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Mallu_gal

@Mallu_gal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#371

Well, well, well.......Mr Prem Juneja.........hehe......Heer n Prem remind me of Tom n Jerry right noww.....lol.....yhh.....i know thats crazyy......geez........the guy is CRAZY over her !!........its laright if he goes out with some girl.....but he doesnt like it if she goes out with someonee ??........whats gonna happen nextt........i cant waitt !!........do updatee asap........eagerlyy waiting.........congo on crossing 50 pages....lol.

Alpha.

xx.

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fungrl

@fungrl

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Posted: 16 years ago

#372

guess what! I like ladoo too, since Prem didn't eat it, may I have some😆😆😆

awesome update once again..........can't wait how Prem will react as soon as Heer comes home

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Maddy

@blackdaughter

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Posted: 16 years ago

#373

bhangda!!!!

OMG, i loved it, i loved it!!!! 😳😆 So what if it was short, no earthquake is going to happen Zaza!!! *fingers crossed, quickly knocks wood* 😆

Awww, I like Ajay, he seems like a nice guy and also makes Heer laugh!! She could use all the light hearted moments she can get with the tension being so thick in the house!!! 😉😆

*Giggle* I love it when Prem gets J!!!!! It makes me so happy because i think he isn't very good at hiding it!!! 😉 I wonder if there is going to be a confrontation between Premeer when Heer gets back home!?!??! Well whatever it is i can't wait!!!! 😳

Awesome update Zaza and i really like G-mom she is so sweet!! Quite a nice change from the horror we have to endure in the serial!!! 🤢

Loved this update and can't wait till the next one!!!

Love you!! *hug*

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Meera

@indiandoll89

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+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#374

Remind me again why you don't like this part? 😕 I think it was perfectly written, nice and softly! 😃

Ajay does seems like a genuine nice guy...but he's still making me a bit mad, except that he gets awesome reactions from Prem! 😃

Anyways...I like the way Heer and Ajay are together...very sweet...and teehee....Prem's all jealous! 😃😳

I can't wait to see what you plan to do with this! 😃😳

Love you loads,

Meera😳

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vrinda16

@vrinda16

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#375

Hai Zahra,

Firstly, Congrats for having crossed 50 pages👏

It was once again a very apt piece of work. I just loved it. Wowww....can't wait for Heer to return from her dinner.All the best Heer, my Sher is surely gonna sit up wide awake waiting for ur return.......I wouldn't be surprised if he does his usual irresistable, sudden, unexpected pounce upon you(Moreover he hasn't had his dinner too)😆She's surely gonna be like a prey b4 a hungry lion/tiger....Be prepared to face the jealous stricken Sheru.....or is he gonna drive up there(I mean their venue for dinner?) to see by himself what's happening there??....Nah, he doesn't know the venue right?😆

So, it'll be the first option then.....& me waiting here in all eagerness 4 ur next update - "Sheru pounces upon his prey again" or "Sheru strikes again"😉😆

Oh my what an atmosphere....late night, all slept(I mean Bauji,GMom),in the darkness & calmness of the night when Heeriye returns to the house...maybe, her room, a strong pair of hands are gonna pull her towards him/corner her against the wall & her frightened eyes meet that pair of brown eyes now flashing in anger & jealousy amidst the darkness with the air containing their intermingled breaths..........😆

Oh Zahra, I've seriously lost it....😆😆😆.....U better update at the earliest.....bcos my mind's gone hay-wire imagining & recreating different such scenarios......There the stage's ready...so r we the audience(the readers)....now, only waiting for the script penned by u.😉

Love,

Vrinda

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366791

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Posted: 16 years ago

#376

Great update!!
Love Gayatri in this, and the sly way in which she told Heer what Prem's favourite dish was

Aww poor Prem, so jealous

Cant wait for Heer to return, and to see what Prem says to her

Congrats on making it to 50 pages! 😊

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Shruti

@Shruti11

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#377

gr8 update prem being jealous cool pls update soon

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Angie

@angel82

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#378

man I'm loving where this is going....Heer trying to stay away from Prem but deep inside blushes at the mention of his name, Gayathri already in the process of making Heer her bahu And Premu , jealous, angry and ready to screw up things...I am sooooo looking forward to read his reaction when heer gets back home all happy and smiling....

Ajay inviting Heer for dinner, complimenting her, sounds fishy...does he have plans about her? he better not....

knowing that heer is attracted to prem, I'm getting anxious to know if Heer will give herself to prem before or after she falls in love with him..guess will have to wait till the story reaches there

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Nikita

@HCDeewani

Navigator

Posted: 16 years ago

#379

hey!!!

oh gosh..i love how this is turnig out to be! eeekk!! im like jumping in my seat...hehehehe..

too good yaar. mindblowing. superb!

Ajay inviting Heer for Dinner...hmmmm and Prem not knowing..hmmm..this is qutie the intersting turn. When Prem was told tht Heer was gone with a "collage " friend for dinner.. gosh the way you described the feeling that went thruogh him was tremendously done.

hahaha with all that anger Prem has, its quite good Ajayis going back to America..or Prem would have made him into some of that Palak Paneer Heer made earlier..lol

cant wait to see what happens next..continue soon, and take care..

~nikki😳😃

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280866

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Posted: 16 years ago

#380

Awsome! :D I love how Prem gets all mad when Ajay talks to Heer, but he can go around with all the girls he wants; ahaha. I think Ajay's the good guy here, and can't wait till the next part :)

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