FF: Kambakht Ishq (Ch 4-Pg 17) 7/20

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@-Garima-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#51

Mine!!

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Heyy Deepika!!!! I'm baacckk!!! LOL! Did ya miss me?!😉😆 and OMG! I'm first....after such a longg time!!! LOL! I feel proud of myself!😆

First of all….I LOVED this chapter!!!!!! I enjoyed reading every part of it…from the beginning to end, in fact I even read it two times! Lol….yes I kno I'm a freak! Haha!😆😆😆

I love the relationship between Prem and Preet here! They're so cute!! LOL! I can totally relate to Preet when it comes to getting up early in the morning…I can NEVER do that, and my parents get pissed off on that…but what to do…I need my beauty sleep! Lmao!😆😆😆

HAHA!! "What's an Iron?!?!" LMFAO! Preet is hilarious!! That part really cracked me up! lol! Prem is such a sweetuu!!! Calling his Nani to Iron his clothes!! aawww!! I felt like pinching his cheeks!!!😳😆

YAY!!! Heer got the offer to work with Prem!!! This is going to be interesting!! If Heer takes that long to get ready...then I bet I take WAYYY longer!😆😆 But I guess it's a girl thing...we just hve to be fashionably late!😉😆

I luv how u protray all the characters...I luv Heer and Ash's sarcastic dialogues!! They remind me of me!😆

OMG!!! Another spill on Heer's dress!!😲😲😲 Uh-Oh! Prem better back up...cuz she's gonna FUME in anger!!! lol!!! So they finally get to know each other....Ohhh! Cliffhanger!! Is Heer gonna partner up with Prem?!?!?! EEEKK!! Can't wait to find out Deeps!! I loved this chapter!! Update soon!!

Byeee!! Luv,

Garima😳😳😳

Edited by Garima93 - 16 years ago

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Komal

@Momana

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Posted: 16 years ago

#52

lol.. thnxs for the update... luving this fff

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@flowers4u

Rocker

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Posted: 16 years ago

#53

hey fab updat etotally mind blowing cant w8 for da next part

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Maddy

@blackdaughter

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#54

salsa!!!

You may notice from now on that i will reserve using different kinds of dances!!!!You'll know it's me for sure!!!! 😆 Anyways, back to the story!!! 😳

Haha, Prem vocab is colourful is it !?!??! Maybe someone should wash his mouth with soup!!!!!! 😉😆 That may help!!!! 😆 Preet kitna bat ko ghumata hain!!!!!! Awww, poor sleeping beauty ko jaga diya!!!! 😆

That's sweet!!! He took ashirwad!!!! Shows he completely respects his elders!!!! *thumbs up* Gosh, he doesn't know how to iron!!!! That's pretty sad............. actually never mind........... i being a total hypocrite by making that statement...... i can't iron my clothes well either!!!! 😳 It's harder than it actually looks you know........ so you can stop laughing at me!!!! *pouts* 😳😉😆

Prem and Preet are like completely opposites in a way!! Prem is efficient and impatient while Preet is relaxed and cool at all times!!! It's how they complete each other i suppose!!! Great way of potraying that!!! *thumbs up*!!!

OMG!!!! Premeer are working on the same project together!!! And they are going to be working on a one to one basis too!!! This is hilarious!!! They are going to totaly freak!!!!! ROFL!!!! 🤣 Ouch, Ash and Sahej love teasing her don't they !?!?!?! Poor Heer (but it's kinda funny at the sametime)!!!!! 😆

Haha, Heer is hoping she will never see 'HIM' again!!! Too bad that isn't in her kismet, it's quite the opposite!!!!! 😆

......................................... YOU HAVE GOT TO BE KIDDING ME!!!!!!!! A THIRD TIME!!!!!!!!!................ wow!!! Hade ho ti hai yaar!!!!!! I feel so bad for Heer even though i'm laughing quite hard now!!!! 😆 The situation is sooo hopeless that it is making me laugh a lot!!!! ROFL!!!!! 🤣 I'm sure Heer is ready to kill him and totally not care about the consequences!!!!! 😆

Haha, Preet is matchmaking already!!!! Even though they are about to have a scream fest, he still notices how perfect Premeer are for each other!!!!! *perfect* OMG, my older brother hits me!!!! 😆 Preet is sooo ungrateful!!! *shaking my head at his imaturity here* 😉😆

LoL, kills me and throws me into the Hudson river!!! ok......... that might be a little over the top, but i suppose Heer isn't really thinking straight in her anger!!! 😆 YES!!!!!! Heer has to work with Prem!!!! YAY!!! I'm happy not if you didn't notice already!!!! 😆

Great update and can't wait to see where this story is heading!!!! Please update soon again!!!!!

Edited by blackdaughter - 16 years ago

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bd670816

@bd670816

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#55

hey, awesome update.
loved premeer scene very much.
can't wait for the next update.
cont..soon.

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poonam

@P.Kamaljit.Sean

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#56

hey
awesum super update
oh premeer met again 3rd spilling scene again whoa
super that was too goood

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Priyadarshini Basu

@munam_13

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#57

Hey deepika just read your updates..and this story is fantastic..loved the background you had setup..loved the spat between Prem and Heer and every time Heer being Prem's victim of spilling things... it is really very interesting to read.. please post soon..I am getting really impatient with the plot...😃

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Nitty

@Nitty2910

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#58

wow another amazing update... superb,,, prem and heer can kill each other if anything more happens,,,, always fighting,

eagerly waiting to read further and see how are they gonna fall in love....

waiting for the next update.......

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Maddy

@blackdaughter

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#59

Updated my comment now!!!! =D

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#60

Three times she's got something dropped onto her because of Prem. Bechara Prem. None of it is his fault! But this Heer, she doesn't listen to anyone, and comes to her own conclusions. Deepu, you've portrayed the both of them so well, both so stubborn. Absolutely hilarious!

And Sahej gave Heer an ultimatum. I cannot wait to see them work together. 😉😆

Love,

Radz

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