FF-MISTAKE part 8 p:10

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saimazzzz

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Posted: 16 years ago

#41

SEE I M A SILENT READER BUT I WAS THE FIRST ONE TO READ UR UPDATE AND FIRST TIME PASS THE COMMENT IT WAS AWESOME GREAT PART I DONT HAVE WORDS FOR PRAISING U ANYWAYS PLS POST NEXT PART ASAP PLS THIS IS A HUMBLE REQUEST😊

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annea

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Posted: 16 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Parth Garewal
hey dear ur ff is very nice....i read it today...n rele its awsum...i wud love to read more n more...u rvery nice...well imagining prem in angry looks for heer is now lil easier after the epis...hehe...ur ff is very interesting....

thnx dear😳

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annea

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Posted: 16 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: saimazzzz
SEE I M A SILENT READER BUT I WAS THE FIRST ONE TO READ UR UPDATE AND FIRST TIME PASS THE COMMENT IT WAS AWESOME GREAT PART I DONT HAVE WORDS FOR PRAISING U ANYWAYS PLS POST NEXT PART ASAP PLS THIS IS A HUMBLE REQUEST😊

i will update it very soon😊

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sugii

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Posted: 16 years ago

#44

annea its fantastic part.evry time iam vry excited for nxt pt.u r amazing....plzzzzzz continue soon.

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annea

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Posted: 16 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: sugi77

annea its fantastic part.evry time iam vry excited for nxt pt.u r amazing....plzzzzzz continue soon.

thnkyu soo much dear...i'll update soon as possible😳

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 16 years ago

#46

hey another great update luved it cant w8 to read more and preets so sweet

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Maddy

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Posted: 16 years ago

#47

ooohh!!! Prem kya karne wala hai!!!

If he tries anything, she should hit him where it hurts most (i think you atch my drift).... lol

Nice update!!! I hope Prem doesn't plan on hurting her, but more like teasing her and taunting her....

Good update and can't wait till the next. If you got a PM list, add me please!!!

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Sadia87

@Sadia87

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Posted: 16 years ago

#48

omg!! i can't believe prem

this is getting very interesting..

plz plz plz do continue soon

btw thanx for the quick updates!

ur the best

omg finally we get a premeer scene in the next update?? - 👍🏼

can't wait!

Thanx

-Sadi*

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annea

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Posted: 16 years ago

#49

part 6:

heer somehow managed to hide her nervousness and replied....."ji mamma...mein unhe dikhathi hu......"looking at prem she continued....."aao mere sath....."

he moved towards her and wispered so that only she hears..."i would always like to....."

she felt heat rising through her cheeks....but it was hidden from him with the help of her hair.....

she moved forward as soon as she found his hand moving towards her hair to remove it frm her face.......

she walked in front so that he dont see her uneasiness ........she could still feel his intense gaze on her......

making sure that they were away frm the view of their parents he quickly pulled heer by her hand and pinned her to the wall......and told"u know what heer.....i really liked ur courage......but honey i guess that u showed ur power on wrong person....."

saying that he ranned his hand through her waist....making her to shiver like hell.....

she was not not sure about what was happening......is she having a bad dream or else is it a reality???????

soon she came out of her delima and started pushing him with all her stength.....she felt like dying......

"prem just leave me......dont dare touch me with ur sticky hands......"telling this she pushed him even harder....

she felt her knees going week....she felt like criying loud....but everything was impossible for her at that time......

"common honey....just dont waste ur enegy and my time......lets finish it fast....."telling that he hardened his grip on her.....

he traveled his hands through her cheeks....she can feel his intense gaze falling on her lips.......she grew pale white.......

he moved his head forward ...and when they was only an inch apart she turned her head on the opposite direction.......

this made him more anger ....her puleed her even closer.......and was about to taste the curves of her neck when he heard some sound....he suddenly removed his hand frm her waist.......and turned to see who the person was.....

there stands meher with a horrified face......both heer and prem stood there like statues.........

prem quickly passed her and went to the hall......leaving a horrified meher and heer......

meher moved towards heer....heer stood there with her eyes fixed on the ground......

"what was that di...???"askedan angry meher.....which mede heer shiver like in hell......

"voh meher...mein tumse bathane valli thi par....."told heer tottally shivering......

"didi is he ur ex boyfriend......"asked meher which made heer to look up ......

"ha meher.....but we broke up .........because he was a cheater .....he just acted as if he likes me...he never loved me...."telling that heer started criying .....which made meher to leave her anger away and help her di....

didi...mein sunna chahthi hu.....aapko aaj mujhse yeh bathana hi hogha......kum se kum dard ko baatne se aapko acha lagegha..."told meher by allowing heer to cry on her shoulders.....

"ha meher mein tumse sabh kuch bathaoongha.....par yaha nahi....hum kahi aur chalthe hai....."told a sobbing heer wipng her tears.....

that's all for today guys......stay tunned and forgive for all mistakes.....and plsss plsssss reply😊