FF: Kambakht Ishq (Ch 4-Pg 17) 7/20 - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
#31
Heer and Prem are absolutely hilarious.
Love,
Radz
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32
hey i just droped by and read the prologue and the first chapter, and let me tell u it was amazing...
prem and heer are not less then one another.. and heer is diferent from wat we see her..
waiting to read further to know how will they fall for each other an both seems to can't stand one another...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33
hi.
fantastic part!!!!!!vey nice
prem and heer meeting was very cute,love the fight...very sweet!
cntn soonnnnn
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34
hi,
deepika,
excellent update.
loved the premeer's cute fight very much.
cont.soon.
tc.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#35
-Reserved-

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Ok, so this time I'm actually NOT late in editing my comment lol 😆

OMG!!! The first chapter was GREAT!! as expected! Cuz we all know that you have like the awesomist (which is not a word but oh well) writing skills!!!! No I'm not joking! So, Prem is one of those I-don't-like-anything-except-my-work type of guy, lol, and Preet!!! LMAO!! What can I say about him!! He's so Naughty!! Trying to hook up his PB with a girl, poor guy he doesn't know his big bro isn't interested in any girl yet 😉😆
Jake seems pretty funny! I liked him! LMAO!! So you have the Gay element in here too Deeps? *shakes head* LOL But I still LOVE it!! Makes the story more comical!😆😆

They way you describe NYC is so perfect! It seems so real!! And the best part is I've been to NYC a billion times cuz duh I live in NJ..haha, so its easier for me to imagine it!!! U did a really good job at doing that!!👏

WOW! Heer has got ATITUDE! Kya coffee pheki Prem par!!!! and I love how she first acted all nice and innocent and next thing you know she's raging in anger and poured the coffee all over Prem's coat!! LMAO!😆 I so knew that was coming!!!! I wonder what Prem's revenge is gonna be!😉

Really great update Deepika!!! I really enjoyed it!! Can't wait till Wednesday for your next update!!😃

Byee!! Love,
Garima😳😳😳

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Edited by Garima93 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36
OMG!!!that waz sooo cute...i cudnt stop laughing...
first the gay guy and then the fight...lol

loving the ff...plz continue soon.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37
reserved!!!!!
*panting after finishing my work at a maniac's pace* Ok bacha loge, i'm here!!!!!!! 😉😆
OMG, that was such an amazing chapter!!!! *round of applause* 👏👏👏 I love Preet, he is sooo cute!!! Casonava eh........... i like it!!!! 😉😳😆 Oh god, Jake was soo funny!!! 😆 Openly Preet or Prem pe line mar raha tha!!!
"Premu"!!!! 🤣 Awww, bechare ke hopes crashed by the two hot brothers!!! The way Preetreacted when Jake eyed him later!!! Straight as a rod he is!!! That was great comic relief and an insight into the brothers relationship!!!
Jason was funny, he rattled of everything to Ash!!!! Ash even has keys to Heer's house!!! Shows how good friends they are and the amount of trust between them!!! It so nice how you pointed out that even Heer didn't see the need for her humongous flat!! And how she didn't want to take advantage of the fact that her boss is her best friend!!! Show's how she is a no nonsense type of a women!!! I really like that!!! 👍🏼
Aw, dadaji thought she was a 'proper punjabi jatti' (go Heer)!!!! *doing the nazar na lage gesture* 😆 Oooooh, something brewing between Heer's brother Meet and Ash eh !?!?! Hope to see more of that in the future!!!
Oh no!!! Second time coffee spill, with that too with Prem again!!! Why do they always meet like this !?!?!? Hopefully third time will be a charm (it better be or else 😡........ kidding kidding 😆)!!!!! When Heer was like won't you give it to me NICELY, i was like aaj suraj doseri taraf se kaise aaya hain !?!?!? But then she was like BAM and i was like, that's more like her!!!!
Aw, poor Prem coffee spilled on him too now!!!! The way they were shouting in the middle of the road..... God!!! Heer, Prem beta, itna gussa sehat ke liye hanikarak hota hain (wah wah kya dialouge mara hain maine *pat on the back*!!!! sorry, getting back to the story)!!!! 😆
Great chapter yaar!! I sure gave you a detailed description didn't i !!!! 😆
Hope you update soon!!! Can't wait!!!! If you have a PM list, please add me!!!
Edited by blackdaughter - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: -Shika-

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Hi Deepikaaaaaa!!!!!! The update was AWESOME👏👏!!!!!!!!!!! Prem's character is so intense and business like. It'll be amazing to see him fall in love with someone like heer. I love preet too, especially the way he was trying to get his brother hooked up with one of the employees. ROFL, i could totally image preet jumping a mile after the designer started eyeing him🤣.
Hi Shika! Thank you, i'm glad you liked it. lol...It will be just as interesting to write about him falling in love😉. Preet is just so much of a casanova that he'll even willing to get his brother a girlfriend. lmao...I rewrote that part so many times to get the right feeling😕😆
I like ashlesha. Acutally i like all your characters. They all have their own personality that you can't get them confused with any other characters. I loved the part with the elevator guy and how he said that heer came out with a hockey stick ready to beat that ladies husband😆. This heer is soo different from the ones in the other fanfics.
I'm glad you like Ash and all my characters. These are more defined than the ones from my other ff. Heer is quite extreme sometimes😆. It's nice to know you found her different.
i love it how heer is so nice to everyone [except prem] and doesn't like to abuse her friendship privileges. the conversation in the limo was nice too. OHH, so Ashlesha liikes heer's older brother Meet! That's a new angle! I thought that since you had preet and ashlesha, that they'd get together. maybe you'll bring meher into this😃. I don't want to see preet heartbroken, please have meher be his lady love, whenever you do decide to bring someone in.
lol...Heer & Prem met in the wrong situations and it's going to get worse, but eventually thing will start to somewhat get under control. I didn't want Ash w/ Preet b/c i like him with meher and I don't want harman in this at all😕😆.
😲😲😲The premeer encounter was just😲😲😲. I really didn't expect any of that to happen. I was just as confused with heer's behavior as much as prem was. It was a pretty funny encounter. I love your writing. it is so different from others and so is the plot. I really hope you update soon...i can't wait until wednesday😃😃. If you have a pm list then can you add me?
Lol...at least some people didn't expect tht to happen. I felt it was a bit predictable.. Thank you! You're comments are super sweet. I don't have a pm list, but i'll post the days i update😃.
Luv,
Shika
Edit Add- Ooops! I just realized that my post is very long. it's not my fault, it was all yours. your writing is just that good. I hope you don't mind the length😳😳😳.
Aww...i don't mind at all. It was nice reading it.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: pooji123456789

hey
fantastic mindblowing update
super
loved the prem heer scene
toooo goooood
awesum

Hi, thank you! I'm glad you liked the clash b/w Premeer😆.

Originally posted by: sadizzle

aww!! this is by far one of the funniest updates i have ever read!!

really really really good!!
omg i predict Prem and Heer will have to work together some how..and i can't wait.
Heer's character is just amazing!
& prem is of course very cute
thanx for the update
mucho luv
-Sadi*

Aww...thank you! I think that's a good think you found it funny. I won't tell you if your prediction is right or not, b/c it'll ruin the story😉😆. I'm glad you like both their characters. You're comment was very sweet.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sunehari*Rose

i luved the part... the coincidence was written really nicely.. plz continue

Aww...thank you! I'm glad you loved it.

Originally posted by: Intellienough

wow ...Such cute fight between Heer and prem.By the way nice update.Nice begining.

Thanks😊! It's nice to know that you liked the fight!

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