FF: Temptations- Chapter 29: Page 143 (21/09/09)

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Svetalana Singh

@-svetalana-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#411

wow amazing update..Prem realising his love towards heer.But the update was so small.Please update next time a bigger one

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Angie

@angel82

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#412

That was awesome update Zahra.. PLzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continue asap, cant wait to read ahead ...wonder what prem's going to do or say.....how I loooooooveeeeeee jealous Prem!!

and thankgod Ajay's role is over....

loved Preet-Prem scenes....

very eagerly waiting for the next part

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Maddy

@blackdaughter

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#413

salsa!! =D

Great part Zaza!!! OMG, Prem is so mad!!! 😲 It's like he has no control over himself!!! Nice to know Heer has so much power over him!!!! 😆 Oh uh........ he forgot Preet!!! That's so sweet, they way he kept apologizing, so unlike the Prem being portrayed in the story!!! 😆 *thumbs up*

Awww, I'm so glad to see Heer happy and having some fun enjoying herself!!! 😳 After all the hardships she has been through it's nice to see her smiling and happy finally!!! 😃 Love how they are fighting over desert!!! 😆 They are so mature!!! 😉😆

Oh ho ho!!! Preet has an english accent does he!?!? I think guys that have an English accent sound so sexy!!! 😳😉😆 I know you are used to it, being from London but i am NOT!!!! 😳😆 Anyways, in short, Preet is sexy!!! 😆

Awww, Ajay is leaving. Poor Heer, another person going from her, even it isn't forever but still!!! *pouts* Oh ho ho, Prem is still up is he!?!?! I wonder what he is going to do!?!? *wiggly eyebrows* 😉😆

Great update, can hardly wait for the next part!!!

Love you!! *hug*

Edited by blackdaughter - 16 years ago

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Meera

@indiandoll89

Trailblazer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#414

mine! 😳

*edited*

As much as Radz hates him...I love this Prem! *swoons* very bad I know...having no self control whatsoever...but could you just imagine that HOTTTT look on Harshu's face when he was looking back at himself in the mirror? *blushes*

I need to stop...and be a bit angry...he forgot his own little brother? 😲 *shakes head* Well Preet's a big boy! 😃 And ohhh a brit boy at that! *giggles* You had to add the accent didn't you? 😳 Now he's even more appealing!😆😆😆

I love how he's still thinking about Heer...idiot!😆😆 but oh before I forget the sweet moment with the desserts was super cute! 😃😳 They're like bro and sis! 😃

And ohhh their good bye was sad! 😔 But that end...had me chilled to my bones! 😃 I honestly can't WAIT to see what you've got planned with this Z! 😃😳

Continue ASAP 😃 (well maybe not but you know what I mean!😉)

Love you,

Meera😳

Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago

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isomers

@isomers

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#415

Prem's reaction was priceless!! *giggles*

H seem's so possessive when he's jealous!..that's freakin awesome that you made him jealous!

it's usually the girl that gets jealous but this time it's different!

awesome update!!!

eagerly waiting for the next part

love,

nitya

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366791

Suspended

Posted: 16 years ago

#416

Great update 👍🏼

Ooooh Prem is so jealous! 😆

Very sweet scene with Heer and Ajay

Aww poor Heer feeling so alone

Loved the interaction between Prem-Preet 😃

Im guessin it's Prem waiting for Heer

Update real soon please! 😃

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vrinda16

@vrinda16

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#417

There ............Zahra has turned herself into one of those usual BT style direction.😉😆.........& managed to stop at exactly the point we had all been waiting for ........

Oh, Zahra, how long will we have to wait like this??U know exactly how to keep us intrigued right???😆Now, will have to desperately wait for the next update.......It's too tempting & the scene's beginning has come out exactly the way my hay-wire mind had suggested, right Zahra??Poor Heer......May u have all the strength to confront my Sheru😉😆& Sheru, u think cold water over ur face will help u wash out her thoughts from ur mind??Nah...His mind's all bugged with questions & thoughts abt the probable scenarios that's keeping Heer late😆😆😆For once it's fun to see such a reaction from his part knowing how much of a flirt he himself is.

Update soon.

Love,

Vrinda