FF-MISTAKE part 8 p:10 - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
#31
Oooooohh!!!! dum dum dum (giggling)!!!
Can't wait for the next chapter!!! Never liked cliffhangers!!!
Premeer staying in the same house!!! (gasp) what hoing to happen now!!! lol
hope you update soon because i can't wait!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32

annea its superb.poor heer...its vry vry vry interesting.plz plz plz continue soooon.

hey😊 glad u stopped crying alwys give us ur sweeet 😛smile....

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Posted: 16 years ago
#33
hey great part wounder wt preet and meher ask heer and prem
so he had prem in her heart wow interesting
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

Oooooohh!!!! dum dum dum (giggling)!!!

Can't wait for the next chapter!!! Never liked cliffhangers!!!
Premeer staying in the same house!!! (gasp) what hoing to happen now!!! lol
hope you update soon because i can't wait!!!!

yes i will update soon.....😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: sugi77

annea its superb.poor heer...its vry vry vry interesting.plz plz plz continue soooon.

hey😊 glad u stopped crying alwys give us ur sweeet 😛smile....

thnx dear....and here😊....these r for u.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: zaibun

hey great part wounder wt preet and meher ask heer and prem

so she had prem in her heart wow interesting

stay tunned dear😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37

You updated!!

aww this is so cute!! plz update soon!!
so can't wait
Great job
-Sadi*
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: sadizzle

You updated!!

aww this is so cute!! plz update soon!!
so can't wait
Great job
-Sadi*

thnx dear..😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#39
part 5:
"prem bhaiyya ...kya mein aapse ek baath poochu????????"asked meher with a totally confused face.....
prem had expected this question from her.....he gave an approving smile......
"bhaiiyaa....sach bolo...aap didi ko keise janthi ho??? aap sirf uski clssmate the ya phir...???"asked meher....with great expectation to get the truth....
prem gave a gotcha smile and replied....
"hey siily.....she was...."but he was interupted by someone from behind..........
"PREM?????"yelled an shocked ash ......
prem was about to reply when meher interupted by telling
"ash di????app yaha...heer di ne nahi bathaya tha ki aap aaj anevale hai......"told and irritated meher....
it was the second time she was interepted from knowing the truth.....
"ha meher.....voh kya hai ki meine usse nahi bathaya tha...."
"prem tum yaha kya kar rahi ho....i mean tum...."asked a tottally confused ash....
"voh mein apni parivar ki saath aayi hu.....mein nahi jaanthi thi ki heer yaha hai....."told prem with a naughty smile.........
"didi aap janthi hai prem bhaiyya aur uski parivar yaha ek haftha rahne vali hu....."told meher just to see ash's expression changing......
ash stood there like a statue for a while.......and suddenly exploded..."KYA?....i mean very good......veise meher....heer kaha hai......???"
"didi preet aur veera ko fields dikhane keliye gaya..."replied meher.....
prem was listening to the conversation with a smile playing on his lips......"this game is gonna be intresting...."thought prem....
at the same time.....
"heer di kya mein aapse kuch pooch saktha hu???????"asked preet....
heer was getting more and more nervous....but no....she won't allow her nervousness to rule over her....not this time at least......she took all her courage and passed and appoving smile.....
"di kya aap voh heer hai jisne bhaiyya ko chot diya tha....i mean pb ne kaha ki ek heer ne kiya tha ...isiliye..."asked a worried preet....
heer was rooted....she was not able to move from the position......"oh man!!!did he tell everything to preet??"she thought....
she somehow managed to reply....
"kya ....tum sabkuch jaanthi ho???"
"poora nahi balki kuch toh janthi hu....ek minute...iska mathlab voh aap hi hai????????...oh god !!!! didi ab toh aapko koi nahi bacha sakthi....plss didi dont stay near to him.......he was waiting for an oppurtunity....."
told a tensed preet....
withing this small time he found a sister in heer and so did heer........
she was taken back by his brotherly concern.......
"tum chintha math karo preet.....mein jaanthi hu ki kya karna hai...ab chalo dher hoghayi hai.....veera ko bhi bhulao......"
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they reached home almost at the same time......prem passed a look to heer...in turn she gave back a dirty look....
they moved inside .......teji was talking to gayathri.......prem was waiting for an oppurtunity to get heer all alone.....and ha he got an idea.........
he moved towards his mother and asked..."ma..voh mujhe washroom jaana tha...per mein nahi janthi ki washroom kaha hai....."he told it louder so that teji can hear it......
"are ek minute beta.....heeeerrr....sara idhar aao...."yelled teji .....
heer was sure that prem was cooking something inside his small brain.......
"kya bath hai ma???????"asked heer.......
"beta sara prem ko washroom toh dikhado....."told teji and continued her conversation with gayathri.....
heer stood there triying to digest what she had heard now......and looked at prem who was smiling at her......
that's all for today guys......stay tunned and forgive all mistakes....and plssss plssss reply😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#40
hey dear ur ff is very nice....i read it today...n rele its awsum...i wud love to read more n more...u rvery nice...well imagining prem in angry looks for heer is now lil easier after the epis...hehe...ur ff is very interesting....

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