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Posted: 16 years ago
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CHARACTER SKETCH:

PREM JUNEJA: THE HOTTEST GUY IN THE COLLAGUE....GIRLS R READY TO DIE FOR HIM.....HE DOES NOT BELIVE IN LOVE.....HE CONSIDER GIRLS AS USE AND DUMB SUBSTANCE.....
HEER MANN: A SWEET BUT MODERN GIRL.....EVEN THOUGH SHE IS MODERN SHE IS READY TO DIE FOR MORALE VALUES...
MEHER MANN: A FUM LVING SISTER OF HEER......IS 2 YRS YOUNGER THAN HEER...
ASH: BEST FRND OF HEER....SHE IS HEER'S STRENGTH AND SUPPORT....
PREET JUNEJA: BEST FRND AND BRO OF PREM.....BUT UNLIKE HIM HE DONT DO PRANKS WITH GIRLS
OTHERS:
JUNEJA FAMILY:
LALIT JUNEJA
GAYATHRI JUNEJA
HARMAN JUNEJA
VEERA JUNEJA
MANN FAMILY:
BALRAJ MANN
TEJI MANN
KULRAJ MANN
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice one..
pls o not post everything in caps..it is considered as shouting
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice one sounds interesting cant w8 for part 1
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Posted: 16 years ago
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aww cute!!
plz do continue soon!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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sounds good

post the first part soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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part 1
"maa di kaha hai??"
"are voh toh ash ki ghar gayi hai.....todi dher mein aa jayeega...aur ha meher sara pappa koh bulao..."
"tik hai ma"
(maher a bubbly girl of 22 )
ash's house:
a girl with the most innocent face and other with a bold face chatting in the hall...
"tum hi bathao ash...mein kya karu??????jaha bhi dekhu uski chehra samne aathi hai......"
"heer......tumhe kithni baar samjaya hai.....he was a spoilt brat....why r u waisting ur time by thinking about him??????"
she sat there with a pillow in her lap and tasting the tea...and offered one to heer
silence spred there for a while...ash broked the silence as she can't tolerate it"are heer tum kuch bolthi kyun nahi...tumhe pata hai na ki mujhe silence pasand nahi hai"
"are ab mein kya bolu....mujhe ek ajeeb sa feeling aa rah hai......i loved him soo much....but he!!...he just wanted.."she starts weeping by cuppping her face on her hand
"are heer tum ro rahi ho?are uskeliye rorehi ho joh tumhare baare mein sara bhi nahi sochthi....he just considerd u as a time pass.....or ha did u hear that....tumse break up hone ke baad usne 4 aur girlfriends banaya!!!"
"WHAT?ek hafte mein voh 4 aur hgf's banaya.....how disgusting??"
ash kept the cup on the table and continued"tumhe pata hai ...sirf tumne uski chaal se bach paya hai aur baki sab toh ....tum janthi hu nah..isiliye kehraha hu....tum use bhul ja...aur ha.. mujhe meri purani heer chahiye joh kisi bhi haalat mein haar nahi manthi hai"
"ha ash tum shayad teek keh rahi ho mujhe us stupid ki baare mein sochkar apni waqt barbaad nahi karna chhiye...ups it's already late...mein jarahi hu baiii"
"baai heer..and be happy always and forget everything"
sorry guys i know it's small....but it's my 1st ff and i really dont know how t write it...so please forgive me..i will sent the next topic after 5+ replies
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Posted: 16 years ago
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no replies????????😭 🤢
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Posted: 16 years ago
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😭
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey hun waiting for nxt part sorrie ma account wont open at home so wen i saw it at home i couldnt reallie reply bck
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thnx jamune....for replying....😊

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