FF: Kambakht Ishq (Ch 4-Pg 17) 7/20

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DGill28

@DGill28

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Posted: 16 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: pragz1994
omg loved the update and it waz nice and long....i waz waiting for it since along time.....

nywaz...loved the way how u potrayed heer and prem's and all other characters....and how something has to spill on heer everytime they meet lol.....now that she doesnt have a choice i wonder how heer will work with prem ....

waiting for the next update.....hope u put up the next part soon!!:D:D:D

Hey! Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. It's nice to know that you like all the characters and the way they're perceived. Heer does have a choice, but let's see what she decides to do😉.

Originally posted by: kamx2
Hey Deepika!
Just caught up with ur new FF! Aur yeh kya, u didnt even tell me! hehe but, the amazing start totally made up man!

I am absolutely loving the whole new idea and the completely different story. Its going fantastically!

And of course, I LOVE the way that everytime Prem & Heer meet, something spills, and Heer's reactions...🤣nd poor Prem, usse toh bolne ka zyaada mauka hi nahin milta!

Totally love the cute interactions between Heer-Ash-Sahej(-Akki) as well as Prem-Preet(-Nani) so far...totally fab!

Keep it up! Looking forward to more!

PS. Love FF title...Kambakht Ishq!

Kamal

OOPS!!! I'm sorry i didn't tell you..lol. I'm glad my beginning made up for it. LMAO..i'm so glad you like the happenings of the story. Prem ko mauka kaisa milega jab Heer dethi hi nahi😆. Thank you! I'm glad you liked the story and the title!

Originally posted by: happybrar
awesomeeeeeeee

Thank you!😃

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DGill28

@DGill28

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Posted: 16 years ago

#72

PREVIEW:

Ahem ahem...I'm going to be giving a little speech here. First of all i'm so sorry for not updating this ff in like over 7 days, but college life has been busy and with practices for my performance i had to do on vaisakhi. To make up for lost time, i'm posting a cliffhanger preview of the next chapter. The next chapter will be posted tonight. See you all then and I hope to read all your comments and positive/negative feedback for the following preview:

It was early in the morning as Heer jogged vigorously on the treadmill at one of the most elite gyms in Manhattan. This was one of those moments where she was able to be out in public and not worry about having her bodyguard with her despite the fact that Akki was on the other floor doing his workouts. Heer slowed down her pace as she prepared herself to stop. As she stopped she grabbed her water bottle and started walking towards the locker room. As she opened the top to drink the water, someone turned around bumping into her and causing the water to spill onto her clothes. Without looking up she said "Prem" with a sigh.

She looked up and saw Prem standing in front of her with a not-again look. Before he could say anything she said "....

See you all tonight😃!!!!

~Deepika

EDIT ADD: sorry everyone...I won't be updating tonight either! I'm extremely sorry, but i'm heading home again from college today and this weekend will be quite busy for me as well. Hopefuly I'll be back in the dorms by monday and i'll update then. Sorry again for pushing the update back.

Edited by Deepika28 - 16 years ago

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Shika

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Posted: 16 years ago

#73

Ohhhhh!!! Another spilling incident😲! HAHAHAHA!!!! the preview seems quite interesting. i can't wait until you update the chapter!!

Luv,

Shika

Edited by -Shika- - 16 years ago

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 16 years ago

#74

hey cant w8 to see wt heer says to prem keep up the gud wrk

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-Garima-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#75

Aww Deepuu!!! It's okay, I can totally understand!! Even I get really busy...and Im not even in college yet! lolzz, and don't worry I hven't updated my FF yet!! Shhh!! Don't tell anyone! lol!

The promo was quite a cliffhanger...haha...so they meet again, at a gym, this time spilling water over Heer!! LMAO!!! I think I'm loosing count over how many times they've spilt something on eachother!! LOL! \

Can't wait for tonight to read ur update!!!!!

luv,
Garima

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DGill28

@DGill28

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Posted: 16 years ago

#76

A note has been added the chapter 3 precap. It basically says that i won't be updating until monday or tuesday. I'm actually heading home from college and won't be back in my dorm until monday. Sorry for the delay once again.

~Deepika

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iqra

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Posted: 16 years ago

#77

Hi Di!!!

Right on time! Prem and preet's relationship is so Brotherly😉 And I just know it .. i will end up loving this Preet!! For sure!! Fistly I have to telly ou how much love I the way premeer meet always by colliding into each other.. so natural ..yet unique! Wow! prem.. heer is going to be working with Prem i am so excitied!

Okay this Sahej guy is preet impatient! what did he expect she is a girl..she will take a long time.. like..duh!! Wow that was a big reaction! This Heer character gets Angry very quickly. Which makes this charcter more intersting! I can't wait to read how they fall in love!!

And di, I know what you mean.. I have to like 2 essays to write and i haven't even started..so take your time to update!

~Love Iqra

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Maddy

@blackdaughter

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Posted: 16 years ago

#78

Hello!!!

I think it's time Heer started dressing in rags if she values her clothes!!!! 😆 Prem ka koi bharosa nahi hai, kahi bhi pohuch jata hai to make sure she spills something on herslef!!!! 😆

It seems for once our Heer is getting some freedom!!!! YAY!!!!!! 😉😆 It's ok, totally understandable that you can't find too much time to update!!! i'll wait till you can!!!! 😊

Awwww, it was a cliffy!!!!! Why *looking up at the sky and shouting Nahiiiii dramatically*!?!?!?! 😳😉😆 I hate cliffhangers, but that what makes the story so interesting!!!!! 😛😆

Can't wait till you update!!!! *hug*

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

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Posted: 16 years ago

#79

4th time? I cannot wait to read the chapter, but take your time!

Love,
Radz

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pragya

@pragz1994

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Posted: 16 years ago

#80

hey.....glad to see the update after a while....

oh god.....something spilt AGAIN......this is like the 4th time........haha....its funny how heer doesnt even have to look up to see its prem.....and her tone is just like she's used to it now...lol 😆

oh no....i hate cliffhangers...i want to know wat heer will say.....now i have to wait for the next update......nahhii..*sad dramatic face* 😉

hope to read the update on monday......hope it is updated by thenn...hehe...

xx
Pragya

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