FF: Temptations- Chapter 29: Page 143 (21/09/09)

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harpreet sekhon

@nslove

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Posted: 16 years ago

#381

it was very beautiful

update soon

thx

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Simran

@meiskan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#382

Ahaha i loved this chapter! i think it was nicely written. I love how Prem gets so jealous when Heer is with Ajay.....really like where this is headed to! Please continue asap 😊

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JCluvs srk

@JCluvs srk

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Posted: 16 years ago

#383

omg gayatri is being so sneaky...lol...loved this update....wonder if prem will confront heer about the dinner...

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

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Posted: 16 years ago

#384

*giggles* And he still thinks it's just attraction? Isn't the blatant possessiveness and jealousy obvious that it is so much more than that already? *shakes head* I still don't like him here, how domineering and self-centered he is, and this jealousy is so amusing! And Heer, oh, I like her with this Ajay. Bechara Ajay though, does he like her as more than a friend? I don't want his heart to be broken! I like Ajay more than Prem at the moment. Prem needs to be redeemed. I cannot wait to see how and when you do that! Till then, bring on the jealousy on Prem's part, and let Heer be oblivious and against him! *dances*

Love,
Radz

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Sarah

@--Sarah--

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Posted: 16 years ago

#385

Awesome update Zahra! loved it...and what prem is jealous...ummm very excited to know what will happen next...and heer started blushing on hearing prem's name..loved it....i guess something is fishy with Ajay....

Thanks for writing and waiting for the next update

Sarah

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Ishita

@iditri

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Posted: 16 years ago

#386

dhua dhua ho raahahe samah....kahi to hain aag laagi....LOL..

awesome upate....loving the jealous prem.....:)

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Fatima

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Posted: 16 years ago

#387

awesome update 👏.love the way how prem feels jealous.wait 4 the next update asap.thanks 4 the pm.
luv
Fatima

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Magpie

@Magpie

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Posted: 16 years ago

#388

Tnk you so much for your warm wishes sweety 🤗 it means a lot 😛. We both are fine.

Ajay seems like a nice guy but I could be wrong...Hope he plays the catalyst in PH love story.

Looking forward to the continuation.

Take care.
Love you.

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isomers

@isomers

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Posted: 16 years ago

#389

hey.I'm nitya..sorry i don't know your name..just wanted to say, your ff is aweeeeeeesome!!..i love the way you show prem in your story..he's like a chick magnet(not that he's not in real life too...hehe..lol)..but in your story..he's actually responding to the girls dying after him!..this is one view of prem that's definitely different from the rest!!...it's also stupendously awesome to see prem jealous!..definitely worth reading!

btw....your ff is really tempting(get it..bad joke na?)...i mean..i started reading this afternoon..and ever since..that's all i've been doing!!

plzz...add my name in your list of the people you send PM's to when you update!..thank you soo much in advance!