,GMom),in the darkness & calmness of the night when Heeriye returns to the house...maybe, her room, a strong pair of hands are gonna pull her towards him/corner her against the wall & her frightened eyes meet that pair of brown eyes now flashing in anger & jealousy amidst the darkness with the air containing their intermingled breaths..........😆OMG, you seem to know everything! 😲😆 Something like that will happen!

Oh Zahra, I've seriously lost it....😆😆😆.....U better update at the earliest.....bcos my mind's gone hay-wire imagining & recreating different such scenarios......There the stage's ready...so r we the audience(the readers)....now, only waiting for the script penned by u.😉 Hehe! I will update soon! But what remains to be seen is if the confrontation is in the next chapter or the one after! 😆 Love Zahra xx

Love,

Vrinda

Originally posted by: Aaliyah01

Great update!! Thank you Aaliyah!

Love Gayatri in this, and the sly way in which she told Heer what Prem's favourite dish was Yes, Gayatri is too shrewd for her own good! 😆

Aww poor Prem, so jealous Yes he is green with envy, hehe!

Cant wait for Heer to return, and to see what Prem says to her I cannot wait either, lol!

Congrats on making it to 50 pages! 😊Thank you, will update soon! xx

Originally posted by: angel82

man I'm loving where this is going....Heer trying to stay away from Prem but deep inside blushes at the mention of his name, Gayathri already in the process of making Heer her bahu And Premu , jealous, angry and ready to screw up things...I am sooooo looking forward to read his reaction when heer gets back home all happy and smiling....

Ajay inviting Heer for dinner, complimenting her, sounds fishy...does he have plans about her? he better not....

knowing that heer is attracted to prem, I'm getting anxious to know if Heer will give herself to prem before or after she falls in love with him..guess will have to wait till the story reaches there

Originally posted by: SaNyA_21

Awsome! :D I love how Prem gets all mad when Ajay talks to Heer, but he can go around with all the girls he wants; ahaha. I think Ajay's the good guy here, and can't wait till the next part :)

hi zahra, how strong i thot tht i shud not enter in midway but u drawn me in with ur writings..so im her i can't contrl anymore..this ff is marvelous evry part is temptative😆....sooo apt not only for ff but also for readers....vry curious for nxt part.....plzz continue asap..now onwards i'll be regular😳

plzzz add me to pm list

-sugi

Originally posted by: meiskan

Ahaha i loved this chapter! i think it was nicely written. I love how Prem gets so jealous when Heer is with Ajay.....really like where this is headed to! Please continue asap 😊