FF-MISTAKE part 8 p:10

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annea

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Posted: 16 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: pooji123456789
hey
i just read all ur parts today
awesum update
really goood
prem a cheater
do cont sooon....

i'll do it as sooon as possible😊

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annea

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Posted: 16 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: -Shika-

i just caught up with all your parts and i must say that your ff is really amazing. It has a really nice twist to it. I hope you update soon!

luv,

shika

i'll dear😊

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annea

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Posted: 16 years ago

#63

part 7:

prem was damn shocked at the moment he saw meher wathing at them......he was sure that this time meher is gonna know the truth......so his plan for changing the story will surely be a flop.......he felt angry to himself.......

"meher hum ash ki ghar chalthi hai....mein vaha se tumse sabkuch bathaoongha...."told heer triying to look normal.....

"tik hai di...per hum yaha se jaayenghe keise?????"asked a confused meher.......

"are tum chintha kyu karthi ho...mein hoona...."came a voice frm behind......yes it's ash....

"ash....tum???????.."told heer triying to suppress her tears......

"are heer....kithni baar kaha hai tumse ki tum is tara toot na jaao....tumhari majboori ka galat isthimal karna prem ko achi tarah aatha hai....."told an annoyed ash...and continued"heer tum uski saath is tarah toot jaaye toh uski kaam aasan ho jaaonghi...."

"ha tum teek kehrahi ho.....mein ab se eisa behave nahi karoongha ...pakka..."told heer with a sly smile......

meher stood there with a tottaly confused manner......

in the hall....

"maa....mujhe ash ki ghar jaana hai...kuch zarrori kaam se....toh sochthi hu ki meher ko bhi sath le jaao...."told heer.....

prem was surprised to see her this side....there is no shade of shock in her face....she was smiling cutely even after the incident....

his thougts where interepted by teji....

"par beta...yaha guest aaya hai....tum dhono jaaonghi toh ....kam se kam meher ko yaha choddo"told teji....

"nahi ma voh kya hai ki agar meher nahi aaye toh mujhe akela vapas aana padegha....."told heer

"par.."teji was interupted by gayathri...."nahi teji usse jane do...isme konsi badi baath hai???"

"thnkyu aunti....maa mein jaldhi aaonghi....baii"telling that heer ash and meher left the place.....

ash's house....

"meher....tumhe yaad hai na humhari collague ki pehli din mere aur ek ladke ki beech mein ek ladayi huyi thi....."

"ha di koi rahul????"told meher with an anxious face.....

"ha....rahul.....prem juneja ki best friend......"

flashback...

"are rahul ye tumhe kya hooghaya??"asked a dashing young man....yes guys it's our prem......heartthromb of the collage....girls run over him.......

"are pj ...ab mein kya bathao tumse.....humhari collague mein do nayi students aayi hai.....two hot girls.....usmein se ek bohut beautiful hai.......mein usse flirting karne ki koshish ki sur usne....yeh dekho meri chehra.....thapad mar diya yaar..."told a dissapointed rahul....

"voh thapad dekhne ki layik thi....he he he..."told another guy of tht gang.....

prem aur rahul bahut ghareeb thi aur prem ko yeh kabhi bardast nahi hogha ki kisine uski dost par haath udaye.....

prem was fuming with anger....and hearing their frnds making fun of rahul he bursted out....

"shut up u guys.......how dare u make fun of him....yeh sab us ladki ki vaja se hua he......tum chintha math kar rahul.....iska badla toh mein use saroor dhongha....."told prem with a naughty glint in his eyes....

that's all for today guy's.....stay tunned and forgive for all the mistakes......and plsss plss reply.....

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Sadia87

@Sadia87

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Posted: 16 years ago

#64

oh no you cut it off at the good part!! lol

really good update

so prem's angry at heer because of that idiot rahul!??! -ughh!..lol

can't wait to see what happens next

plz continue soon

ASAP!

Thanx

-Sadi*

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sugii

@sugii

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Posted: 16 years ago

#65

wow! grt 😃twist. i luvvvvved it.ur ff is vry vry interesting.can't wait plzzzzzzzzzzzz continu asap

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annea

@annea

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Posted: 16 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: sadizzle
oh no you cut it off at the good part!! lol
really good update

so prem's angry at heer because of that idiot rahul!??! -ughh!..lol

can't wait to see what happens next

plz continue soon

ASAP!

Thanx

-Sadi*

i will continue it soon😳

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annea

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Posted: 16 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: sugi77

wow! grt 😃twist. i luvvvvved it.ur ff is vry vry interesting.can't wait plzzzzzzzzzzzz continu asap

thnx dear😊...and i will continue it soon😛

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Maddy

@blackdaughter

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Posted: 16 years ago

#68

Hey good one!!!

Go Heer, you show him!!! Ash is right, if she acts like she is affected then uska kuch nahi hone wala!!!!!

I hope she gives Prem the shock of his life!!!!

Rahuk deserved that slap, i bet it wasn't even harmless flirting!!!! *stomping my foot, being stubborn here* lol

Great update and i hope you update soon again!!!

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annea

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Posted: 16 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: zaibun
hey great update keep it up

thnx dear😊

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annea

@annea

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Posted: 16 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: blackdaughter
Hey good one!!!

Go Heer, you show him!!! Ash is right, if she acts like she is affected then uska kuch nahi hone wala!!!!!

I hope she gives Prem the shock of his life!!!!

Rahul deserved that slap, i bet it wasn't even harmless flirting!!!! *stomping my foot, being stubborn here* lol

Great update and i hope you update soon again!!!

i'll update it soon😳

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